WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for MAY, 2010

[WeBang]

Yo guys, this is a new track im about to finish, having real trouble getting the wobble to sit in the mix. Any advice on how to get this sorted, or just general tips for me? cheers.

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its really quite in you're face. it sounds in the right key, but everything else is quite chilled and reverby, it doesnt quite work as its so at the front in the mix. i dont listen to much wobble, so this might be right. just my thoughts.

maybe just too loud. have a look at the effects you've put on eveything else, and compare it to the effects on the wobble.

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you could use that same bassline but your right it sounds like its not sitting with the track. Do what samkablaam said check your effects. maybe even change the the bass patch it self but use the same exact pattern.

[WeBang]

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PRODUCED ON A STANDARD PC CARD COZ IM NOT GHETTO LIKE YOU OTHER PRODUCERS

would be nice to hear a snare or clap in there

[WeBang]

a work in progress testing some new ideas that Critical Consciousness had...feedback MUCH appreciated!

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quality so far...digging the samples drums bass and well everything.

[havokdubstep]

Hey guys,

Can't decide whether this sounds finished? Can some one give me some feedback on this, im at work at the moment so cant give any feedback on your tracks YET but i aint a dick ill give you all some feedback when i get home tonight

Thanks in advance,
Heres the track:

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~Havok

[engol]

http://soundcloud.com/engoldubstep/engol-unfinished


unfinished tune, but tell me what u think.

[5-0-what]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

[samkablaam]

Hey guys,

Can't decide whether this sounds finished? Can some one give me some feedback on this, im at work at the moment so cant give any feedback on your tracks YET but i aint a dick ill give you all some feedback when i get home tonight

Thanks in advance,
Heres the track:

Soundcloud

~Havok

sounds good yeah. not sure if it sounds finished. might need some boost in the upper mid sort of area, just to make it feel more exciting. or maybe more overall compression to make it feel louder.
but good production, and tbh one of the more interesting wobble songs ive heard.

[Dropkick_Kid]

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Just a little something I'm working on atm, feedback apreciated, safe.

[havokdubstep]

I'll def give some feed back tomorrow after work.

heres what i am peepin so far. Intro is shit for now bare with me

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Feeling this one, i know your not finished the intro but i think if i were you id build it up a bit more maybe use some kicks or something underneath those pitch bends in the intro so you really know when that drops coming, apart from that its sounding pretty phatttttt

[havokdubstep]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

Link me up mate ill give you some feedback (sorry if im being blind but couldnt find it when i had a look)

[5-0-what]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

Link me up mate ill give you some feedback (sorry if im being blind but couldnt find it when i had a look)

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here it is

[havokdubstep]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

Link me up mate ill give you some feedback (sorry if im being blind but couldnt find it when i had a look)

Soundcloud
here it is

The wobble and the sample go well together, i think the wobble is overpowering the sub a little though. I can hear that theres something interesting going on with the sub underneath the wobble but cant make it out as well as id like to so id boost the sub up a little and maybe the wobble down. but its really catchy, throw a few stoppy starty bits and maybe see what else you can do with the vocal samples to vary them a bit more as well like adding a few more effects on top but overall its got good potential

[samkablaam]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

Link me up mate ill give you some feedback (sorry if im being blind but couldnt find it when i had a look)

Soundcloud
here it is

The wobble and the sample go well together, i think the wobble is overpowering the sub a little though. I can hear that theres something interesting going on with the sub underneath the wobble but cant make it out as well as id like to so id boost the sub up a little and maybe the wobble down. but its really catchy, throw a few stoppy starty bits and maybe see what else you can do with the vocal samples to vary them a bit more as well like adding a few more effects on top but overall its got good potential

i agree, just need to vary it. breakdown etc. etc. the drums are going throughout the whole thing right? same with the vocal. maybe chop it up a bit more .

[Nacklewicket]

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[5-0-what]

look people this is a very simple concept if you are gonna pst a tune in here give some feedback on atleast 2 other tracks or this is just going to turn into the dubs section i try and come on here a give feedback even if im not posting a tune if you know how to make music then you can obviously have an opinion on someone elses music

sorry for the rant but its just nuts that yesterday i posted a track and reviews for some others and since then 3 of the 13 people who have posted tunes left feedback fukc

Link me up mate ill give you some feedback (sorry if im being blind but couldnt find it when i had a look)

Soundcloud
here it is

The wobble and the sample go well together, i think the wobble is overpowering the sub a little though. I can hear that theres something interesting going on with the sub underneath the wobble but cant make it out as well as id like to so id boost the sub up a little and maybe the wobble down. but its really catchy, throw a few stoppy starty bits and maybe see what else you can do with the vocal samples to vary them a bit more as well like adding a few more effects on top but overall its got good potential

i agree, just need to vary it. breakdown etc. etc. the drums are going throughout the whole thing right? same with the vocal. maybe chop it up a bit more .

word thanks for the feed back yeah i turned the sub bass down after listening to it in my car cause all i could here was sub guess i turned it down too much
and i am defiantly going to very the drums up some and chop some more vocals i just trying not to use to much of the vocal cause i don't want everybody to recognize what its from

[globalbabylon]

now this is some funny shit cause im talking repetitive and then i post this it is just the basic outline ima go back and cut some of the vocals out but let me know what you thinkhttp://soundcloud.com/5-0-what/5-0-what-ovarian-warrior

not doing the copy past thing right but ah well.

@5-0 what - Love the sample. Like the the bass movement. I would like the hear some more changing up in the structure, but I think you're already on that. Droping out chuncks to highlight the bass or voc's, ect. Sounding good though. I'll give a listen at home to the other track, office speakers are shit.

[havokdubstep]

Hey guys,

Can't decide whether this sounds finished? Can some one give me some feedback on this, im at work at the moment so cant give any feedback on your tracks YET but i aint a dick ill give you all some feedback when i get home tonight

Thanks in advance,
Heres the track:

Soundcloud

~Havok

sounds good yeah. not sure if it sounds finished. might need some boost in the upper mid sort of area, just to make it feel more exciting. or maybe more overall compression to make it feel louder.
but good production, and tbh one of the more interesting wobble songs ive heard.

Safe cheers for the feedback
yeah i think im getting it properly mastered so i left the master channel completely clean, so it will be more beefed up than that on the final version

[havokdubstep]

Hey guys,

Can't decide whether this sounds finished? Can some one give me some feedback on this, im at work at the moment so cant give any feedback on your tracks YET but i aint a dick ill give you all some feedback when i get home tonight

Thanks in advance,
Heres the track:

Soundcloud

~Havok

sounds good yeah. not sure if it sounds finished. might need some boost in the upper mid sort of area, just to make it feel more exciting. or maybe more overall compression to make it feel louder.
but good production, and tbh one of the more interesting wobble songs ive heard.

Safe cheers for the feedback
yeah i think im getting it properly mastered so i left the master channel completely clean, so it will be more beefed up than that on the final version

[samkablaam]

got a new piece in my sig... not dubstep, but would appreciate the feedback anyway.

safe

[havokdubstep]

got a new piece in my sig... not dubstep, but would appreciate the feedback anyway.

safe

Im not really too familiar with this kind of stuff so i cant go into very much detail but i think youve got the mix sounding pretty tight the drums are sounding good especially the snare.
the only thing i noticed after a few bars was that theres a slight hiss coming from the vocal sample. you only really notice it when it stops and starts but it could be made less noticable with some magic eqing i suppose so yeah sounding good.