I enjoyed this tune a lot man - the synth progression was sounding very sad and dark and I liked the way you cut it up as well. I also liked how the song kept changing, but not too much to the point where it didn't flow - it kept me interested throughout, nice one!karmacazee wrote:^^^^ Awesome drum line, no real criticism, just like the tune![]()
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edit: @ Gravity. Nice dark tune man, really rolls well. To be fair your production is top notch too mate. Sound really well balanced from where I'm sat.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
[quote="gravity"]mind if i re-post mine, only went up a couple of days ago...
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damn this tune was sick! i liked how it has an ambient/atmospheric element to it while still being aggressive. the production on it is nice a clean too - could I get a 320 man?
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damn this tune was sick! i liked how it has an ambient/atmospheric element to it while still being aggressive. the production on it is nice a clean too - could I get a 320 man?
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Mmmmm, yeah man, feelin that. Only thing I'd recommend is a tiny little bit of gating on the hats to tighten them whilst keeping the swing in tact. And maybe a lttle saturation to help them cut through.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
for fucks sake computer has died on me twice whilst trying to write this so im gonna be brief this time.
karmacazee: feeling this tune, second drop is wicked, computer gamey sort of noises work really well. main criticisms are that its not fat enough, and i think i spied some fuity loops samples in there too
mistayif: yeah was into this one... nice depth throughout, and good driving beat. i thought the 16th-hihat sort of percussiony thing was a bit relentless, would probably work better in the background. also the snare sounded a bit loose to me. nice mix though.
somatix: checked out watching our planet implode. the bass at the beginning sounded like it had too much release (the notes clashed when they changed) overall mix sounded liked it had been squashed too much, wa quite muddy and distorted, and it affected the definition of the various elements. its a shame because there were some nice ideas in there and it seemed to keep itself interesting throughout.
karmacazee: feeling this tune, second drop is wicked, computer gamey sort of noises work really well. main criticisms are that its not fat enough, and i think i spied some fuity loops samples in there too

mistayif: yeah was into this one... nice depth throughout, and good driving beat. i thought the 16th-hihat sort of percussiony thing was a bit relentless, would probably work better in the background. also the snare sounded a bit loose to me. nice mix though.
somatix: checked out watching our planet implode. the bass at the beginning sounded like it had too much release (the notes clashed when they changed) overall mix sounded liked it had been squashed too much, wa quite muddy and distorted, and it affected the definition of the various elements. its a shame because there were some nice ideas in there and it seemed to keep itself interesting throughout.
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Tweak it til it hrtz
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Did you mean Fruity samples, as in fruity loops? 'cause I'm an ableton mangravity wrote: karmacazee: feeling this tune, second drop is wicked, computer gamey sort of noises work really well. main criticisms are that its not fat enough, and i think i spied some fuity loops samples in there too![]()


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Finished this track now looking for some feedback cheers.
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This is killer! Your breaks are great! I miss the 90's as wellkarmacazee wrote:^^^^ Awesome drum line, no real criticism, just like the tune![]()
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edit: @ Gravity. Nice dark tune man, really rolls well. To be fair your production is top notch too mate. Sound really well balanced from where I'm sat.

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Flows very well, but I am not into that kind of hip hop so much. The drop wasn't as heavy as I thought it was going to be, maybe give it a bit more push.xstrizle wrote:Finished this track now looking for some feedback cheers.
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Been making this one for a bit. Could be mixed a bit more, but I like where it has gone, pretty much finished with this one.
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pretty sick song, only thing i can say is the bass feels like it lacks a tad bit in mid tone. otherwise mint!
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sounds pretty good! i like the fx and stuff throughout the entire song. good shit!Bassmagnet wrote:Been making this one for a bit. Could be mixed a bit more, but I like where it has gone, pretty much finished with this one.
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the vocals are super off i feel.. the synth leading up to the build up throws the vox off. just my opinion. and i agree about to the drop. try eqing stuff to make it sit better in the mix.xstrizle wrote:Finished this track now looking for some feedback cheers.
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this is a grime track ive been workin for the past few days. i feel like ive reached some pinacle point with the track.. although i feel like its not totally finished yet all of its elements are in place. and kind of feedback would be nice!
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Tightness, trying to get my friend to play this at his next gig hehe. Not sure if I want this or an older track to be played.cleanexecution wrote:sounds pretty good! i like the fx and stuff throughout the entire song. good shit!Bassmagnet wrote:Been making this one for a bit. Could be mixed a bit more, but I like where it has gone, pretty much finished with this one.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
Solid work here Sharmaji, will have a listen to this months tracks once I get back to my main.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010
yeah meant fruityloops samples, the main kick and clap. they are very similar anyhow...karmacazee wrote:Did you mean Fruity samples, as in fruity loops? 'cause I'm an ableton mangravity wrote: karmacazee: feeling this tune, second drop is wicked, computer gamey sort of noises work really well. main criticisms are that its not fat enough, and i think i spied some fuity loops samples in there too![]()
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Do you mean the mixdown doesn't sound fat enough, of just some elements in the track need adding to or something?

yeah the overall mix could be a bit chunkier imo, but by beefing up some of the elements (mainly the drums really) you'd be most of the way there i reckon.
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