WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
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- tripwire22
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Yeah im feelin this
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
soundcloud isn't playing fo' me, so will edit post when it is.
Either way
Some thoughts on this would be nice.
Don't worry, I give feedback to anyone who gives me any - so don't hesitate to tell me any loves or especially hates of the track!
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Either way
Some thoughts on this would be nice.
Don't worry, I give feedback to anyone who gives me any - so don't hesitate to tell me any loves or especially hates of the track!
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SoundcloudSoulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
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globalbabylon
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@ironik - Nice bass, dirty. Like the hats shuffle, would like to here some more filtering/delay/automation on the mids durring the breakdown.
- tripwire22
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
daym this is a catchy tune im really feeling this one and a great bassline to pack too! nice work as always leglegend4ry wrote:soundcloud isn't playing fo' me, so will edit post when it is.
Either way
Some thoughts on this would be nice.
Don't worry, I give feedback to anyone who gives me any - so don't hesitate to tell me any loves or especially hates of the track!
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@Craggle: Damn hard track :p i like it, a lot! i hear some Machine gun (16 bit remix) influences
Keep up!
@legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
2nd version:
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@legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
2nd version:
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
FEEEDBACK FOR FEEDBACK
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
I really enjoyed this track ! well done, one thing i would add is maybe a sun underneath the initial wobble, just to give it that extra punch, another thing i would do is maybe give the kick and the snare a bit more punch as well, as it feels a little soft where as it needs to be a bit harder, otherwise awesome track !IntrudaB2BAngel wrote:Soundcloud
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Don't mean to sound like a prick but heavier? Its peaking at 55hz - thats pretty damn heavy to me..jaspervc wrote: @legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
SoundcloudSoulstep wrote: My point is i just wanna hear more vibes
- Sinisterbeats
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
No, i don't that kind of heavy.. I mean like more distorded-heavier sound. Sorry 4 thatlegend4ry wrote:Don't mean to sound like a prick but heavier? Its peaking at 55hz - thats pretty damn heavy to me..jaspervc wrote: @legend4ry: That's a very nice bassline! Maybe a little bit louder/heavier?
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Tracks for feedback
@legend4ry- 1st Track - dah-un-wip .
Great intro smooth throughout, try addin some double snares like a bounce back on 4th bars.
Very relaxing tune !
2nd Track - along-the-conciousness-final.
Intresting intro, gets you ready. standared build up and streight up with the tune lovin it! ..
@jaspervc- djvc-candy-string-2nd-version
Wkd sounds bro use the rest of the keybored!!! get some melodies goin to send shivers up spinezz!
Still a phat tune tho

On that note here is another tune loaded..... Cheers peeps.
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@legend4ry- 1st Track - dah-un-wip .
Great intro smooth throughout, try addin some double snares like a bounce back on 4th bars.
Very relaxing tune !
2nd Track - along-the-conciousness-final.
Intresting intro, gets you ready. standared build up and streight up with the tune lovin it! ..
@jaspervc- djvc-candy-string-2nd-version
Wkd sounds bro use the rest of the keybored!!! get some melodies goin to send shivers up spinezz!
Still a phat tune tho
On that note here is another tune loaded..... Cheers peeps.
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IntrudaB2BAngel
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Tracks For Feedback
@Sinisterbeats Track 1 ) lots of potential i suggest experiment with what u got. build up the beat in the beggining,
get some differnt flows in the middle of the tune maybe another drop....?
GOOD STUFF THOUGH!!!!!!!
@Sinisterbeats Track 1 ) lots of potential i suggest experiment with what u got. build up the beat in the beggining,
get some differnt flows in the middle of the tune maybe another drop....?
GOOD STUFF THOUGH!!!!!!!
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@Sinisterbeats: Damn nice drums.. This could be one huge track! Nice work
@IntrudaB2BAngel: Nice tune u have, i like 2:47.. Maybe add some more of those effects
And thanks m8, I tried to put a little variation in the song
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And here is another track from me.. Some drumstep ^^
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@IntrudaB2BAngel: Nice tune u have, i like 2:47.. Maybe add some more of those effects
And thanks m8, I tried to put a little variation in the song
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And here is another track from me.. Some drumstep ^^
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- Sinisterbeats
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@tripwire22:
LOVE the pads! Could maybe bring the sub up a bit. Love the second section, really warm sounding bass. Not to keen on the snare sample but I guess it fits the tune.
@legend4ry:
Really nice tune, great drum samples. Love the vocals. Maybe increase the decay on the sub a bit to fill it out. Apart from that really nice chilled tune.
@IntrudaB2BAngel:
Some really good lfo work, like your bass patches. Good drum beat but need bringing out in the mix more. Also add some more depth with some reverb. Sounds very mono aswell at the moment, maybe widen out your mid bass a bit or add some subtle pads.
@jaspervc:
1st tune- Like the drums, maybe alternate between another hat sample along with the one your using to get them rolling more. Also your sub good do with moving down an octave to give it more punch.
2nd tune- Dont really listen/like drumstep but this is pretty sick. Again with the hats try using more than one sample or velocity changes. Snare seems a bit quite.
LOVE the pads! Could maybe bring the sub up a bit. Love the second section, really warm sounding bass. Not to keen on the snare sample but I guess it fits the tune.
@legend4ry:
Really nice tune, great drum samples. Love the vocals. Maybe increase the decay on the sub a bit to fill it out. Apart from that really nice chilled tune.
@IntrudaB2BAngel:
Some really good lfo work, like your bass patches. Good drum beat but need bringing out in the mix more. Also add some more depth with some reverb. Sounds very mono aswell at the moment, maybe widen out your mid bass a bit or add some subtle pads.
@jaspervc:
1st tune- Like the drums, maybe alternate between another hat sample along with the one your using to get them rolling more. Also your sub good do with moving down an octave to give it more punch.
2nd tune- Dont really listen/like drumstep but this is pretty sick. Again with the hats try using more than one sample or velocity changes. Snare seems a bit quite.
- Sinisterbeats
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Sounds promising, low end is a bit muddy. You probably need to post more than just an intro to get any proper feedback though.
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