FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

[urbannerd62]

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eh just a lil somethin ive been throwing together on the side.. havent been makin much music as of late but got a couple of tracks in the works. this ones an unfinished piece i made on a comedown
lemme know what you guys think!

[Masuka]

@ObsidiaMusic: sounds good, i see what you're going for. i just feel like the melodies are getting soaked up by the 'filth' if you know what i mean.
@RAVE: love the addition of that vocal sample. nice pads as well.
@urbannerd62: great relaxing track! loving the ambient sounds & sub bass.

here's my latest track: my interpretation of 'hectic' by ENTER SHIKARI.
good luck trying to recognize the original.

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[fassyman]

@masuka - big up man i could see this goin off in a club. sweet intro n a mad drop.
@urbanner - sick, deep and dark just how it should be and that vocal sample fits perfectly. would love a 320 when its finished
@obsidian - like the intro, like the crash but its abit over used. bass is a little too filthy for my taste but thats just personal preference.
@joma - nice and trippy but gets a bit repetitive



aiiiiiiiight heres my new one, this is the unmastered first bounce so turn it up a little

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[SesG]

@fassyman - like the intro, dont think ive heard summat like that on a dubstep track before, drop is good although the sub becomes overpowering very quickly - small gaps would add more weight to it when it is there. Drums are really nice and really set the mood, like being lost in the jungle XD Breakdown is sweet, all those twisty sounds in the background are cool and fill the silence nicely. Next piece of bass has charchter, a more metallic variation would be nice. High pitched violin sound is sick and the entire song has come together when that drops. I like this track its a bit different, only thing I could say is maybe needs to be a bit more danceable (some shuffly hats would bring it to life is used sparingly)

@masuka - continuing the baroque theme I just listened to! Intro is awesome, afraid I dont know the original song too well to recognise the parts. Kick is huge. Drop is massive. Bass is really good interspersed with the strings, so much tension built up!Only bad thing I can say is the hats and piano feel a bit overcompressed in parts, but a huge tune

@urbanner 62 - kinda garagey feel to it, defo feel your comedown in this one, awake at 5 am sort of thing? vocal is dead creepy but cool. Synth sounds awesome, growly reverby bass is nice, not sure on the subbierr one, would prefer something a little more solid to offset the skitterish hats. Very abrupt ending.....

Heres my newest, got quite a live rock-ish feel as I just used a single break to create the beat, hope you guys like it and comments for comments

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[soberskank]

http://soundcloud.com/jamiemanfield/the ... t-tone-def

[urbannerd62]

thanks for the feedback so far guys!


@ ses-1 - pads in the beginning are dope, feelin the drum loop as well. the arps that keep evolving throughout the track are fresh. only thing I would do is introduce more sounds to keep the track from getting boring/repetitive. good job man

@ fassyman - that intro is too sick, some orchestra madness! snare is beasty too, love the way it crunches. sick tune right here, sub is nice and fat. great work

@ masuka - intro is clean, production is nice! drums are really well put together, nice fat kick drum! wobble is pretty sick as well. nice one

[jstick]

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Yes its a antiques roadshow remix..

hahaha

made for the fun of it.

[EraREdux]

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Check it out 'yo, my first grime track. I would really appreciate it if you gave it a listen, and let me know how you feel about it :]

[psy:am]

@ urbannerd62 Drums are nice and chilled, i think the hats are a bit over complicated (minor criticism) and if took them out just a little it would probably add some space which could sound sick. The bass is what really stands out for me in this track, really well produced and complemented well by the lead. I can see the comedown influences here haha.

@fassyman I think the drums are sick man. Add some atmosphere. I think the sub is overpowering in parts and maybe you could take out some of the wobble. The intros cool aswell.

@EraREdux I think the track lacks danceability and pace. Maybe some extra rhythm with snuffly hats. The lead is pretty much the song and i think a bit of variation would maybe add that extra element. The lead is produced well though.

Id love some feedback on

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Very different to some of my other stuff, which id also love some feedback on aswell!

I'll feedback anyone who feedbacks me, goes without saying.

[tek_selecta]

@ psy:am cool tune coming along nicely, seems like it needs a little more love to fill it out however. keep plinkin away


heres one i just finished up Soundcloud you can d/l from soundcloud if u likey.

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[psy:am]

Are you serious with your tune?

Bad news....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WpzzGXBW ... re=related

Well produced, bassline is sweet mate.

[tek_selecta]

yea mala already did it, whatevs made it for myself not like i'm gonna get my hands on that record ever haha

[psy:am]

haha, just checking if you knew thats all.

Fair play, i think you did a pretty good job.

[EraREdux]

@EraREdux I think the track lacks danceability and pace. Maybe some extra rhythm with snuffly hats. The lead is pretty much the song and i think a bit of variation would maybe add that extra element. The lead is produced well though.

Thanks for the feedback man. Made it with just Freq & Res knob flicking, no LFO here. I'll work on some alternate drum patterns :] My problem is that i usually make it overly complicated, so i tried slowing down a little.

[mr_ooze]

Feedback Please!

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[Akira]

First proper track by me really - Wings of the Bull.wav - 42.67MB
would be great to get some feedback

[vdbproductions]

Hello everybody!
It's VdBProductions from Belgium again
Got a new track up, and i was wondering what you think off it

grtz Sam/VdBProductions
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[pumice]

@urbannerd62:
The sound quality is real nice and crisp. Very chill mood, also a very fitting emotion for coming down.
@Masuka:
caught me right from the start. Beautiful melodies with the strings & piano. I like how the vibe wakes up when you break into the crazy subs with the cut up strings stabs.
@fassyman:
I like the creepy old school scooby-doo mystery vibe with the melodies. Also like how the bass adds to this melody, looking forward to hearing it mastered.
@sesg:
Great stuff. This takes me back to my roots, I play drums in a fusion band back in miami, and you brought a very chill realistic beat to the table. Nice positive melodies and clean sounds.
@jstick:
Cool remix, I'm always down to watch the roadshow, I can now imagine what the music for the roadshow 100yrs from now will be like.
@psy:am:
love the vocal editing, keeps the movement of the track.
@tek-selecta:
love the chill intro, I like how you worked the notes of the guitar solo right into the vocal break. Great chillout lounge appeal in the cooldown, the movement between the voice and guitar samples into the break is on point.


have a listen, hope you enjoy this dubstep influenced tune:
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[MineOurArc]

@urbannerd62: Love the space and the atmosphere you created with the different synth lines drifting in and out. Real nice!

My two cents
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[soberskank]

Kreepah & Tone Def-The Seen

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http://soundcloud.com/jamiemanfield/the ... t-tone-def


Cheers !!
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