Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
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- tripaddict
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Hmmm... I agree with the comment about the kicks, and I also noticed some pretty nasty clipping in the beginning of the track. Are you sidechaining and EQing every sound to a different mixer track? The sample works nicely though, and the song has a pretty good overall structure.
All in all a good start, it just needs a bit more polish and mixing and it'll be sick. Good work
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im gonna try check the levels later ... someone's already mentioned the eq i think i know what the problem is im gonna have a look at sorting it out later .... there's no compression on the master and not much on the drums i have a feeling its a kick drum causing the problems ... will check none of the synths r clippingNeonOrdnance wrote:Hmmm... I agree with the comment about the kicks, and I also noticed some pretty nasty clipping in the beginning of the track. Are you sidechaining and EQing every sound to a different mixer track? The sample works nicely though, and the song has a pretty good overall structure.
All in all a good start, it just needs a bit more polish and mixing and it'll be sick. Good work
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
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This one is coming up on a future release called 'Short Circuit EP', so look out for that!
Soundcloud comments are most appreciated
Thank you!
This one is coming up on a future release called 'Short Circuit EP', so look out for that!
Soundcloud comments are most appreciated
Thank you!
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Some chilled dub meant for those times when you're jammin with a cup of tea and a spliff in hand. any comments or feedback will be returned. promise.
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
I like that track, the only thing is i think its too bad u didnt use the percussions in the intro in the track itself, i think it would have complemented the chopped amen nicelywirez wrote:Soundcloud
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
HeretiK - Production seems to be on point. Love the chilled out wobble that comes in towards the end.
Redjuan - I'm into it. Kick seems a bit too punchy and weighted for the sort of vibe you seem to be going for though?
Noctonal - Your drums seem to be drowning everything out and the first of the two bass tones you use doesn't seem to sit at the right volume either. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but thats my two cents on it.
Heres a new, glitched out, melodic one from me.
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Redjuan - I'm into it. Kick seems a bit too punchy and weighted for the sort of vibe you seem to be going for though?
Noctonal - Your drums seem to be drowning everything out and the first of the two bass tones you use doesn't seem to sit at the right volume either. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but thats my two cents on it.
Heres a new, glitched out, melodic one from me.
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
New one from me. Not sure if im going to keep the sample in it.
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Posting up the other one i did as well as i only got a a small amout of feedback (thanks gravity! Going to work on what you said).
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Feedback time (listening on headphones sry)
Arktrix - Love the melody, the pad complements it really well. Maybe take the hats out at the break around 2:30, sounded kinda weird to me having them in there then stopping for a bit. Otherwise i like the drums. All up i really like the style of the track.
Wirez - Cool vocal sample. Nice percussion. I dont really like the fadeout on the synth before the break, maybe lowpass it out, but wicked drop. The choir is nice aswell. Great work with the amen, kept it nice and interesting.
Heretik - Great track! I like everything! Going to listen to this again
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Posting up the other one i did as well as i only got a a small amout of feedback (thanks gravity! Going to work on what you said).
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Feedback time (listening on headphones sry)
Arktrix - Love the melody, the pad complements it really well. Maybe take the hats out at the break around 2:30, sounded kinda weird to me having them in there then stopping for a bit. Otherwise i like the drums. All up i really like the style of the track.
Wirez - Cool vocal sample. Nice percussion. I dont really like the fadeout on the synth before the break, maybe lowpass it out, but wicked drop. The choir is nice aswell. Great work with the amen, kept it nice and interesting.
Heretik - Great track! I like everything! Going to listen to this again
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
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Will post feedback in about 15 minutes on three tracks.
I've uploaded this before but hopefully it's a better version.
Will post feedback in about 15 minutes on three tracks.
I've uploaded this before but hopefully it's a better version.
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
yo,was likin the experimental sound at the begining and actually the quite experimental sound throughout but the vocal is out of time and i think some other elements of the tune,sounds like you have the right idea yet it just falls upon being out of time,which is quite offputtin,clean it up man and i reckon it'll sound real nice,good ideas thoughjaydot wrote:Soundcloud
Will post feedback in about 15 minutes on three tracks.
I've uploaded this before but hopefully it's a better version.
feedback on anything on my soundcloud would be sweet man,peace.J
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
I'm new here, I've just started getting into dubstep, though I've been home producing stuff for a couple of years at this stage. This is my first attempt at a dubstep track. Hope you enjoy/tolerate it. some more stuff over at http://www.myspace.com/hipsteryouthh
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
@redjuan for http://soundcloud.com/conek4/cafe
sounds like the track has some good potential, maybe a bit of expansion or the parts or adding a new part. pretty good though.
Going to feedback some more tracks after my dinner. Misread the first post, sorry for not feedbacking before posting a track.
sounds like the track has some good potential, maybe a bit of expansion or the parts or adding a new part. pretty good though.
Going to feedback some more tracks after my dinner. Misread the first post, sorry for not feedbacking before posting a track.
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
shit im quite guilty of thatchocolatecoffin wrote: Going to feedback some more tracks after my dinner. Misread the first post, sorry for not feedbacking before posting a track.
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Hey guys, just finished this one. Any feedback/ soundcloud comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks guys!
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
arktrix wrote:HeretiK - Production seems to be on point. Love the chilled out wobble that comes in towards the end.
Redjuan - I'm into it. Kick seems a bit too punchy and weighted for the sort of vibe you seem to be going for though?
Noctonal - Your drums seem to be drowning everything out and the first of the two bass tones you use doesn't seem to sit at the right volume either. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but thats my two cents on it.
Heres a new, glitched out, melodic one from me.
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ahh only just seeeng this now,thanks man,yeh i get what u mean about it,prob gona go back to it and redo the bassline,i.e make it more softer and tone down the kick,thanks for the feedback,your a gent.im not at my gaffe at the minute but shall leave feedback on your track later when i get back to mine.cheers
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6nR_5nYlDw
Krypton and Chrispy - Team Killer
Krypton and Chrispy - Team Killer
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
It's got big potential to be a grimey as fuck dirty track (which it is) but it needs a few edits to bring out the roughness. The top of the bass needs to be allowed to breath with a few more high frequencies to accentuate the 'grainy' feel.gabbo wrote:New one from me. Not sure if im going to keep the sample in it.
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You have an issue between your sub bass and your kick, I would advise high passing the kick a little bit higher and maybe layering a kick with more higher frequency punch to help it pull through the mix better.
Other than those issues, it's a big sounding track. Gives me hints of a Benga and Walsh style sound!
Awesome quotes in the intro, think they could do with a tad of reverb to make them feel more involved with the track, some of them you can hear where they were cut so a long reverb or delay tail would hide that a little.gabbo wrote:Posting up the other one i did as well as i only got a a small amout of feedback (thanks gravity! Going to work on what you said).
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Lovely drop and there forward, enjoyed the chilled vibe of the track, wicked sounds used too!
Hehe, there's a very valid reason for this, but I won't go into it...gabbo wrote:I dont really like the fadeout on the synth before the break, maybe lowpass it out, but wicked drop.
Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Well played mate brilliant track, one thing i would change is to mix up the drums a bit, they are very repatative, but the wobble leading the track is brilliant. good work !KryptonDubstep wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E6nR_5nYlDw
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Good job with both of the tracks they are both very calming, and i love the sample used in the second track, i found it actually grabbed me towards the track wanted to hear more, i could see myself listening to that alot ! The first track was also very good, but i found it had to much of a constant pace and needed a switch up, i dont think it needs a heavy drop but maybe somthing just to keep me intested a bit longer, good work !gabbo wrote:New one from me. Not sure if im going to keep the sample in it.
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Posting up the other one i did as well as i only got a a small amout of feedback (thanks gravity! Going to work on what you said).
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Feedback time (listening on headphones sry)
Arktrix - Love the melody, the pad complements it really well. Maybe take the hats out at the break around 2:30, sounded kinda weird to me having them in there then stopping for a bit. Otherwise i like the drums. All up i really like the style of the track.
Wirez - Cool vocal sample. Nice percussion. I dont really like the fadeout on the synth before the break, maybe lowpass it out, but wicked drop. The choir is nice aswell. Great work with the amen, kept it nice and interesting.
Heretik - Great track! I like everything! Going to listen to this again
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Re: Full tracks for feedback-- MARCH 2010
Im pretty new to making dubstep ! I have Dub Reggae background and have progressed into making Dubstep... Anyway heres my first 2 trys. Thanks alot im keen to know what you guys think.
"Craggle-Mutually Assured Distraction"
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"Craggle-Breather"
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"Craggle-Mutually Assured Distraction"
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"Craggle-Breather"
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