WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
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sub isn't registering on my laptop speakers, but sounds okay on my monitors. also kick and hi hats sound a little harsh. any ideas?
thanks in advance
sub isn't registering on my laptop speakers, but sounds okay on my monitors. also kick and hi hats sound a little harsh. any ideas?
thanks in advance
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Hi guys! Working on this track at the moment iam wondering what u guys think so far!
Many thanks!
Many thanks!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
WOW! kaiori and tripwire that song is HUGE!! great feel to it and the vocals are something else for sure perfect collab
heres a new track I'm working on sort of a new tip im on more of a downtempo chill whatever not sure what to call it... let me know what you think
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heres a new track I'm working on sort of a new tip im on more of a downtempo chill whatever not sure what to call it... let me know what you think
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
pretty good reminds me of the 80s idk why weird intro but it works i was expecting a little solo with that synth u have in the 2nd dropSubside wrote:WOW! kaiori and tripwire that song is HUGE!! great feel to it and the vocals are something else for sure perfect collab
heres a new track I'm working on sort of a new tip im on more of a downtempo chill whatever not sure what to call it... let me know what you think
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
yeah its a weird one for sure thanks for the suggestion I added a little more funk to the synth in the second drop and im feeling it ill upload a newer version soon
EDIT: heres the newer version check it out
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EDIT: heres the newer version check it out
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Last edited by Subside on Mon May 10, 2010 3:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
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spent some more time today working on this. Here are some questions:
1. What can I do to make my drops more intense and exciting?
2. How can I keep my drums in the mix without them taking up all of my headroom (especially the snare)?
3. Does it get boring in the middle?
4. What can I do to make note changes smoother?
5.I have no real studio monitors or headphones, just some crappy on ear head phones, is the subbass present?
6. When I'm finished with this song what should i do to make sure i save it at the highest possible quality?
Thanks alot for the feedback
spent some more time today working on this. Here are some questions:
1. What can I do to make my drops more intense and exciting?
2. How can I keep my drums in the mix without them taking up all of my headroom (especially the snare)?
3. Does it get boring in the middle?
4. What can I do to make note changes smoother?
5.I have no real studio monitors or headphones, just some crappy on ear head phones, is the subbass present?
6. When I'm finished with this song what should i do to make sure i save it at the highest possible quality?
Thanks alot for the feedback
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@ rightontime :
1 fuck around with sounds,automate,reverb,adsr,etc.use your creativity,add extra fx from library and fuck around with them
2 dont make drums to loud,in my tunes kick hit about 14 db /also play with stereo separation (all sounds stereo separation)
3. cant say if its boring,need to listen the tune for 20 times first ;D but yea it is.try to change the mood,like a chorus and a verse in pop songs
P.S
new tune i started yesterday,4 cups of coffee,2 splifs
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1 fuck around with sounds,automate,reverb,adsr,etc.use your creativity,add extra fx from library and fuck around with them
2 dont make drums to loud,in my tunes kick hit about 14 db /also play with stereo separation (all sounds stereo separation)
3. cant say if its boring,need to listen the tune for 20 times first ;D but yea it is.try to change the mood,like a chorus and a verse in pop songs
P.S
new tune i started yesterday,4 cups of coffee,2 splifs
Soundcloud
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
respektas zmogaudonpablo wrote:@ rightontime :
1 fuck around with sounds,automate,reverb,adsr,etc.use your creativity,add extra fx from library and fuck around with them
2 dont make drums to loud,in my tunes kick hit about 14 db /also play with stereo separation (all sounds stereo separation)
3. cant say if its boring,need to listen the tune for 20 times first ;D but yea it is.try to change the mood,like a chorus and a verse in pop songs
P.S
new tune i started yesterday,4 cups of coffee,2 splifs
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gooood !

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
-Karanp- Awesome chilled vibes here! I love a good deepstep track!
-Donpablo- Very nice track, I like something different like that.
-A.paul- very nice chill vibes with yours as well! Love the deep base.
-Drekbek- Sounds sick so far, that would sound kick as with some low end sine wave base layered with that wobble!
Here is an older dubstep track I put together a while back. Still needs plenty of level adjustments and mastering. Would love lots of feedback!
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Check out some of my other wide variety of music at http://www.soundcloud.com/bain
-Donpablo- Very nice track, I like something different like that.
-A.paul- very nice chill vibes with yours as well! Love the deep base.
-Drekbek- Sounds sick so far, that would sound kick as with some low end sine wave base layered with that wobble!
Here is an older dubstep track I put together a while back. Still needs plenty of level adjustments and mastering. Would love lots of feedback!
Soundcloud
Check out some of my other wide variety of music at http://www.soundcloud.com/bain
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
No idea what people are going to think of this as it's swaying into other genres a bit.
Any feedback at all would be great. Ideally directly on Soundcloud please.
Thaaaanks!
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Any feedback at all would be great. Ideally directly on Soundcloud please.
Thaaaanks!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Bain : the idea is there, it does need a whole lot of mixing, and your bass needs to be fuller, soundwise, needs to have more power. your drums are pretty weak aswell, try looking into that.
Dozer : see soundcloud
Had to upload mine on Newgrounds once more cuz Soundcloud is being a bitch:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/331755
Nearly finished, maybe change some sounds and arrange a full length
Dozer : see soundcloud

Had to upload mine on Newgrounds once more cuz Soundcloud is being a bitch:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/331755
Nearly finished, maybe change some sounds and arrange a full length
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@reignz: i like the sounding of the wobble.nice 
i dont like: that roland snare,as for me,i wuold layer it with claps etc.also i dont like the reverb,try making it shorter with little decay and small room,or just take it off.in that kind of tunes imho snare shuold be punchy,with minimum reverb

i dont like: that roland snare,as for me,i wuold layer it with claps etc.also i dont like the reverb,try making it shorter with little decay and small room,or just take it off.in that kind of tunes imho snare shuold be punchy,with minimum reverb
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Thanks Reignz! I'll have a look at the kicks, you're probably right, might be a bit thin. Any other comments would be great, either about the production or the mixing.
Thaaanks!
Thaaanks!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Really liking this one, vocals especially and that meaty sub-bass.tripwire22 wrote:Soundcloud
Three things you could do about the kick and hi hats, compressor, EQ and simply lower the volume on them if they sound too harsh. Other then that I like the dub vibes at the start, very chilled out which I like.a.paul wrote:Soundcloud
sub isn't registering on my laptop speakers, but sounds okay on my monitors. also kick and hi hats sound a little harsh. any ideas?
thanks in advance
Now this is a sick song, the shuffle of the drums, mixdown is damn good, liking pretty much everything on this track.donpablo wrote:@ rightontime :
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new tune i started yesterday,4 cups of coffee,2 splifs
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Now for my 2step/garage song, still work in progress decided to upload it to seee what people think.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@Donpablo, this track is big! some real nice synths used and the melody is nice! shuffle on the drums is nice too! wasnt really expecting it to drop as heavy as that to be honest, think maybe a not as heavy drop might fit nicer but maybe thats just me, def a big track tho, got my head nodding!
@zonetrooper - liking the synth, but not sure if the drums fit too well with it or maybe theyre too loud in comparison, the rhythm of the synth is nice, not really feeling the other synth that comes in around a minute in, sounds like too much is going on. keep at it tho!
heres mine work in progress, something a little different to wha i normally do, some 2step vibe, chopped vocals and nice synths, feedback appreciated!
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@zonetrooper - liking the synth, but not sure if the drums fit too well with it or maybe theyre too loud in comparison, the rhythm of the synth is nice, not really feeling the other synth that comes in around a minute in, sounds like too much is going on. keep at it tho!
heres mine work in progress, something a little different to wha i normally do, some 2step vibe, chopped vocals and nice synths, feedback appreciated!
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http://www.myspace.com/kontigobeats
http://www.soundcloud.com/kontigobeats
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My debut EP 'The Lost Hours' will be out on Slime Recordings on 21/02/2011 at all good digital outlets including iTunes,Amazon,Juno.
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My debut EP 'The Lost Hours' will be out on Slime Recordings on 21/02/2011 at all good digital outlets including iTunes,Amazon,Juno.
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
as you know im the only serious brostep producer on this message boards (it seems)
anyway, with renoise, been working on some wobbles.
I allocate a 2nd renoise project, treating it as like a scrapbook for my wobble concoctions (yes I know that sounds ridiculas but when it comes to wobble brostep, resmapling is the secret!)
anyway here's a showcase, used albino3, fm8, and ton of effects like, comb filters, ringmods etc
woba-pella.wav
u can rob them if you like i dont really care was just messing about.
in my song i'll eventually add a sub sinewave under those
anyway, with renoise, been working on some wobbles.
I allocate a 2nd renoise project, treating it as like a scrapbook for my wobble concoctions (yes I know that sounds ridiculas but when it comes to wobble brostep, resmapling is the secret!)
anyway here's a showcase, used albino3, fm8, and ton of effects like, comb filters, ringmods etc
woba-pella.wav
u can rob them if you like i dont really care was just messing about.
in my song i'll eventually add a sub sinewave under those
head of brostep defence
Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
heya, this is something way different, ive been experimenting. still not sure which way im going to take it, give me an idea of where ya reckon it should go, its nice as
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im on dial up speed at the mo, ill have a listen to hu replys tomorrow at course!!chea
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im on dial up speed at the mo, ill have a listen to hu replys tomorrow at course!!chea
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
@ kontegobeats. yes youre fkn right,i agree with you,putting a melody right after the drop fixed that
everybody thanks for comments!
*lietuvai irgi aciu

everybody thanks for comments!

*lietuvai irgi aciu

Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010
Recently been working mainly on two tunes, namedly 'Time Will Tell' and 'Sea of Dreams'.
Both of them are now in my signature
Have a listen and see what you think, any feedback is welcome.
Cheers
Both of them are now in my signature

Have a listen and see what you think, any feedback is welcome.
Cheers
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