@haack - really nice, loved the intro.. think the kick is a little loud and the bass a little quiet and some EQing is needed (as in mine). otherwise, the only thin i'd say is regarding that the little pad/atmospheric line over the top that kind of becomes more pronounced over time - it'd be great to hear that at one point, however briefly, break out into the surface and then sink back down again. that's just how i was feeling when i listened though. really really feel the track though, the bass is hard and the beat works really well. finish this!
@goldorak - cheers man; like i said, the arrangement isnt done and there's bit to add. i've added some more stuff, namely a vocal chop up i quite feel so let me know if it works for you. regarding your tune, really feeling the bassline especially, and the silence at the end of each bar is really effective - reminded me of a tune youngsta might drop or something. i think the second half of the tune needs some work.. if i'm honest i think it works better really stripped down as it is in the beginning, but then again if you worked on it the more busy 'drop' could work just as well. but overall, really feeling the tune and the vibes and look forward to hearing finished product.
@nacklewit - cheers man, really great to hear such great praise. i've added to it more so i'd be very interested to hear what you think. anyway - your tune. big subs, love them. the beat needs more variation but i think the hits you've used a really sick, and the idea of the quite rigid jungle beat is pretty sick. i think it needs a bit more variation in texture.. you can see from the soundcloud waveform that it's pretty solid throughout.. try stripping it down at points, building it up again etc. but it's a sick idea and when finished will be a great tune i'm sure
@naroja - thanks alot. which bell bit were you talking about? the synths aren't actually samples and they're all quite bell - like haha, so i'm confused as to what bit you mean, but if you generally just mean the chords, then yeah that's a great idea i'll try it out later in the piece. like your piece, and you seem to have pointed out yourself the things i would have pointed out, so keep at it - i look forward to hearing it drop haha.
@jay zest - thanks alot, have a listen to where i'm at at the moment see what you think. really like your tune, nice to hear ambient vibes and the sub is so peng, but you need to either bump the volume or EQ it a bit cus even with my sub up it wasn't prominent enough. nice drum work, nice variation.
anyway, i've gone back to the tune and done more stuff to it.. messed with the beat more, vaguely messed around with the mix but still it's not in anyway finished EQ/mastering wise. added a vocal chop up that i'm feeling (guess the track it's from), let me know what you think. still not done, of course.
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oh, and thanks for making the download avail.
o that has to stay but wobble has to go 
but wob! 