WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

[ManyMore]

Real short intro/idea for a song i might develop


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think it might go anywhere ? ideas on improvements and stuff would be much appreciated

Very nice dark wobbles! I like it. Try to make it little better it could be good track

[ManyMore]

jus started makin this.

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Very very good!!! Have it big atmosphere!

[ManyMore]

This is a little experiment with house and dubstep.
It's in progress now so it wil be better.
Thanks for comment

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[Gombles]

Real short intro/idea for a song i might develop


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think it might go anywhere ? ideas on improvements and stuff would be much appreciated

Very nice dark wobbles! I like it. Try to make it little better it could be good track

cheers for the feedback mate

[dubaholix]

This is a little something im working on , im still new to production so go easy but would love some feedback / advice, cheers.

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[styv]

Pretty new to production and this forum, here's something I been working on the last couple of days, feedback and any tips would be awesome.

Cheers

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[The Phantom Banger]

Pretty new to production and this forum, here's something I been working on the last couple of days, feedback and any tips would be awesome.

Cheers

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start of the song really draws me in, start to get excited but then you loose me at the drop. The synth at the drop seems to have all the highs cut off? I think the thing the drop needs is a bit more enegry/ Im confuisng myself now but it does sound pretty cool so far

[The Phantom Banger]

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With this track i think the kick needs to be alot more prominent in the mix, also the clap sounds like a really stock clap. maybe you could layer it up with some other drums or add some effects or something. The synth does sound really cool though, the starts of a great track.

[The Phantom Banger]

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[styv]

Pretty new to production and this forum, here's something I been working on the last couple of days, feedback and any tips would be awesome.

Cheers

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start of the song really draws me in, start to get excited but then you loose me at the drop. The synth at the drop seems to have all the highs cut off? I think the thing the drop needs is a bit more enegry/ Im confuisng myself now but it does sound pretty cool so far

I know what you mean about the energy, something I been struggling with on this track. I think it needs those drums to start fully a when it drops and some other stuff to get it moving. Cheers for giving it a listen man.

[Rhodrijen]

hello!

first tune i thought was actually worth sharing...

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any feedback would be so great. cheers.

[Gombles]

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With this track i think the kick needs to be alot more prominent in the mix, also the clap sounds like a really stock clap. maybe you could layer it up with some other drums or add some effects or something. The synth does sound really cool though, the starts of a great track.

yh man developed alot since i posted, the clap was a stock thing i used just to get a rhythm down i start with stock shit cause its easier to get the base down without worrying about sounds like, but yh cheers for the tips i'll try adding some effects and shit

[jheart]

almost done with this track. making more variations with drums, and fixing some levels then should be done. any suggestions before i finnish it completely?
anny suggestions would be much appreciated =)

also i just noticed it clips in one spot, that will be fixed =)


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[deadly_habit]

almost done with this track. making more variations with drums, and fixing some levels then should be done. any suggestions before i finnish it completely?
anny suggestions would be much appreciated =)

also i just noticed it clips in one spot, that will be fixed =)


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digging it so far, i'd suggest some variations in the bass sound here and there midrange wise

[deadly_habit]

https://www.yousendit.com/download/bFFO ... VWswTVE9PQ
lastest i started tonight

[Hellomadame]

almost done with this track. making more variations with drums, and fixing some levels then should be done. any suggestions before i finnish it completely?
anny suggestions would be much appreciated =)

also i just noticed it clips in one spot, that will be fixed =)


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digging it so far, i'd suggest some variations in the bass sound here and there midrange wise

First great bass, the melody here is super fun to listen but maybe you should change it from time to time. Maybe have a second pattern alongside your first pattern just to make is less repetitive, or simply change to a lower octave at some point in the tune or anything that could make it sound different.
Otherwise I can see where it could be when it's going to be finished.
Cheers !

[machination]

Pretty new to production and this forum, here's something I been working on the last couple of days, feedback and any tips would be awesome.

Cheers

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start of the song really draws me in, start to get excited but then you loose me at the drop. The synth at the drop seems to have all the highs cut off? I think the thing the drop needs is a bit more enegry/ Im confuisng myself now but it does sound pretty cool so far

I know what you mean about the energy, something I been struggling with on this track. I think it needs those drums to start fully a when it drops and some other stuff to get it moving. Cheers for giving it a listen man.

IMO this track definitely needs something more than just the bassline to take the energy build from the drop. The song completely deflates in its current state, I'd play around with some drums -- mainly a really hard hitting snare and subtle roll of some ancillary percs.

[machination]

almost done with this track. making more variations with drums, and fixing some levels then should be done. any suggestions before i finnish it completely?
anny suggestions would be much appreciated =)

also i just noticed it clips in one spot, that will be fixed =)


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digging it so far, i'd suggest some variations in the bass sound here and there midrange wise

First great bass, the melody here is super fun to listen but maybe you should change it from time to time. Maybe have a second pattern alongside your first pattern just to make is less repetitive, or simply change to a lower octave at some point in the tune or anything that could make it sound different.
Otherwise I can see where it could be when it's going to be finished.
Cheers !

I agree, for this one definitely add in another pattern or two for the melody...maybe play with the quantization of the notes too. Your drums are processed very well, but theres something to be desired in their current state...for me drums really need to carry the energy of the song and keep the listener intrigued with their own variation if the bassline is going to be that static.

[machination]

This is a little something im working on , im still new to production so go easy but would love some feedback / advice, cheers.

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You do a very fine job of building a soundscape here initially, for the style of song you're after you may want to play with extremely long (1 minute plus) progressions of the pads. Or slowly automate other pads in and out.

[machination]

looking for some feedback on these two works in progress guys...thanks in advance!
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