FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by modepth » Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:05 am

mrwoof wrote:would love to have some feedback on my new track snareline please guys...cheers

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@kaiori breathe - v nice chilled work man, really feeling the vocal and tabla (if its a tabla)...not too much wrong with it except maybe change up the percussion a little bit as you progress through the song, will give it another phase

@hayze 99 - like the drum sounds and the sub wobble...pretty cheeky melody...not too sure about the breakdown at 2.38 but can't say i didn't enjoy it all being brought being back in :D
the bass sounds wicked, actually pretty unique track. But as you might already know it needs bringing up a bit more and a bit more dynamic, sounds like a solid piece of dubstep that could easily go down well in a set, just needs a bit more work on the sound and it's on point, well done! :D
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Not dubstep, in the slightest, but regardless, feedback much appreciated.
very very quirky, first thing that struck me though was how clear the mixing was. Well produced track, one thing is just the break at 2.40 could do with a bit more oomph, but other than that not much else to say as it sounds pretty complete, good job :) :)


I can't seem to make any decent harder stuff lately, so all I've been doing are these sort of ambient dub tracks to keep me on my toes, this one being the latest, it cuts out after 4 minutes just to keep the size down due to rubbish internet at the moment, would love some feedback on this especially the mixing on other people's systems, only really started to fully go deep in getting decent levels.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:58 am

@modepth: Frontline is pretty sick man...very chill...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by modepth » Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:03 am

TheBreadMan wrote:@modepth: Frontline is pretty sick man...very chill...
Ez mate, cheers. Glad you liked :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheShah » Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:25 am

New beat

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by suckabeat » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:29 am

kaiori breathe wrote: Soundcloud I think this is finished, I'm not really sure. Used a lot of Asian samples in this one. Hopefully people like it.
Thanks for the feedback man! Yeah your tune is sexual, I love the 'lightness' about it - everything in the tune compliments itself and each other :D
Although I would have liked to have seen a deeper side seep through, with some stronger percussion and more vivid sub-bass, but that is just my taste in things...
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Post by suckabeat » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:38 am

TheShah wrote:New beat

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Nice track man, I like the 'tron-esque' feel to it, quite 80's :lol: I reckon that you could make it more of a track by possible delving into some more epic melodies...?
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Post by suckabeat » Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:47 am

modepth wrote: Modepth - Fine Lines
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Absolutely bliss vibes man!! I can't really give any feedback other than i think it is awsome!

If i was to be anal tho, some of your hat hits come through a little louder in the mix than what I would have liked em, but meh - thats nit-picking :D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by Rubadub13 » Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:20 am

needs lvling n mastering
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Fri Jul 30, 2010 8:56 am

okay so check this shit here out....the latest creation out of the bakery...hope you guys enjoy this one....i really enjoyed making it.

Feed back please!!!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by JoshH » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:32 am

New tune :) enjoy
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:55 am

@ JoshH:Liking this track...very jungle like...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by Metzo » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:27 am

@ Thebreadman

That banana's songs pretty cool man....good idea for a track dude, I think some of it could use more low mids...
The hi-hat is a bit sharp on the ears.....I like it tho dude, its deff a good idea, love the banana's sample lol.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by MjMuk » Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:17 pm

too late on this thread, first post.. check out my track, some good feedback on improvements would be appreciated.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Fri Jul 30, 2010 6:15 pm

dude Metzo....i'm REALLY feeling that track...those vocals are fucking awesome.....my roomates girl thinks it very fitting for her....hahaha...

Keep it up...glad you dig the concept of the new tune..
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by TheShah » Fri Jul 30, 2010 10:08 pm

suckabeat wrote:
TheShah wrote:New beat

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Nice track man, I like the 'tron-esque' feel to it, quite 80's :lol: I reckon that you could make it more of a track by possible delving into some more epic melodies...?
lol wicked,
i'll defenitly work on another melody or two
glad u were feelin it

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by Siderealdb » Sat Jul 31, 2010 6:55 am

@Modepth- Love your choice of everything in this. dope Progression too.

@TheShah- Nice track, I would probably try and give the synth a break every once in a while. Mix the drums up a bit, or throw something strange in there to take people away for a minute.

@kaiori- So clean and beautiful. Well done.



Leave it to me to post on pretty much the last day of the month. This tune was inspired by a comment someone made in one of the other threads which basically stated they'd never heard a tune that made them want to run out and murder someone. So, not that I want anyone to run out and do that, here's my attempt at what that would sound like.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by Galbm » Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:32 am

New tune , FRESH :
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by melodik » Sat Jul 31, 2010 11:40 am

new one up....earthnicity

any crit/feedback would be bless!!!

will return the favour no doubt :W:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

Post by Imperial » Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:54 pm

think theres time to get a sneaky post in before we reach august :)

tunes a drumstep vip of dexx & bananabombers-gorilla funk

feedback is much apreciated

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