WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by tylerblue » Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:29 am

bradicle wrote:Heyu guys, will post feedback to whomever does the same. I did earlier on in the thread, but no feedback yet :(

This is Ambient Dubstep. Playing with alot of new sounds etc.

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Sorry about quality. My soundcloud hasn't been working :(

@ bradicle -- love the sounds you're using. great work on the first track. only feedback would be that the whistle that comes in near the second drop is a bit overpowering. on your second tune, i wouldn't pan your bass left to right. generally bass is best left in mono.

Overall, great work on these tunes and keep experimenting with your sounds. You're coming up with some cool stuff!
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by lpmovement » Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:06 am

Hey here's somwthing im working on, came to abit of a dead end :S not sure where to go with it check it out

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Peace tronix

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Post by JBE » Tue Jun 08, 2010 2:07 pm

lpmovement wrote:Hey here's somwthing im working on, came to abit of a dead end :S not sure where to go with it check it out

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Peace tronix
Honestly I'd say at this point just end it. This is pretty good as it is and I don't think it needs to be much longer. You could maybe do with some touching up on what you have as far as sounds. Maybe make the wobbles a bit beefier or something. By taking it any further you could risk having repetition kick in and risk having it ruined by that, or you might add in stuff that takes away from a really good sound that you have with this.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by ResetTheAtari » Tue Jun 08, 2010 3:17 pm

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Here's one I've been kicking about today...

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anyone? Think this is gonna become a collab with Grievious Angel.
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by Jharling » Tue Jun 08, 2010 4:38 pm

Just uploaded newest track on soundcloud. A friend of mine who is a recording engineer/ mastering guy dropped by the other day and listened to some of my new tracks. He said my bass might be too overwhelming/could blow eardrums out. Im wondering if it just my subwoofer that needs to be turned down during mixing or if maybe i should tone down the bass track in general.
Let me know what you think!

http://soundcloud.com/jharling/flavius

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by Psythe » Tue Jun 08, 2010 6:17 pm

@lpmovement sik bro the mans right just stretch the timing and end it good work
@resettheatari nice man like the vocal in the track crazy wobs :)
Yo can i get some feedback on this snip just wanna hear whats up trash or workin thanks.
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Post by redjuan » Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:26 pm

@RTA-like the darkness ur goin for here,but think u need to give it more rythem,add some more percussion and bigger kick,try give it direction,glad u liked the track man its now finished
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Post by Geeza » Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:58 pm

lpmovement wrote:Hey here's somwthing im working on, came to abit of a dead end :S not sure where to go with it check it out

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Peace tronix
his is a lovely track the bass sounds are nice and that voice sample is a killer!!! leave it here i always go to far an end up ruining tracks keep it simple and its a winner!!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by Geeza » Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:05 pm

Psythe wrote:@lpmovement sik bro the mans right just stretch the timing and end it good work
@resettheatari nice man like the vocal in the track crazy wobs :)
Yo can i get some feedback on this snip just wanna hear whats up trash or workin thanks.
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Yeah this is a nice track, i like the break with the vox sample especially and the bass and drum loop are good aswell. nice tune.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by Geeza » Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:08 pm

ResetTheAtari wrote:
ResetTheAtari wrote:

Here's one I've been kicking about today...

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anyone? Think this is gonna become a collab with Grievious Angel.

Lovely an dark just what i like. This has real potential the bass is niiiiccceeee loving that!!!!!

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Post by Geeza » Tue Jun 08, 2010 9:13 pm

Heres where ive got up too on a remix of Rude Kid - Electric. Some of you familar with grime will recognize the synth from the orginal tune. Im remixing it simply cos i love the tune and also dubstep so something had to be done. o yeah plus boredom!!!

Any feedback would be nice!!!

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by mrsuperstereo » Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:17 am

Geeza wrote:Heres where ive got up too on a remix of Rude Kid - Electric. Some of you familar with grime will recognize the synth from the orginal tune. Im remixing it simply cos i love the tune and also dubstep so something had to be done. o yeah plus boredom!!!

Any feedback would be nice!!!

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that's wicked so far. I cant remember the original to well right now, but it's dope so far.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by mrsuperstereo » Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:28 am

lpmovement wrote:Hey here's somwthing im working on, came to abit of a dead end :S not sure where to go with it check it out

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Peace tronix
that was pretty dope. I can see what you mean when you say you don't know where else to go with it. It ends well there, but if you wanted to elongate it, maybe you could try to double time the beat and add a reworked version of the the beginning part w/ the girls voice at a faster speed with the double timed beat... IDK.

if i had any other suggestions, it would be to make the kick drum just a tiny tiny tiny bit quieter... just a tiny tiny little bit.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by mrsuperstereo » Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:31 am

Psythe wrote:@lpmovement sik bro the mans right just stretch the timing and end it good work
@resettheatari nice man like the vocal in the track crazy wobs :)
Yo can i get some feedback on this snip just wanna hear whats up trash or workin thanks.
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it needs a lot of work, but it's a great start. I think it can be worked into something pretty sick. the voice samples are pretty trippy and work well with the song.

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Post by mrsuperstereo » Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:36 am

I've been on these remixes for the past couple of months:

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What do you think? How's the mixing (that's where I struggle the most, I think)? Any suggestions?

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by rekstep » Wed Jun 09, 2010 7:35 am

mrsuperstereo wrote:I've been on these remixes for the past couple of months:

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What do you think? How's the mixing (that's where I struggle the most, I think)? Any suggestions?


hey man , i thought the first was pretty buzzi it a some places but not in a bad way , i thought ur bass and some of ur hats could of been a bit more prominent , a bit louder , i thought that might of boosted the track

2nd one didnt really like the start but once it got into it , was pretty grime :D again tho wish the bass was a bit more louder , maybe try some slight panning ? not sure


well here my one im working on , Soundcloud
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Post by Loud Flavor » Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:11 am

@ rekstep
Pretty nice and chill tune you're working on, keep workin' on it.


Like I said before, I started this project a couple weeks ago, probably have about 10 hours into this lol, still having some mixing issues here and there.

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by spunkstain » Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:31 am

http://soundcloud.com/leekelleher/owl-fighter

new track i started last night

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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by rekstep » Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:16 am

Loud Flavor wrote:@ rekstep
Pretty nice and chill tune you're working on, keep workin' on it.


Like I said before, I started this project a couple weeks ago, probably have about 10 hours into this lol, still having some mixing issues here and there.

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yea lots of work :P

bro i was real feeling this tune APART from those wobble or watever u call come in at 1.22 , hear it so many times before , but loving the rest !

please hit me up with a reply when finshed , defiantly keen to see wat u do with it
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Re: WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JUNE, 2010

Post by DannyDubstep » Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:14 am

I just want a bit of feed back for this track:

http://soundcloud.com/dan_hardingham/24-bar-swagguh
Is it worth finishing?

Also, if ya'll could check out anything else on my SoundCloud.
I'd like to know what's worth keeping and what's junk.

Cheers everyone. :w:

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