Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

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masetrax
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by masetrax » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:44 am

http://www.soundcloud.com/greenback

Basically a few loops, semi-arranged. Thinking I need to mix it up a bit, especially the pad-work.

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by WeBang » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:19 am

Here is a new one I am working on. Any negative comments always appreciated. oh and positive lol

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by WeBang » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:21 am

smooth......at first I was like hmmm....then as it came along I dug the smoothness on it. not a bad start. maybe beef up the sub just a tad
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:42 am

aftee wrote:Soundcloud

Just a rough draft of something.
strangley i really like this

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by deadly_habit » Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:51 am

https://www.yousendit.com/download/bFFP ... Yk5jR0E9PQ
tune i never finished but people seem to like it so have fun
feedback will be given once i finish this new vexd lp

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Pixxx » Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:41 am

Oi! Tell me what you think, if i should put it on the dumpster or if i should continue http://www.speedyshare.com/files/21689058/mmmm.mp3 :oops:

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Imperial » Tue Mar 30, 2010 12:42 pm

EZ ALL!!!!
My names Imperial and i posted the drumstep version of this song i made called 'Shapeshifta' a couple of days ago with promise of the dubstep one coming out a few days after
enough of that ill let the music do the talking; any comments/constructive cristism are much apprieciated :)
safe x

DUBSTEP VERSION

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by bmills » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:52 pm

I definitely love the groove in the drumstep version, I've always called this bpm style glitch-hop but doesn't matter :). Get it mastered and i will buy

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by bmills » Tue Mar 30, 2010 1:53 pm

Hey guys! Check this one out and please leave feedback cause I do the same :)

negative and postivite please!

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thanks in advance

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by CollisionCourse » Tue Mar 30, 2010 4:46 pm

soulshynchyld wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:
CollisionCourse wrote:@ wag
i liked the intro, thought the hat could of been of been different, but its a minor thing in terms of the drums since you can only hear them on the intro. the sample is sick, the drop is heavy but i think the synth on the bassline should by lowered a bit to really make you shit yourself. also i think theres a bit too much compression, everything sounds a bit cramped. other than though its very decent, big up

@ soulshynchyld
loving the intro, the sounds work very smoothly together. but i really think you should of gone a different way with the drums, the pattern itself is ok but you should of maybe used some reverbed hats and a clap instead of a snare. didnt feel the drop, the bassline seems a bit gimmicky but the drums are funky. the outro is smooth but again the drums really dont suit it i dont think. just my opinion. maybe you should have different drums for the intro and those heavier drums for the drop. thats what id do, but again thats just me :)

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the intro drums are sick, vocal sounds cut in nicely. drop is oh my fucking god my face has melted. that would absolutely destroy the dancefloor. second drop is a bit too violent for me, thats just me though. overall yeah its heavy, big up.

heres mine im still working on it, let me know what you guys think, peace!
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massive sub level bro!! im luvn it...but a little too much goin on down thea. this is wea i find myself goin alot at the mo. duno real what else to say, this is guna be off the hook wen its done ay.!!!think this track made me realise something ive bin looking for!!i miss reason abit....i used to be able to exploit those dirty sub kicks hard...still got it somewhere, install & rewire to logic is in order i think.chea.

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thansk man ill get working on the sub, speakers are playing up so i didnt even realise. safe

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by dustyspeakers » Tue Mar 30, 2010 5:57 pm

Here is a couple of Chill Ambient tunes im working on at the moment. feedback would be amazing.

Thanks

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by dustyspeakers » Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:08 pm

[quote="bmills"]Hey guys! Check this one out and please leave feedback cause I do the same :)

negative and postivite please!

Soundcloud

thanks in advance[/quote

Hi bmills, I like your beat, It sounds well made and im feeling the bass!I recommend using some pads or something cos it sounds a bit dry.
other than that big tune. give us a shout when finished

cool

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by dustyspeakers » Tue Mar 30, 2010 6:08 pm

[quote="bmills"]Hey guys! Check this one out and please leave feedback cause I do the same :)

negative and postivite please!

Soundcloud

thanks in advance[/quote

Hi bmills, I like your beat, It sounds well made and im feeling the bass!I recommend using some pads or something cos it sounds a bit dry.
other than that big tune. give us a shout when finished

cool

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:05 pm

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im stilllll trying my hands at the midrange im getting better and better lol

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by graftek » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:28 pm

Forgot that I had a soundcloud account...
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Bassmagnet » Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:45 pm

We Bang wrote:Here is a new one I am working on. Any negative comments always appreciated. oh and positive lol

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Piano needs some variation, but I love this shit, looking forward to it being finished :)

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Bassmagnet » Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:48 pm

tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
im stilllll trying my hands at the midrange im getting better and better lol
Good work Trip, im digging this one as well. Midrange is kicking my ass atm too, but looks like you've got it :)

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Bassmagnet » Tue Mar 30, 2010 10:50 pm

Recently learned how to use session view in ableton (I know I slack hard) and playing around with audio instead of midi.
Here's the unfinished result :)
I love - and + feedback.
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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Tue Mar 30, 2010 11:07 pm

Bassmagnet wrote:Recently learned how to use session view in ableton (I know I slack hard) and playing around with audio instead of midi.
Here's the unfinished result :)
I love - and + feedback.
im really liking this man/ im running on some shitty headfones so idk if u even have a sub :( but if u dont this song could use a real huge sub bassline under what u got. only problem is that all the sounds are nice but they need to meld together or something idk they somehow seem so seperated but maybe thats just me

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Re: Works-in-Progress for feedback--MARCH 2010

Post by Bassmagnet » Tue Mar 30, 2010 11:22 pm

tripwire22 wrote:
Bassmagnet wrote:Recently learned how to use session view in ableton (I know I slack hard) and playing around with audio instead of midi.
Here's the unfinished result :)
I love - and + feedback.
im really liking this man/ im running on some shitty headfones so idk if u even have a sub :( but if u dont this song could use a real huge sub bassline under what u got. only problem is that all the sounds are nice but they need to meld together or something idk they somehow seem so seperated but maybe thats just me
I see what you mean now with the sounds being separated. What part were you talking about though? I'll get to the sub once I have most of the bassline down :) Thanks for digging anyways brotha.

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