FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JULY 2010

[WeedKeepa]

@ MjMuk - Love the intro you've got going there. All I could pick out was that I think the track needs 'beefing' up a tad, more body to it if you know what i mean. Add some more hats, sound FX etc.
@ Metzo - Haha the organ in the intro and throughout this is ace. Great mixdown, great track overall. Keep it up!

Here's my latest:
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Let me know what you think

[reignstep]

- WeedKeepa : cool sounds man, i especially liked the intro. There's still something in the main part of the tune, one or two notes that sound too 'major', while it would be better if they were minors if you know what I mean. Can't say much about subs im on headphones atm overall tight production

- melodik : check soundcloud

- Galbm : seriously gtfo with your ripped shit

- Sidereal : good , but lacks in variety. Not a big fan of big orchestral intros but thats personal flava. Bassline is tight but just needs some switching up

- MjMuck : sounds very good man, i liked the wobble, you kept it interesting. IMO some drum breaks would make it even better. switch up those drums, add a breakbeat idk man. i love the arrangement you got right now

- Metzo : shit man, bigup on that. you dont hear stuff like that everyday in this thread. Nuff said


Remix of a tune a mate of me made:

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feedback appreciated

[sixth sense]

New tune , FRESH :
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I thought you were suppose to post your OWN finished tunes in here not ones with stolen everything written all over it

[tripwire22]

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i think this is finally done

[depth-uk]

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@tripwire22 - Loving the beat, get more definition out of the snares, layer up the melodies. Sounding nice
@enza - Big mate keep it up. Loving the melody

Would love some feedback. Peace

[Crosby]

- Galbm : seriously gtfo with your ripped shit

+1

[lightshapers]

@weedkeeper - those hats need a tiny amount of small or medium room reverb or something to bring them off the speakers a little/make them sound a bit more natural imo. also i think youve slammed the limiter or compressed it too hard overall. nice crunky/grimey stabs though

@depth - nice vocal samples, cool vibe - i kinda want the whole tune idea you have got so far to be condensed into a shorter intro and then to drop into some utter filth if im honest

[TheBreadMan]

So this is one of the first mixdown's of my latest track-Banana Bread...

PLEASE LEAVE FEEDBACK!!!
Free 320k DL too...the first one is the first mixdown...and the one below is the 1st cut...

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1st cut:
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leave feedback...going for a "chillstep" vibe on my tracks...

[melodik]

- melodik : check soundcloud

thanks for the feedback man!!!! check your soundcloud same time!!!

[Ongelegen]

@depth-uk: Solid production on this. Tight drum programming. The bass is nice, but the whole tracks lacks a bit weight in the low end.

@reignz: Pretty heavy track, enough variation to keep the listener interested. It sounds like some of the peaks are a bit squashed. The percussion could be brought up a tad and the snare too to make it cut thru the mix better.

@tripwire: Solid mix, liking the drum work. The first drop could do with more detail, like some little fx and some incidentals. The pad section between the drops could be shorter. I would drop it back in right after the sub. Like the the arp, but i think it need more presence in the mix.

I think this is finished now, made some little changes since the last time I posted it here. Couldn't change the pad at the second soundbite, cuz i bounced it and lost the project file before the bounce . Also changed the drums a bit at the 2nd drop. Tell me what you think. Thanks!

EDIT: I just realised that I uploaded the wrong one . Will reup asap. And post it.

[Ongelegen]

allright, here it is:

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[zonetrooper5]

Here's my latest:
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Nice sounds man, can't really say anything bad about this, everything seems to fit together, the stabs, bass, synths and drums. All sounding cool, keep it up dude.

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i think this is finally done

Ahh nice chilled out track, alot of movement on the low end is always a good thing, the drums are sounding good, when that second/third synth comes in second drop/part I would personally of made it louder, kinda hard to hear it with all the other elements in the mix.

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Production on this track is top notch, the drums are great and I really like the vocal samples, nice vibe and melody going on.

[zonetrooper5]

Heres my latest dubstep track, not too sure how good it will sound on other systems since I was producing it on my small creative speakers and not my usual KRK and subwoofer combo. Anyways, I've given some feedback and I would like for some criticism back on my track.

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[jstick]

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Just fannying around with Zeta and Albino for an hour or so.. came up with this.

enjoy

[WeedKeepa]

- WeedKeepa : cool sounds man, i especially liked the intro. There's still something in the main part of the tune, one or two notes that sound too 'major', while it would be better if they were minors if you know what I mean. Can't say much about subs im on headphones atm overall tight production

@Reignz - Thanks for takin the time out mate. With regards to your tune, love the harp sounds in the intro. The kick sounds great, the whole track is mixed down nicely. Cant really find much to fault haha, maybe beefing up the snare a touch? Other than that, great track.

@weedkeeper - those hats need a tiny amount of small or medium room reverb or something to bring them off the speakers a little/make them sound a bit more natural imo. also i think youve slammed the limiter or compressed it too hard overall. nice crunky/grimey stabs though.

@lightshapers - Thanks for the feedback man, I added slight reverb to the hats although I understand where your coming from.

[TheBreadMan]

@jstick:Nice work brotha for something done so quick...still feeling it though...


@weedkeepa: REALLY digging yo ish son....keep it up!!!

Check out the latest creation from meself:

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[amphibian]

Hey all!

I am rather proud to finally be able to show something that I think is worthy of being put here (and yet it's still soooo far behind most of you guys in terms of quality!). Even so, this is the result of about 3 months of study and practise, all thanks to the awesome people here on the forum! Please have a listen and let me know what you think, as your feedback is invaluable

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[amphibian]

New beat

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated
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Really liking the main synth in that track man. Gives me some ideas for another track. haha. Afraid I can't comment too much technique-wise as I'm still very new at this but the drums feel a bit soft?

[TheBreadMan]

@amphibian:Sounding good man. What are you using for a DAW? my first tracks are all on my sig...i'm hella new to producing too. at most 2 months into it...done these three so far.
but back to your track:you have the same issue i do, it's very quiet, but very soothing..

[vdbproductions]

Yooo peeps, got a new one ready.
Quit hard i think, any one who likes can send me pm for the 320
Peace!
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Belgian greetz