FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GRAYSKALE » Mon May 24, 2010 3:38 pm

Holda wrote: urm not really tbh, all i do is get like 3-4 hats and then layer them up but i suppose thats what everyone does really, you think you could take a look at my track in my sig and give feedback? :P
Mate, good effort on that track - you got something fresh going on there - not many people making noises like that - recon the intro is a bit overpowering with so much going on at once - if you tweek the levels a bit would sound ace!! liking the vocal sounds and the pad sounds funky garage style - nice!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by DubSac » Mon May 24, 2010 5:42 pm

A-List wrote:@ noizydan - i like the track dude,, the main bass doesnt really jump out at me though, not a huge fan of the sound youve used.. overall its a decent track, just the sound of the bassline isnt of my taste!

@ DubSac - im really liking this one mate... it is however a little bit on the short side! thats the only constructive criticism i could say about this track

@ We Bang - i posted feedback on the WIP thread about that track, really nice song! (head over there to see what i said)

@ JBE - that song has just chilled me out dude,, totally good vibes coming off it! i can hear the trance inspiration for sure!, TUNEEE!

@ Grayscale - its a decent track, maybe a bit on the repetitive side.. i like the sparkling sort of synth sound, not too sure about the other main sound used.. but yeah man keep it at!

heres a track from A-List (myself) & Impey, a duo from the DSF have been working on. hopefully one of many tracks to come from us. But yeah, pretty much finished now (i think)... let us know what you think! cheers

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ahaha, not the first to say its short man... its just a clip tho, finished version is about 4 minutes

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Noizydan » Mon May 24, 2010 6:30 pm

Cheers for the feedback A-List. Imagine the bass sound won't be to everyone's taste. It's not strictly dubstep I'll admit. I wanted to avoid the formant filter sound for this one, but I do like my dirty noises and it seemed to work for me. Glad you like the rest. Nice vibe on your sig track. I'm liking the cut of your jib :)

Hope to have something else that'll twist your melons a bit more in the not too distant :wink:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Crosby » Mon May 24, 2010 7:20 pm

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Hey guys, been producing about 4 months now, what do you think? any tips to improve?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GRAYSKALE » Mon May 24, 2010 10:11 pm

@ Crosby - nice tune bro - digging it, not much criticism other than it sounds like its peaking at a few points but could just be my shitty headphones, just try and stop clipping early on, eg, before it hits the mixer, just turning the decibels down on your synth and then using the fader to control the channel. keep it up bro

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Mon May 24, 2010 10:51 pm

@ A-list, sounds good, well put together, good use of sounds, kinda agree with the soundcloud comment though, i think those pads come in a bit strong but apart from that big track!

@grayskale i agree with the other comment, liking the first synth used but not too sure on the others, they sound kind of 'cheap' if that makes sense? kick and hi hat sounds fit nice but i dont think that snare does fit with the rest fo the track to be honest, keep it up though, the first synth sound n melody is nice.

@Webang, liking this one! had my head nodding, nice kinda vocal bass, and i liked the starting synths kinda musically, i think maybe the sidechain might be a bit strong on the pads though, although then i guess that makes room for the other noises, would like a 320 of this if youre putting them out!

Here's my one, I think this will be the final version, gonna send it off to be mixed so thought would put it out there for final feedback beforehand!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by WeBang » Tue May 25, 2010 12:57 am

kontigobeats wrote:@ A-list, sounds good, well put together, good use of sounds, kinda agree with the soundcloud comment though, i think those pads come in a bit strong but apart from that big track!

@grayskale i agree with the other comment, liking the first synth used but not too sure on the others, they sound kind of 'cheap' if that makes sense? kick and hi hat sounds fit nice but i dont think that snare does fit with the rest fo the track to be honest, keep it up though, the first synth sound n melody is nice.

@Webang, liking this one! had my head nodding, nice kinda vocal bass, and i liked the starting synths kinda musically, i think maybe the sidechain might be a bit strong on the pads though, although then i guess that makes room for the other noises, would like a 320 of this if youre putting them out!

Here's my one, I think this will be the final version, gonna send it off to be mixed so thought would put it out there for final feedback beforehand!
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Thanks man.

I think just some level adjustments on that and its golden. Piano is bit loud over the mix especially for your style of drums which are very nice and chill. The other synths are real musical keep it going
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by AL4228 » Tue May 25, 2010 1:14 am

Hey guys. Just finished an Imogen Heap Dubstep Remix.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by tylerblue » Tue May 25, 2010 2:10 am

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Just finished this today. Would love some feedback on it -- put a lot of time into this one! I'll be leaving some feedback on other tunes a bit later tonight when I am on a proper sound system. :t:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by infrasound » Tue May 25, 2010 10:36 am

kontigobeats wrote:@ A-list, sounds good, well put together, good use of sounds, kinda agree with the soundcloud comment though, i think those pads come in a bit strong but apart from that big track!

@grayskale i agree with the other comment, liking the first synth used but not too sure on the others, they sound kind of 'cheap' if that makes sense? kick and hi hat sounds fit nice but i dont think that snare does fit with the rest fo the track to be honest, keep it up though, the first synth sound n melody is nice.

@Webang, liking this one! had my head nodding, nice kinda vocal bass, and i liked the starting synths kinda musically, i think maybe the sidechain might be a bit strong on the pads though, although then i guess that makes room for the other noises, would like a 320 of this if youre putting them out!

Here's my one, I think this will be the final version, gonna send it off to be mixed so thought would put it out there for final feedback beforehand!
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Really liking this mate. Like the percussion and the simple synths.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by infrasound » Tue May 25, 2010 10:40 am

Noizydan wrote:not one for the purists i guess. i'm a fairly recent dubstep convert - so there's a fair amount of other influences in this one. saying that it would have turned out different if it weren't for this forum, so i though i'd share it :wink:

It's a remix of a lovely ambient track by Input Junkie:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by kontigobeats » Tue May 25, 2010 10:43 am

@webang and infrasound, cheers for the feedback guys, yea it does need a mixdown. Apart from that do you think it sounds like a full track then or do you get bored later on in it? i think is ok but dont know whether to add something else,but didnt want to make it too busy so i thought maybe with a little effects/automation later on that will keep it interesting. Anymore feedback appreciated!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by infrasound » Tue May 25, 2010 12:24 pm

kontigobeats wrote:@webang and infrasound, cheers for the feedback guys, yea it does need a mixdown. Apart from that do you think it sounds like a full track then or do you get bored later on in it? i think is ok but dont know whether to add something else,but didnt want to make it too busy so i thought maybe with a little effects/automation later on that will keep it interesting. Anymore feedback appreciated!
I think it could probably do with a bit more of a pronounced breakdown, just to break it up a bit but other than that I wouldn't change much no. At the end of he day it's not a really long track and has nice rolling vibes so I'm kept interested the whole time yeah.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by infrasound » Tue May 25, 2010 12:30 pm

Finished this one ages ago but never put it up.

Hope people enjoy :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Tue May 25, 2010 1:37 pm

Getting no love in the Dubs section :D Only my second tune, anything you guys would recommend?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by reignstep » Tue May 25, 2010 2:14 pm

@Hakka: not really feeling those vocals, they seem to not fit at all in your tune... Drums are good, lead piano is too unprocessed, work on some EQing and some more effects. Your pad is waaaay too loud, it should be in the background serving as an atmospheric element, not as a lead ;)
Your wobble is pretty nice. Also mixing needs some work, especially at the start. Still work to do I'd say

@Infrasound: wicked sound, it's just abit too repetitive for me..

@Tylerblue: Great song, love the way you used the guitar! Matches perfectly with the bass sound you got. Nothing more to say it's wonderful really!


Here's my own, would love some feedback

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by redjuan » Tue May 25, 2010 3:50 pm

@ hakka,could do with a bit more variation,agreed with reign on the vocal wasnt feeling it,like the darkness of the track tho and evil vibe,sub was nice aswell.good work tho,maybe just rework a few elementsof th tune

@ reign,not really my thing,but i did like this tune,proper war tune,sounds good throughout really dnt have any criticism,nice bass,drums etc,big tune.

any feedback on mine would be sweet,shall leave comments and feedback to anyone who listens/comments.deep vibes on this one,hope people enjoy it

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Tue May 25, 2010 4:34 pm

Nice one lads, just uploading a new version with a bit more variation. I need to get rid of the vocal or change it. Just needed something to keep it rolling. Glad to hear people like the drums and sub bass. That was the thing i needed to work on most! Will post up the edited bit once it finished uploading. Cheers for the feedback!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by tylerblue » Tue May 25, 2010 6:02 pm

@ infrasound -- Really, really good bass. Your drums are fantastic as well. Overall great work, it just needs a bit of variation and it's spot on.

@ reignz -- This is huge! You nailed it! Are you releasing it anywhere? Would love a copy!
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