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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by amphibian » Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:56 am

Hey guys - posted this in the thread yesterday before realizing what the date was. Would really like some feedback, I think I got one response. hehe. Track is in my sig :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:09 am

@710:I feel ya man. My shit isn't for everyone. check out my work in progress..maybe you'll like that one better. Diggin tha trak though mang...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by HAACK » Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:50 am

@Project EX: Nice one man, really like this style right now, good drop, very chilling.

@Tripwire: Biiig tuune man, already made a post on soundcloud, great work guys.


@TM45: Sounds like Alice went the through a teleporter and left the madhatter behind, really chilled out, would be cool if she met up with the crew of event horizon, overall good production, think the clap could come out a bit as well, lovely atmosphere, which VST are you using or is it just a sample?


This ones for the minimal crew, been on this for several weeks, think it needs a bit of work so any comments are always appreciated, also, soundcloud wont let me get the track so link is below titled "Heathen"

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by kievccs » Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:11 am

@TheBreadMan I didn't quite feel it i'ts very disorganized are samples are a bit weak also, or i don't know maybe it's no my kind of dubstep.

@KaioriBreathe Really good, simple but effective track but there's no bass or sub that really got me into it, i think a good reese would be fittin just great there. love the vocals the piano everything else is just GOOD :)

@TM45 SICK! Plain and simple. Totally my style of dubstep love the atmo and the percussion It's just lovely! :1:

@Zonetrooper5 The intro was ok but the a really weird wobble started to sound and it was it for me. The drum kit is really simple you could have had something more interesting on it. The sub it's just clear and good for the track but not working at all with that wbble

@Hendrix A progressive intro would be perfect for the song. Maybe just filtering the drums once in awhile or the synth for de breaks would have made the difference. Hahah at the end looks like you didn't rendered it in the place it was meant to be and got that little beat leaked in the tune but that's just not important at all :)

@Proyect EX Loving your tune man! Wicked Vocal sample i need more of that in my life :)

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Post by kievccs » Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:22 am

@HAACK That is some heavy tune you got there! That was too much man i loved it :D there's nothing that i really didn't liked about it, it's so deep and nice i like it! :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by amphibian » Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:23 am

@kiev - man that is seriously hot stuff. A slight purple sound there which I am really digging atm (and wondering how the hell it's done!) :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by kievccs » Tue Aug 03, 2010 5:39 am

Thanks dude :6: Actually i don't know how i did this at the first place :D that's the beauty of smashing your head on your laptop the entire day triyng to make good sounds :u:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by HAACK » Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:08 am

@Kiev: yhes man, that is one sexy tune! :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Tue Aug 03, 2010 6:11 am

@masm:dude that track is fucking SICK!!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Tue Aug 03, 2010 7:56 am

Here is my latest creation..I started this one earlier today, and spent ALL effin day on the computer working on this:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by TheBreadMan » Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:00 am

Here we go...now it's working. Sorry for the repeat post, but this is easier for everyone.

Let me know what you think about Lohan's Crotch...the track fools.... :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Ongelegen » Tue Aug 03, 2010 9:16 am

@ HAACK

Thanks man! Gave u some feed on soundcloud :wink:. Very nice job! :)

@ kiev

Nice mixdown! The sub is spot on as is the drum work! haha like the 'microwave' sound :lol: :lol:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by wabble » Tue Aug 03, 2010 10:22 am

love this.. (reason4)
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kinda repetitive but i like where this goes..
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i need to private the vip or someting... i like it alot better
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by dav.id » Tue Aug 03, 2010 11:11 am

this time something completly different,

a hip hop track with 8 bit influences

would love to hear some feedback:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by kievccs » Tue Aug 03, 2010 2:57 pm

People will be expecting any feedback first before you post your tunes bro. If you don't u're not gonna have any response from anyone (Well at least for me :) )

@Proyect EX Thank you! :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Miniature » Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:07 pm

@dav.id, Love the 8-Bit Hip hop song, would love to hear some vocals over that, and maybe just vocode the hell outa them. other than that, love it! :)

@wabble, I really like the Hoodz Track Such a good feel the whole way through the song, and it changes throughout which kept me listening the whole way through. Maybe you could trim it down a bit, but i suppose if you were to use it in a mix it would work nice. Either way, good production quality on all your tracks. Do you use Just Reason or Re-Wire into other DAW's? Will have to check out the rest of your tracks on soundcloud. =]

@masm, Brutal Dubber is an absolutley Sick tune hands down. Track needs filling out a bit more maybe, sounds just a bit hollow but its an absolutley incredible tune!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by dav.id » Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:19 pm

@miniature

I like the fast drums in the intro, kinda dark step vibe there

the main synth is a bit overused in my opinion I would use it less so the impact is bigger when it comes back in....less is more sometimes:)

hmm the sub how ever is not really low....I would put it a couple of octaves lower....I can hear the sub but can't feel it

do you have decent monitors and sub? OR GOOD HEADPHONES?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by Miniature » Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:28 pm

@dav.id Still waiting on a decent set of monitors, at the moment i am using a set of AKG99 Headphones, The Frequency response on them is pretty good, but i really do need to invest in a good set of monitors. Any sugestions within the price range of about £300. I was listening to it before thinking the same thing to be honest. I was going to change the combinator i was using for the bass but decided to keep it how it was until i got some decent feedback on it. =]
I shall go back to it and have a lil tweek. =D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR AUGUST, 2010

Post by wabble » Tue Aug 03, 2010 4:40 pm

@miniature thx for the feedback, ya all are reason exports run thru the 14.2 mixer and mastering suite with light limitting.. i havent rewired a mixdown yet (dubstep) but i know this will improve the sonic character of my mixes and anyone elses

like ur tune, rly think the drum seq is solid... thats what stood out most to me. i feel as tho everything could use a little compression (very light) but jus enough to keep everything glued together on top or maybe jus a limiter/maximizer after the board.. also.. not much was happening in the stereo field and i believe using the stereo field in mixdowns is an effective way of diversifying the sounds/transitions/general placement of the track.. give it a shot and see where it takes u.. i almost gave up on the "dubstep wobble" until i read a widdler post talking about adding pairs of wobbles and tweeking each slightly, panning each respectively in the stereo field... this gave me alot more confidence in my sound and certainly a lot more fullness/presence, other than that the sequence is solid.. jus beef the mix up a lil! =) wabbs
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