FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

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Noizydan
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Noizydan » Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:49 pm

Siderealdb wrote:Sort of new to this style, but i'd like to see what people think.
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sounding nice and jiggy. some great sounds. but... pretty busy overall - a little more space to breathe would be good.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Noizydan » Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:55 pm

baaan wrote:Soundcloud I think I need to do a little bit of leveling & a little bit of tweaking but other than that I'm happy with the outcome
nice tunes baaan. liking the deep vibe. 8)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Noizydan » Sun Jun 06, 2010 6:59 pm

Skaven wrote: Here's one of my tracks
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liking the 8-bit sounding bass. some nice production and tweakage. not too sure about the higher lead synth part. sounding promising :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by alexwright » Sun Jun 06, 2010 7:43 pm

@steeze Thanks very much for the good feedback mate, I love the piano and vocal sample in your tune, sounds very emotional to me and has a unique vibe that I haven't heard in Dubstep before. Although, I think you're wobbles need more bass frequencies to them, and it might sound better if you prehaps got rid of the single sub note underneath and just put the bass in the actual wobbles to make them sound more solid (if you get what I mean sorry I can't explain it very well) I also quite like the melodies and how melodic the tune is as a whole, aswell as the use of real life instruments like the human voice and piano etc..

@DjPsychonaut Thanks aswell for the feedback, nice tune, made me smile! Love the trippy pads that pan across the stereo, things could be a little better at the bass end I think, by using a more powerful sub at a lower octave or something, but like the idea as a whole

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Warrenwheedle » Sun Jun 06, 2010 9:06 pm

Sweet dreams mother fuckers~!

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some grimey dirty sounds you can dance to.. This shit is HOT right here~~!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by steeze » Sun Jun 06, 2010 9:49 pm

@Warrenwheedle Some nice ideas in there, maybe easy up on the 'spooky' samples in the intro a bit, or drop them back in the mix. They should be complimenting the tune rather than the other way round. The kick drum sounds like its got a touch too much reverb on it, it wouldnt be much of an issue if the hits were more sparse, but during the semi-quavers it sounds slightly muddy. Interesting sound for a snare, however It sounds slightly harsh to me, and the release doesnt seem smooth, what did you use for that sound? Build up to the drop is pretty cool, although the scream isn't too my taste. The sound of the bassline after the drop is something I havent heard before, it seems to take up a lot of headroom however, pushing the drums into the background, perhaps try eqing it or just bringing the level down. It also sounds slightly harsh to my ears, perhaps this is what you were going for though, again, eqing or making it abit quieter should make it sound a bit more pleasant. I do like the arrangement of the track, it works together nicely and feels like its going somewhere, maybe try and bring in another idea towards the end just to add interest. Overall it's a solid track, not bad by any means, sorry if I sounded very negative, I struggle giving criticism without seeming like I dislike it. Just needs a few minor fixes and it should pretty cool.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by DubSac » Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:12 pm

Hey all, been a while since I posted sumthing here...The tracks above mine all have quite a bit of feedback on em right now, so I'll drop sick reviews on anyone who wants em after this post...

Anyways, just finished up this tune- handing out free Downloads for everyone on soundcloud. Lemme know what you guys think and DOWNLOAD!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Tempers Rouge » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:27 am

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Little remix i did... Damn!! I heard some great tunes so far. Bigggg ups!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by samkablaam » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:33 am

@skaven - yeah good. like the lead synth sound. maybe a lil more low end, or those bells/steel drum synth sound

@warren - agree with the spooky samples, maybe a few less. think the kick is too clicky... pretty cool track though

@dubsac - cool track, maybe a bit more low mid. fill it out a bit.

the one in my sig isnt dubstep, but ive just finished it. appreciate the feedback.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:35 am

@ Warrenwheedle - You got a good idea man. Woulda been dope for halloween!!!!!! Maybe you should try n eq it a lil more. Big ups

@ Noizydan - Real nice vibe. I love that intro. Nice n smooth

@ Siderealdb - Like your Lead synth and the breaks. Yea just give it a lil more room. Sounds clustered.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:37 am

Well this is a re edit of the one I posted couple days ago. Rihanna Dont stop music remix. I did some compression, added a better kick, reverbd the wobbles, and eqd some tings here and there. Sounds much better :D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Bad Lux » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:40 am

SORRY :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Hellomadame » Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:19 am

HEY GUYS ! This my newest track, Night runner. Not sure about the global mixing of the track, I am always worried of it. Tell me what you think :).

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by pumice » Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:13 am

samkablaam: Nice chill beats. I liked the voice sampling over the entire tune. Reminded me of some old luke vibert. Very chill.

badlux: Nice remix. The bass punches right in time with the vocals gives a nice feel for the rhythm and flow of the song.

dubsac: I really like around the middle of the song you bring the melodies of the bass together with some chill melodic synths. Like a relaxing moment between the chaotic bass.

I'm currently out in the country for the summer and brought a couple toys with me to make some tunes when I get bored of farming. The only recording device I have with me is this little korg pxr4 pandora handheld. It's going to have to do, but I'm getting some record buzz on this mix, i need to ground everything properly then try again, but I made this today while it was raining out, have a listen, peace.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by synthlf » Mon Jun 07, 2010 8:37 am

pumice: interesting tune and arrangement ;) love the jungle breaks ;)

and here is fresh tune from my "studio" ;)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by vdbproductions » Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:34 pm

Yoo! a fresh track, what do you think about it?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by Imperial » Mon Jun 07, 2010 1:17 pm

NEW TUNE ENTITLED DOING IT NOW BY ME, FULLY REMIXED AND MASTERED VERSION

FREE DOWNLOAD ON MY SOUNDCLOUD



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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by redjuan » Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:03 pm

@steeze,thanks man,still unsure as to add more to it,kind of went for the progressive feel.liked your track,thought at some parts you could have used less or just one part of the vocal,but the production sounded tight,bass got me goin,drums quality too.

@vdbproductions-heavy track,sounds real good,bass is fuckin sweet,nice work,i personally would change the drop,but thats imo of course.nice work

any feedback on this would be nice please,shall leave feedback to anyone else (dnb minimal) :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by azza132 » Mon Jun 07, 2010 5:17 pm



PS. SORRY I COULDNT UPLOAD THE SOUNDCLOUD FOR SOME REASON :s

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JUNE 2010

Post by samkablaam » Mon Jun 07, 2010 6:40 pm

@imperial - no
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