My second attempt at dubstep? feedback pretty please?

[Kris-One]

been muckin about with ableton for about a year now, too ADD to stick to a specific genre so im not really all that good at in any particular category but more like decent in a few of them? anyways, today i decided to make dubstep and its only second dub joint ive ever tried makin, the first was perty bad, this one is interesting to say the least....

Soundcloud

[dark0]

sick man. first 40 secs are the 1. not keen on wobbly bit.

[Kris-One]

sick man. first 40 secs are the 1. not keen on wobbly bit.

you know, i completely agree... i was just in a raw ass mood when i made this so it turned from crunky to grimey... i need to figure how to not go there.

[DJ Vous]

I completely agree also. The wobbly part has some ill wobblage in it, but the section itself is missing "the driving force". Something needs to push the listener into motion there while the wobble keeps it interesting. Good job! I'd like to hear your tracks in other styles as well.

[Kris-One]

I completely agree also. The wobbly part has some ill wobblage in it, but the section itself is missing "the driving force". Something needs to push the listener into motion there while the wobble keeps it interesting. Good job! I'd like to hear your tracks in other styles as well.

spot on feedback my man thank you. and if you wanna hear my other stuff just check out my soundcloud. but whats on there isnt even like a quarter of my work... i have like 20 tracks all maybe 15% done hah... im so ADD

[dark0]

yeah for real man. i used to do that a lot too (tracks endin up all grimey n shit) jus keep it real. sexy. nar mean?

check out my soundcloud let me know what u think an follow me. 320's if u need safe G

Darks

[Jonathan_Blaze]

good start mate

[Kris-One]

right on thaks fellas, and word up darks, dig yo shit, some 320's would be proper... id love to drop plasma cannon

anyways so i went ahead and did something completely different but it still ended up being on the rawer side... i guess i just love the grime too much. lemme know if yall think this was a good change.

same link up there ^^^