FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- APRIL 2010

[weedcali]

Heres another old one

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[Plasticsun]

BOOM.BOOM.CLAP - Sea Monster

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feedback.. mucho appreciatedo

I like this one alot, really got a good groove to it i think, and the melody is nice and variated, without being too random.
Really punch in those drums also, nice work, the beat gets a bit repetetive maybe you should add some random bleeps and noises to, well you know what they do , but on the other hand you got some really good breaks going on.
I think the synths lacks a bit of.. well i dont know. Punch, they seem a bit flat, and i think also you lack some lowend, it sounds like the track has been hipassed at about 90 hertz or something, i dont find that very attracting. But overall, really nice track mate .

[Plasticsun]

Heres another old one

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i dont know about this one, it gets a bit boring after a while i think, the same samples and patterns all the song through. It just gets to repititive. You could try and change the synth after the drop, and maybe the first drop add some more groove to your drums, pretty standard trick, just keeps the track from getting boring. In the drop it sounds like some of your sounds clash a bit, might be the wobble and the pad, i dont know, but it sounds messy, you ought to clean that up.
overall, okay track, a bit boring, still needs some work i would say. Perhaps you could also add some breaks an use more than two chords. That sounded really arrogant, i wasnt. But two chords.. that just not much variation man... It might just be the synth, i dont know. But it really gets reptitive. Sorry. Just work on the structure man, it could get good, definately!

[Plasticsun]

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This one grooves like hell, the drums are really good man, big ups for them. Feeling. But i think the synths need to live more, theyre quite boring right now, you could give them a bit more aggresive touch, i think that would go well with the melody. You know like Chasing Shadows kind of a thing. But i guess it's a matter of taste really, i just find them a bit weak. you should probably take a look at the composition also, you use the same drum pattern all the way through, you could vary it a bit, or add extra elements, even though it grooves alot already . . Im thinking, maybe you should add some stabs or pads over the drop, or maybe just the second, it gets a bit too dry maybe, i dont know?? But nice track man, i like it alot!

[Plasticsun]

well, i guess its my turn now then .
Finished this a couple of days ago. really oldschool dubby dubstep. offbeat piano and the like. wow... Oh yeah and lots of lots of sub!
Listen and feed me back . You might wanna turn the volume up a bit, havent been mastered yet.
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[jaydot]

@impey: bassline sounds a little quiet? But having said that it's still a fat bassline

@plasticsun: Loving the dubby vibes, nice synth/sub bass

Check this one out guys, track called Original Badboy:

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As someone has said the bass could be a little quieter but apart from that this is my first full track which isn't a remix!

[ParisUK]

@Plus 3: loving both of the tunes, got a real nice vibe in both of them would be nice if they were a little longer though but thats maybe just me.

@Bassmagnet: The tune is the shit, nice builds, beats changes throughout kept me interested. Don’t know about falling asleep to it though kept my head nodding to the end.

heres a few of mine tell me what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/danielbroomhall

[j_one]

@weedcali: Chords sound nice, drums have potential. Not particularly feeling the bass.

@Plasticsun: Love this mate. Very chilled out, instruments work really well together and really nice progression, ending is sick. Great work.

@ParisUK: I like the drums on "Tired of Being Alone", vox is good too. Would have liked some kind of sub in there, think it'd add a lot to the track. Really sick percussion on "Fear". Thought the subtle wobbly bass cheapened it slightly, but nice progression. Nice!

Got a few new ones up but I'll put this one up for feedback:
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[CBK81]

This is my latest. i will not be using this account for long but my first attempt at regestering didnt work. i am Cycle-Ogic. hopefully i can get this sorted out.

Anyways, constructive criticism welcomed here.

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I really like the feel of this one for some reason. It's a good blend of techy and chill. The drums stand out to me as well. Great job!

BOOM.BOOM.CLAP - Sea Monster

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feedback.. mucho appreciatedo

This one is just wicked. Not much more to say than that!

[fassyman]

liking the dub vibes on that track plasticsun nice n chillin

[Hellomadame]

HEY ! So this is my update on this tune I've been tweaking here and there since my post on the ''works in progress''. After making it in a real track I realised it sounded a bit like Borgore since I don't really listen to his stuff I didn't do the track with his style in mind. But yeah anything about effects, things that should be in other places, mixing everything, the BASS istself is greatly appreciated and if you also want feedback I can share my three ears ... yeah. SO THAT'S THE TUNE.
You can also listen to the first version of this tune (not finished) in my signature if you want to make a comparaison. Enjoy.

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[rugged163]

hey there, got a new tune up on soundcloud.
all feedback are appreciated

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[dansu]

nuuuuuu one for ya
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[Hellomadame]

hey there, got a new tune up on soundcloud.
all feedback are appreciated

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Really nice track here ! I thought I heard some pitch automation somewhere and thought it would be fun if you added more or make it more noticeable.

[CBK81]

hey there, got a new tune up on soundcloud.
all feedback are appreciated

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Incredible!

[wabble]

it's business..

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[NationCharly]

hey there, got a new tune up on soundcloud.
all feedback are appreciated

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really cool!

[tripwire22]

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[Imperial]

liking some of the content on here a lot
big up!

little tune ive been working on, which uses a sample from that cringy old man xbox advert- u'll recognize it hopefully

FEEDBACK IS MUCH APPRIECIATED!!!!!

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http://soundcloud.com/imperialdub

[jamez3]

nuuuuuu one for ya
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Realy cool track but (maybe just a pesonal thing) I feel the fact the baseline is so mental and in you face that by the end of the track it gets prety wearing. I think having some kind of non resonant lowpass on it at points to give it a more muffled sound would give it more of a feeling of movement, especialy for the first drop.