FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by odyssia » Thu May 06, 2010 4:37 pm

Not so much 'dubstep' but see what you guys think....

Rough Edges..
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... ough-edges

Moody Tron....
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... -tron-clip

Eternal....
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... ernal-clip

Would like to send these to some labels, but don't know where to start!
Odyssia and Soul Intent (DNB) tracks here - htt://www.soundcloud.com/soul-intent

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ManyMore » Thu May 06, 2010 6:02 pm

odyssia wrote:Not so much 'dubstep' but see what you guys think....

Rough Edges..
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... ough-edges

Moody Tron....
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... -tron-clip

Eternal....
http://soundcloud.com/soul-intent/odyss ... ernal-clip

Would like to send these to some labels, but don't know where to start!
Your tracks has very, very big atmospere!!! Real nice!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ManyMore » Thu May 06, 2010 6:05 pm

Three Six Mafia - Stay Fly - DUBSTEP REMIX !!!

Write your opinion ;-)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TNHh5CLIzQE

Thank You :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Thu May 06, 2010 7:32 pm

New Track for feedback

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Thu May 06, 2010 7:52 pm


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Code Zero » Thu May 06, 2010 9:09 pm

@ Intrudab2bangel (the last track you posted):

Not diggin' the intro that much it sounds a bit static. fatten it up, maybe add some more elements (smooth backgr pad or something). Then it drops, and i just LOVE that wobble, sounds just right to me. Later on the paw thingies i dig less but i guess that's just taste :).

@moosed:

Funky bizzwax! I like it, it's simple but yet so beautiful!

@bad boi lee:

Pfuw, my heads still rushing from your track, and unfortunately that's not in a good way :d. It has good elements (some). Is this a new style dubchop or something :d


I'll give some feedback in the next days now i need some sleep because i just finished a new track with Corrosion. Feel free to leave some feedback!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by 5-0-what » Fri May 07, 2010 2:12 am

ManyMore wrote:Three Six Mafia - Stay Fly - DUBSTEP REMIX !!!

Write your opinion ;-)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TNHh5CLIzQE

Thank You :)
the synth work is dope but the drums are kinda boring i know its easy to copy and paste to get some where so you can work on the bass i have the same problem but go back and make the drums come to life man this tune would be a major heater if the drums pop as much as the bass does

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Camel__Orgasm » Fri May 07, 2010 3:51 am

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first one i like, 2nd sucks i think :q:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mistayif » Fri May 07, 2010 8:59 am

can i get some more feedback on this one please

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by IntrudaB2BAngel » Fri May 07, 2010 9:38 am

Feedback for Codezero


Heavy intro , sharp drop!, nice build and change on the 1st 1/4 of the tune.
you could so remix into a dnb trune @ 3/4 of the tune. nice ending.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Morphexsektor » Fri May 07, 2010 12:03 pm

IntrudaB2BAngel I enjoyed your tracks Dude, some good moods going on in there, the bassline are sweet and the melodies are are nice touch. Greta work in all and a dark-ish mood. Keep up the good work Dude. :5: Nice crisp sounds there too.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ASu » Fri May 07, 2010 2:59 pm

@ Code zero
Solid track, professional sounding, liking your wobbles. Don't think there's much else to say really.

@Camel orgasm

First track's better yeah. Props for sampling steven seagal- :D The wobbles are sweet. I love that little sound that comes in at 1:40. I'd like the hear the full track.

@mistayif

Big tune, the bass is SMOOTH. Percussion is banging too. If I could change something I'd make the intro more minimal. Maybe take those arpeggios out and just keep the pads and efx. Also, it'd sound way bigger if you didn't drop the bass before the beat. With a better intro this'd be a banger. Productions great all around.


If anyone could take a listen to my tune it'd be great. I'll return all the feedback I get. Been into the deeper stuff recently so I attempted to make some. Been producing for around six months, I'd just like to know how I'm doing so any and all comments are more than welcome. Track's called Submarine Solitude, its in my sig.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by mistayif » Fri May 07, 2010 3:07 pm

@ asu

do u mean u're track in u're sig?

i really like the intro. the only slight comment i have to say is that i found it quite easy to lose the beat as the percussion doesn't always follow the same pattern, may a very subtle but constant element to help keep track of the beat, but thats only from a dj's point of view.

also i think you need to work on the drop as the shift in frequency is too big. there is literally no bass in the intro and as soon as it drops, pretty much all high frequencies are cut out. i think this is more to do with your mixdown tho as the drop is slightly bass heavy. you should try bring out more percussive elements following the drop to get more of a balance if u get what i mean.

i really like the main body of the tune tho, those beeps and that grittier wobble work very well. if it were me, i'd layer a more snappy snare over the one you already have.

i think this is a great track so far but u just need to work on integrating the intro and the drop so it sounds more fluid

hope you find this useful

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Fri May 07, 2010 3:24 pm

Camel__Orgasm wrote:first one i like, 2nd sucks i think :q:
You've nailed the sub in the first one mate, really powerful. The rest of the track sounds pretty decent too. The mids could probably be a little louder and the high elements such as the high hats could probably be a little louder (the issue probably being that the sub could be a little quieter). But it's not the end of the world, it all works and sounds good :)

The second track has awesome production values in it, it's skatty as fuck but it really works! Nice one.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by DJNiggaMacks » Fri May 07, 2010 8:16 pm

Hey, This shit is legit! its my boy GumbyGum, local DJ from my hometown. He's never performed his shit, but check it out. I wanna hear feedback.

http://www.mediafire.com/?taj4wo1vzdn

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Fri May 07, 2010 10:24 pm

left some feedback earlier but my track got missed out so any feedback on this appreciated!
im happy with the melodies but wondering about the bass.. do i need to put a sub underneath it or something to fatten it out?any tips appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GarthRoyal » Fri May 07, 2010 10:54 pm

@ kontigobeats. Vibe is nice with this 1. Defo give it some subass action still. Sine wave mite work nice underneath, jus experiment init. U cud gate the bass nd then sidechain it to the kick so it only comes in wen the kik duz.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Sat May 08, 2010 12:14 am

kontigobeats wrote:left some feedback earlier but my track got missed out so any feedback on this appreciated!
im happy with the melodies but wondering about the bass.. do i need to put a sub underneath it or something to fatten it out?any tips appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Sat May 08, 2010 12:16 am

GarthRoyal wrote:@ kontigobeats. Vibe is nice with this 1. Defo give it some subass action still. Sine wave mite work nice underneath, jus experiment init. U cud gate the bass nd then sidechain it to the kick so it only comes in wen the kik duz.

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Yeh except if you used the kick as a sidechain trigger the idea would be for it to play when the kick doesn't :/
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by antics dub » Sat May 08, 2010 12:23 am

kontigobeats wrote:left some feedback earlier but my track got missed out so any feedback on this appreciated!
im happy with the melodies but wondering about the bass.. do i need to put a sub underneath it or something to fatten it out?any tips appreciated!
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will leave some more feedback later too! cheers
im definitely feelin this track. it's got a kinda starkey vibe. although i think a sub underneath wouldn't hurt at all

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