FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Worker Ant » Fri May 14, 2010 12:11 pm

@Deranger - really nice chill downtempo style on mimosa. Long beginning but gets better around 1:50 when the cymbol crashes and another mid-range synth joins the tea party. Good book reading (or maybe even good night sleep) music.

@Kid Qwerty - feels like an old school video game until around 0:40 when the other synth joins the nintendo party. Starts to get good around 2:35...before that, it feels like it needs some more lows or (maybe even) the percussion should be turned up and the mid-range melodies should be turned down a bit. That's just my ears though.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by thierry_le_dj » Fri May 14, 2010 2:00 pm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Imperial » Fri May 14, 2010 5:04 pm

@ collisioncourse thats a pretty sick intro, i like it when the drums slow down nd speed up, thats a good effect, not to keen on the rest of the tune tho

@thierry_le_dj alrite tune, i thought it was going to progress into something a bit bigger but good effort, not really wat i like in a tune my thats just my opinion

@KidQw3rty i like this one(ghost mess final), i dunno wat it is but it sustains my interest, i agree with worker ant it get good at like 2:35 when you've got all the synths building up the a nice, clean wobble :)

and for whoevers interested ive got a tune ive been working on 4 a bit now, people are gonna hate cos it more towards datsik's and excision's style of dubstep
anyway feedback is much apprieciated and returned :)
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and it also features on a little minimix i did, i think its the 2nd track? but yer its basically a quick mix of a couple of my tunes, feedback on that is welcomed too


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Depone » Fri May 14, 2010 10:41 pm

New bit from a collab!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by dubcriminal » Fri May 14, 2010 10:46 pm

yo.
first post. First two humble (let's call them finished...) tracks im uploading.
have a listen, tell me what you think.
Feedback much appreciated.

Big up to the dubstep production forum.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by reignstep » Fri May 14, 2010 11:06 pm

Just finished this today ! Put quite some effort in it ^^

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by redraven » Sat May 15, 2010 1:06 am

@dubcriminal- not feeling either of em man but thats just me

@reignz- SICK I'm feeling this one man!

@depone- I posted in your main thread for it but, SIIIICK


Now here's a tune I just finished today, I think it's my first quality track.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Sat May 15, 2010 2:31 am

Well Just got this one done. 95% was done with Reason 4. Some samples were edited in Sound forge so CRANK THAT ISSHHHHH :twisted:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by deranger » Sat May 15, 2010 3:55 am

@ Deranger - Mimosa the Day After ; see what you mean by an R&B vibe! me being a fan of sexy groovy tunes, gotta give you props on this one. some clever synth sounds that fit perfect into the theme of the song. my advice would be spice up the track a bit more. it comes off a bit naked as it progresses if that makes any sense. id try throwing in some lush pads or samples, maybe sidechain them to give the tune some extra 'oomph'. drums could use some more work too. good job!
@Deranger - really nice chill downtempo style on mimosa. Long beginning but gets better around 1:50 when the cymbol crashes and another mid-range synth joins the tea party. Good book reading (or maybe even good night sleep) music.
Thanks a lot for the feedback guys! :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by deranger » Sat May 15, 2010 4:16 am

@urbannerd62 about the "The Way"


Pro's : Like the drop. Cool evil voices. The bass sounds nice and fat. Like the break down with the voices. The ambiance of the track is nice and sinister. 2nd break is cool. Overall, I like the track.


Cons : When the melody comes in it feels like there is no space for it. The 2nd drop is good but could use something extra since we already heard it before. Around 4:45 it starts to get a bit repetitive. The mix seems to be a bit muddy. The outro is a little random.

Overall cool tune! Keep up the good work ! :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by deranger » Sat May 15, 2010 4:30 am

@ Worker Ant about Change Gonna Come (feat Jus K)


Pros :This track is very surreal, which is a good thing. I like it's funky-ness and it's very original.

Con's : The production quality is strange. Needs more low end and clarity in the mix.


The ideas are great, the recording quality is not. Although it does give it an almost Portishead type of vibe. :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by whynaughtbeats » Sat May 15, 2010 7:16 am

Hey guys tell me what you think about my first tune.

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Post by AL4228 » Sat May 15, 2010 7:39 am

@ WhynaughtBeats - Sexy tune, dig it all.
Bad Lux - Dig the drop ;)
deranger - totaly hit the "sexy" theme... lol

Here's a tune i just finished.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by jaydot » Sat May 15, 2010 12:14 pm

@Depone: You don't need me to tell you that that's sick, but I'm going to do it anyway, that's sick. Big ups.

@reignz: Nice production there, like the Egyptian vibes on it, the sustained drop is good really keeps the tension going and then the sample is good too, good work:

Here's something that's as good as finished, misses a beat somewhere in the mix but that's easily remedied:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Sat May 15, 2010 1:03 pm

@deranger - this is something kinda different, nice laid back feel and that synth line is nice!
@ jaydot - again quite a nice laid back vibe, the vocals sound pretty good but i think the piano sounds a bit of out place sometimes

heres mine, a kinda garage track, some nice synths and vocal chops, pretty sure this is finished in terms of arrangement, not mixed yet, let me know what you think!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by TM45 » Sat May 15, 2010 4:51 pm

New track. Hope you like. Comments and criticism appreciated ^_^

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by DubSac » Sat May 15, 2010 5:31 pm

Ez all! Just finished this new one up last night for a new ep =)

Would really appreciated your guys feedback! Soundcloud comments are always nice =)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by AL4228 » Sat May 15, 2010 10:57 pm

big up dubsac, sounds hawt, did you rape bitcruncher on that one :lol:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Xel » Sun May 16, 2010 2:58 am

ez people.

Looking for some feedback on a track I've recently finished!
Check it.

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