WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for APRIL, 2010

[FSTZ]

Here is a new one from me (work in progress)
Any feedback welcome

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good one man!!

love the percs

perfect summer vibe on this

[FSTZ]

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would love to hear something about this and will offer feedback to who ever has my back

wicked tune man!

[tripwire22]

hey guys...

any advice on this???

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well this is different i cant really tell u waht to change cuz nothing sounds wrong but i really cant tell u what u can add either cuz it sounds done lol

[tripwire22]

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just tried my hand at working with a bpm of 150 so let me kno how that works for you

[CBK81]

Can't figure out which of these I want to work on and flesh out.

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[jaydot]

Can't figure out which of these I want to work on and flesh out.

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Definitely the first one imo. The second is filthy but not as good as the first.

@FTSZ: Well that is diffferent indeed as someone has said....interesting

[Imperial]

Can't figure out which of these I want to work on and flesh out.

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Definitely the first one imo. The second is filthy but not as good as the first.

@FTSZ: Well that is diffferent indeed as someone has said....interesting

both of these have a lot of potential i feel; with a lot of work i reckon at least one of these could be a good track, my only critism is that its the same sort of sound everyone uses, u should try and find your own style and make your tunes more original

other than that good job, im looking forward to see wat u can do with these

in contrast heres a little tune ive been working on, it could be better in places but i think its alrite overall

feedback is much apprieciated and constructive critism too

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BIG UP!

[jaydot]

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Little clip of a track I'm working on at the minute, I'll give some more feedback in a second.

[bizmusic]

@ jaydot: I like the concept, sounds spooky but coool! I would like to hear bit more clarity in the drums but quite cool and different!! big up!

@ Imperial: I really like the idea and does sound good, everything is all there like the bass's the vocal sample etc. Think it needs all gelling together though, some decent EQing and mixing to everything to give it together will make a huge track!

@ CBK: Both sound sick! really like them both, finish them!

@Zarban: Really feeling that old school kinda vibe, like the samples as well. nice tune! again finish it!

Heres my track...all sorts of Feedback is welcome! just a minor sample...

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[tobo]

my first track ever;
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would love any feedback or tips of how to make it better from more experienced producers.

[jaydot]

my first track ever;
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would love any feedback or tips of how to make it better from more experienced producers.

Like the harp, it's different for a dubstep track, and a good try for first time.

@ jaydot: I like the concept, sounds spooky but coool! I would like to hear bit more clarity in the drums but quite cool and different!! big up!

@ Imperial: I really like the idea and does sound good, everything is all there like the bass's the vocal sample etc. Think it needs all gelling together though, some decent EQing and mixing to everything to give it together will make a huge track!

@ CBK: Both sound sick! really like them both, finish them!

@Zarban: Really feeling that old school kinda vibe, like the samples as well. nice tune! again finish it!

Heres my track...all sorts of Feedback is welcome! just a minor sample...

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Deffo could go somewhere this track, maybe a slightly stronger kick is needed, but it's one of songs that will get into you head after a few plays.

[The Phantom Banger]

[The Phantom Banger]

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[BastionMusic]

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cause i didnt get any feedback on my previous one.

Not sure i'm feelin this one, the simple melody is fine but the double claps are kinda off putting. It just feels like the track needs more cohesion and a unifying element.

@bizmusic

Definitely a good jumping off point, what about throwing a melody lead or a vocal track on it?

@tobo

I wish the first track I made was this good haha, the final section after 3:27 could be introduced earlier


Here is a tune that I made in various airports a while back...

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[zarbanderzot]

@bizmusic

definitely beef up that kick. the bassline is great; nice pattern and dope sound. get some samples in there and go primal. create buildup.

[antipode]

Haven't posted anything in here for a while, here's a couple of tunes I've been working on lately.

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I know the mixdowns are shit. Finally realised that I actually need monitors. feedback appreciated

my soundcard is kapoot on this computer, I'll post some feedback on some stuff later on my other comp

[Loud Flavor]

Ez guys, just getting into this genre and I guess I'm still lame at producing but I'll keep going at it til my neighbors call the law for all the noise lol
Here's something I started earlier today,

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[jheart]

initial layout done, need some harmonies and drum variations, other than that feedback?
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[a.paul]

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Any feedback would be great!

[jaydot]

@jheart:

Like the track, some nice wobbles etc, but that kick pattern, it's almost like a dance beat. I think if you sort the drums out like you say it would be a good track, maybe have 8 bars of an intro to build tension or something as it kicks in quite suddenly (but maybe you went for that?)

@apaul

Yeah man feeling the flute on this, gives it a good atmosphere, nice build up before the main part too, promising starts by both.

My latest is in my sig btw. Posted it already just looking for additional feedback.