New Bliss'd 8Bit UKF 'Miss Me More' - Please Critique!

[az]

Alright everyone! Im a proper lurker on here but thought i should at least let someone hear my stuff before it gets banished to the edge of my hard drive! Any comments/critiques are welcome as its the only way i will learn

[az]

Someone must have an opinion

[az]

TTT

[az]

Well this is encouraging

All the BroSteppers afraid of a little progession within the scene?

[az]

38 plays and no opinions

[3za]

ez man. the main thing i like about this track is the bassline, its got a really nice groove to it. i would say it is lacking some sort of lead line to keep me intrested. the track sort of lost steam as it went on, instead of gain it. if this was my track i would have put the synth line at the end of the track in the middle, and then add another synth line at the end to keep the momentum up.

keep working on it,
peace,
3za.

[az]

Nice one 3za! totally agree with the fact that the arrangement needs som adjusting and in the process of adding an aggy type top line to add variation as well as writing the vocals too. Aside from that how's the production? I know there are some 'pumping' issuess on the lead synth after the hihats are introduced but apart from that is there anything else?

[3za]

can't really give you any advice on the mixdown atm, because im just listening on my crap headphones.

but i would like a finished version when your done.