FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Sat May 08, 2010 6:42 am

appreciate the feedback guys! gd to know people are feeling the tunes!
il give a sub bassa try or just it to sound big when played out a system so wanna make sure the low end is filled out too.
cheers! any other feedback appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GarthRoyal » Sat May 08, 2010 1:04 pm

wirez wrote:
GarthRoyal wrote:@ kontigobeats. Vibe is nice with this 1. Defo give it some subass action still. Sine wave mite work nice underneath, jus experiment init. U cud gate the bass nd then sidechain it to the kick so it only comes in wen the kik duz.

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Yeh except if you used the kick as a sidechain trigger the idea would be for it to play when the kick doesn't :/
Yeye flip dat, source the sidechain from the kick for the sine/subs gate
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by minstrell » Sat May 08, 2010 1:12 pm

Here's a remix myself and Vly made for GMC, the vocals are in Bulgarian.
Feedback would be appreciated. This is the final version just a few minor tweaks left but in general this is how the tune will sound :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Psythe » Sat May 08, 2010 3:47 pm

Ok so i made this track because of Deadly Habits movie inspiration thread. Up's or Downs most appreacitive

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by bifta » Sat May 08, 2010 6:03 pm

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Looking on some feedback, thanks people!! (:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by jaspervc » Sat May 08, 2010 7:07 pm

@minstrell: love your track! really nice vibe with the vocals. good job
@kontigobeats: man, what a track! really, love the synths.. Maybe some more bass (sub), but damn, f*cking banger!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by wirez » Sat May 08, 2010 8:54 pm

jaspervc wrote:@minstrell: love your track! really nice vibe with the vocals. good job
@kontigobeats: man, what a track! really, love the synths.. Maybe some more bass (sub), but damn, f*cking banger!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by ♫♪♫ » Sun May 09, 2010 12:51 am


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by deadly_habit » Sun May 09, 2010 3:28 am

♫♪♫ wrote:Soundcloud
you know i love it and have a dedicated folder for you
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Mr_Hidden » Sun May 09, 2010 8:53 am

hi!

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what you guys say about this shitty track??? :lol:

It seems the treble too bunched + whether to add another element to the track and whether to do?

anyway thanks in advance :wink:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by redjuan » Sun May 09, 2010 11:37 am

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k, so uploaded this before but there was loads of problems with drums panning and shit,so sorted it and changed a few things.Hope people are feeling this,feedback appreciated :D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by continuumdnb » Sun May 09, 2010 12:09 pm

@minstrell- great use of space, the bass is good too, you've got a little bit further to go before you get to the rediculousness of spor/noisia but that's what the stabs reminded me of, that single tone (the obviously flat bit on the soundcloud waveform) works really well too, great idea. I like the vocals, and think they could probably be a little more prominent throughout. Nice job.

@jaspervc- Nice arrangement, great intro, but your main bass has absolutely no power in it, make the mid frequencies of it lower, layer it with something else, i don't care- just make it hit and you'll have a brilliant tune. All the incidentals, variations etc. are great- just make that bass have an impact and you'll have an awesome tune on your hands.

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That 808 bassline is great, and halps move the tune along. Personally i think you've gone a little overboard with the vocal effects. Something to try is putting another track in with the same vocals but no effects, then putting a compressor on the vocals track that has effects on it, which is sidechained to the clean vocal track, this will let you have all those cool effects without losing any ability to hear what the words are actually saying.

If you're giving feedback and are prepared to listen to something a bit different:
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If you only like tracks with rediculous wobble, then have a listen to something i threw together in 40 mins cause i was bored of writing actual music:
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I'd prefer feedback on the first, will return feedback on either.
goodeh wrote: is that good? cause it was accidental, i just copied the drum midi clip and pasted it into the bass channel....
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by k00sh » Sun May 09, 2010 6:22 pm

hey, just finished my new track "city lights" and was wanting some feedback on it, will return any
i know its lackin in variation but its just the tune, putting in modulation and such

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by donpablo » Sun May 09, 2010 6:26 pm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by An Expresso » Sun May 09, 2010 10:37 pm

Here's a track I finished for the most part today. I think it's one of my best so please criticize on what I should work on and if it even sounds good, help and brutal honesty would be much appreciated. It's a dubstep track with jungle/breaks influence, oh and it's in my sig. :mrgreen:
a future garage track i cooked up, feedback appreciated.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Sun May 09, 2010 11:08 pm

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me and Kaiori combine to create a great atmospheric tune

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Basic A » Mon May 10, 2010 2:48 am

deadly habit wrote:
♫♪♫ wrote:Soundcloud
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heh your how i know the name...

nice tune btw man.. see soundcloud comments...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by aux » Mon May 10, 2010 2:52 am

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Would be keen to see what Steppaz think of this one...
weird Sub Bass to the chest tingz...

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