FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

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trike12
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by trike12 » Tue May 25, 2010 6:38 pm

@ redjuan: Big sounding intro, The drums dont really hit hard enough, give the snare a volume bump and give it some more reverb, and you need to lower the sub just a bit its peaking at some points. :) good ideas!

@ hakka: Starts out nicely with some almost loungy dubby vibes, drums are fine, the bells coming in just after the drums, theyre out of key, you need to adjust the pitch a little.

@ intrasound: NICE intro, drums are heavy enough, The drop idea is great, but could do with maybe a little less distortion for my taste, (but again thats up to taste) would LOVE to remix this. If that would be possible pm me.


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by reignstep » Tue May 25, 2010 6:56 pm

tylerblue wrote: @ reignz -- This is huge! You nailed it! Are you releasing it anywhere? Would love a copy!
Not sure, I might open up a few downloads but I was planning on sending this as a debut to a couple of labels :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by tylerblue » Tue May 25, 2010 7:11 pm

reignz wrote:
tylerblue wrote: @ reignz -- This is huge! You nailed it! Are you releasing it anywhere? Would love a copy!
Not sure, I might open up a few downloads but I was planning on sending this as a debut to a couple of labels :)
Nice one! Let me know when and where!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GRAYSKALE » Tue May 25, 2010 7:14 pm

@ trike - nice eastern vibes going in this track and the bass sits in really nicely with those oriental drums - sounds like a pretty tight mix as well - good effort

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by DjPsychonaut » Tue May 25, 2010 10:00 pm

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Second drop is what it's all about! Please give your opinion & production tips, cheers

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by shuedet » Wed May 26, 2010 4:35 am

JBE wrote:Here's my latest. Been on a trance kick and I'm sure you'll hear the trance inspiration. Will be posting feedback when I get off work in the morning, I uploaded the final version just before I left for work.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by HAACK » Wed May 26, 2010 6:58 am

Been on this one since the beginning of May, any feedback is most appreciated, levels, dynamics, frequency spectrum, etc.

Thanks!



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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by trike12 » Wed May 26, 2010 7:36 am

HAACK wrote:Been on this one since the beginning of May, any feedback is most appreciated, levels, dynamics, frequency spectrum, etc.

Thanks!



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definately some sick deep vibes! i really dig this! very kryptic minds'ish though, maybe give it a touch og something that you think is really you to differ a bit.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Wed May 26, 2010 11:16 am

Removed the bait bumbaclart sample and put Snatch sample in there. Shortened the intro and breakdown, EQ'd the drums a bit better. What people think now? :?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by reignstep » Wed May 26, 2010 11:29 am

HAACK wrote:Been on this one since the beginning of May, any feedback is most appreciated, levels, dynamics, frequency spectrum, etc.

Thanks!



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EQing very tight, I'd just add some more around 100 Hz to the kick? and maybe some compression too
Track overall is nice man

Doesn't always have to be filth coming from me, some ambient dubstep remastered (entry for a DSF competition long ago, think it was #14)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by princess_raul » Wed May 26, 2010 11:29 am

HAACK wrote:Been on this one since the beginning of May, any feedback is most appreciated, levels, dynamics, frequency spectrum, etc.

Thanks!



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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Nullbit » Wed May 26, 2010 11:37 am

Two Tunes by me, not dubstep, but drum and bass! :D

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any feedback is welcome!

cheers! :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by redjuan » Wed May 26, 2010 12:52 pm

@trike-feeling this track,really good,bassline,arrangement,mixdown etc were all sweet man,good shit.thanks for the feedback aswell man,appreciated

@haak- big tune man really like it,low sub just gets me everytime,loved the arrangment progression and overal sound of it was real good.fair play man!

@ nullbit,your first tune mate the synth running i wasnt really feelin if im honest,like the industrial drums and the darkness of the tune. The second tune i liked the intro and the tune is pretty good,drums are sweet in it,maybe eqing the kick down a bit maybe

hope that helps.

some more feedback on this track would be nice please

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Nullbit » Wed May 26, 2010 1:15 pm

@redjuan: Nice one, but i dont like the bass, especially the end of each note is very "hard". drums are cool, but the kick dissappers when it plays together with the bass. ;)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by FSTZ » Wed May 26, 2010 1:45 pm

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sounding big...

good dynamic range

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by GRAYSKALE » Wed May 26, 2010 3:20 pm

@ Haack - this tune is a big bad one - can't say i've got any criticism - and my advice would be to keep belting out tunes like this!!
@Hakka - I'm liking this tune alot - though I think the days of samples from english gangsta movies should stop now. lol - other than that basslines are tight and the drums are hitting hard, nice work
@Reignz - liking the concept of this tune alot bro and the percussion is defo to my taste but i'm really not a fan of that synth line - bit too bouncy - other than that i'm liking it
@redjuan - this is a good piece aswell bro defo mellowed me out!! although the sub nearly gave me a heartattack when it came in - sounds like it's peaking a bit but that could be the dodgy headphones - liking bro, nice one.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by FSTZ » Wed May 26, 2010 5:13 pm

these are built for the massives and festivals...

4X4 / bounce / ravestep business

320's available

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Post by jaspervc » Wed May 26, 2010 6:53 pm

Would love some feedback on this one..
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by hakka » Wed May 26, 2010 7:01 pm

@ GRAYSKALE - Bait sample i know haha, i have trouble finding decent quality quotes! Your tune is tidy, love the drum pattern and the bleeps. Synth could do with a bit more sub but thats easy to fix. Them bleeps do it for me! Keep it up.

@ trike12 - Cheers for the comment! Love the intro on yours, maybe add a reverse crash on the drop. Drop is deeeep. Reminds me of some Kryptic Minds stuff. That finished now?

@ Reignz - Epic intro, reminds me of my Trance days years ago. Drop is big, would do some damage in the dance! Nice work.

@ Redjuan - Like the bass in your track, rolls nicely and smoothly. Good work!

Cheers to everyone thats commented on my tune :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

Post by Zodiak » Wed May 26, 2010 7:11 pm

@ JasperVC
Love your tune!!! Very solid and atmospheric, flows nicely! I'd love a 320 actually, if that's at all possible.

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