FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- MAY 2010

[redjuan]

@ Kairo B- real nice tune man,my only criticism of it or even advice would be maybe just a tad more variation,big tune tho really nice,nice work man (check previous post for the tune i done )

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[ResetTheAtari]

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- Just finished this one up. Now set out to master the shit out of it. I need to make it popppp. Let me know what you think! I'd really appreciate feedback.

That's a great tune, quite different and plenty going on. Love the strings.

[ResetTheAtari]

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This is excellent, great work. Only thing I'd add would be a secondary reverbed snare to fill things out a bit.

[impey]

Thanks alot man! For the final final thing we are going to beef the snare up!

[savox]

http://soundcloud.com/impeytelling/a-list-impey-fog-dub

Really nice! Deep bass, loving it. Shame the drums towards the drop aren't somewhat more up front.

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[savox]

http://soundcloud.com/joshhumphris/djanga

Would love some feedback people xxxx

Nice and trippy! Are those chopped up and lowered Shakira vocals?!

[Tapphead]

just finished another one today.... first time I've used vocal snippets. Not sure what sound I was trying to go for!

Modepth - You're/All

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[JoshH]

Yep Savox, you got it in one! from Shakira-Wherever,Whenever, you've got a good ear man!

[FaithInTheGlitch]

hey guys. I just finished this track, and I'm having a hard time getting my kicks/sub going well. This track has a reese-esque wobble coming from ableton simpler, and another more tech-y wobble coming from Thor in reason 4. I should really get some decent monitors, but it sounds OK on my car stereo (which is horrible). Anyway, tear it a new one. Thanks!

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[EraREdux]

hey guys. I just finished this track, and I'm having a hard time getting my kicks/sub going well. This track has a reese-esque wobble coming from ableton simpler, and another more tech-y wobble coming from Thor in reason 4. I should really get some decent monitors, but it sounds OK on my car stereo (which is horrible). Anyway, tear it a new one. Thanks!

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If you're using reason, what wave you are using? it sounds like a triangle. What you should do is in OSC2 put another analog, and set it to the same stats as OSC 1, but change it to a sine. Knock it(the oct) down accordingly and you should get a little more bass in it. Don't forget to activate it in the filter tho.

[Hellomadame]

Hello guys ! Here's one of my new tunes feel free to comment. I've put a bit of time in it and I know it's not perfect but anyways...

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[ResetTheAtari]

hey guys. I just finished this track, and I'm having a hard time getting my kicks/sub going well. This track has a reese-esque wobble coming from ableton simpler, and another more tech-y wobble coming from Thor in reason 4. I should really get some decent monitors, but it sounds OK on my car stereo (which is horrible). Anyway, tear it a new one. Thanks!

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Like this, but it needs a sub low in the mix. As it stands there's practically no bass.

[ResetTheAtari]

Hello guys ! Here's one of my new tunes feel free to comment. I've put a bit of time in it and I know it's not perfect but anyways...

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I really like this one, well grimey. Can I get an 320?

[Hellomadame]

Wow thanks a lot ... Atari. To be honest I was 100% sure I would not get any feedback since it's ... kind of wobbly. And that someone would ask me a 320 GOSH you made my day !

[DjPsychonaut]

This ones about half a week old, would appreciate some feedback, so i can improve =) cheers


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[Hellomadame]

This ones about half a week old, would appreciate some feedback, so i can improve =) cheers


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Well overall I think it's quite a good start. It misses a bit of tension build up before your drops and also throughout the tune. For my part I would start a tune a bit slow 9like you did) and then add a dozen of things after. So, tension wise, I think it's becomes too melow right after your bass patterns. You want to keep the listener curious about your songs by slightly increasing the tension after each "drop out". Still, your bass sound is really nice ! But I think there is too much reverb on it. You'd maybe want to make your bass a bit more punchy (just a tiny tinnnyy amount of reverb is fine to make it sit well in the mix), I also think where you should add reverb in on your snare. This would add a lot of natural breathing to the tune. And also (because I forgot) but a great way to start build up your ... build up is too add another layer of drum pattern, make a rise synth sound (like you did a bit) but make everything more obvious and of course anything that gets your excited about what's coming up next. Overall you could probably add more drums like shakers and more hi hats (imo, I think it's a bit light on drums).

CHEERS ! And hope I helped you out.

[DjPsychonaut]

This ones about half a week old, would appreciate some feedback, so i can improve =) cheers

Well overall I think it's quite a good start. It misses a bit of tension build up before your drops and also throughout the tune. For my part I would start a tune a bit slow 9like you did) and then add a dozen of things after. So, tension wise, I think it's becomes too melow right after your bass patterns. You want to keep the listener curious about your songs by slightly increasing the tension after each "drop out". Still, your bass sound is really nice ! But I think there is too much reverb on it. You'd maybe want to make your bass a bit more punchy (just a tiny tinnnyy amount of reverb is fine to make it sit well in the mix), I also think where you should add reverb in on your snare. This would add a lot of natural breathing to the tune. And also (because I forgot) but a great way to start build up your ... build up is too add another layer of drum pattern, make a rise synth sound (like you did a bit) but make everything more obvious and of course anything that gets your excited about what's coming up next. Overall you could probably add more drums like shakers and more hi hats (imo, I think it's a bit light on drums).

CHEERS ! And hope I helped you out.

Thanks for the tips man, i'm working on some ones at the moment that are a bit heavyer, finnished one called "buttscratchaa" (family guy sample lol) today that i was really pleased with, been reading some really useful threads.
Will be up maybe in here or in the dubs section if you wanna check it out in the next couple days.

liking your sig track aswell. peace.

[Geeza]

Hey all fellow producer's and producettes........

been away for ages due to my laptop going spastic but back with a new beat for ya I think its finished but if you have and tips or feedback id be greatfull and it will be givien back

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[DannyH93]

Thats nice geeza, especially the chopped synths

Heres mine, only changed it a little bit from the preview, still cant eq properly i dont think

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[modepth]

Hey all fellow producer's and producettes........

been away for ages due to my laptop going spastic but back with a new beat for ya I think its finished but if you have and tips or feedback id be greatfull and it will be givien back

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really dutty track mate, only thing i'd suggest is like what's been mentioned before; just add in some automation and sweeps to keep it exciting, other than that nice work mate!!