WORKS IN PROGRESS FOR AUGUST, 2010

[TheBreadMan]

@dubplate:dude i just checked out your whole soundcloud. Liking most all of your tracks. good shit man.


Check out my latest workings for the day...i tried to upload the soundcloud, but its not playin...for reals peeps...check it out..
http://soundcloud.com/the-breadman/newtracksample

[LordBid]

@ dubplateguy - Hey man so I went back and listened to your track again. Sorry my critiques can be a little harsh but I am just trying to push people to their best instead of stroking their ego's. What I meant with too much bass is that your (midrange)bass noises are overpowering your drums to the point where it can be a little hard to hear them in the mix, nothing to do with the sub. As is though. hihats are probably fine As far as the rest of my comments goes I would like to rephrase my statement about the song getting boring in parts. Sure you do have a lot of switch ups but I think that it would be beneficial to put some space/rest in your beats as the constant noise is a little tiring and loses momentum. This is just my opinion though so take it as you will.

[dubplateguy]

@Breadman- Thanks bro Ill definatly be checking your page out within the next few days
@Lordbid- No worries dude, I see what you mean by overpowering bass now, and thanks for the helpful advice!

[tz2010]

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[tz2010]

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[4Trak]

@The Breadman - I liked the bit minus the percussion. It was very head nod inticing. But I don't think the glitched up percussion fitted in too well. I think a bit too much glitch for dubstep. Then the drop was superb. The wobble was nice. Gonna follow you on sc

@drummerpig - Yeah the intro is nice and dark, some nice old skool dubstep vibes. I think maybe you should forget about the wobble. Drop that style of dubstep, it's too hard to make in garageband. I know, I use it. Check out Skream's first album, try and make something similar to that, the intro to that would fit so much better to some old style dubstep

@dubplateguy - I love the chiptune inspired intro that does it for. Yeah like you said some sub is need to drive it through. Liking it so far though.

@lorbid - you're track would not load

@Psythe - It needs an intro. The synth was a bit to overpowering, but maybe that's just me?

Okay here's mine. I need some help, is the sub powerful enough, or too poweful?

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[jakedubber]

@4Trak - On my speakers the subbass sounds really good - warm, and not enough to stifle the mix. The fade out at 0:32 is a little too sudden I think. Perhaps if you had some delay on the drums just before they go away, with high feedback, and you faded it more slowly that bit would work a little more. Then, I'm really fussy about the little details in tracks, so it's probably fine. Give it a go though.

This is a song I started yesterday. It's a jazzy dubstep track in 7/4. Let me know what you think.

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[TheBreadMan]

@4trak:thanks brotha..already stated following you on sc. Dig the vibe of your track man. Very chill...liked it

check out the non-mastered cut of my newest Track:Lohan's Crotch.

http://soundcloud.com/the-breadman/lohans-crotch

[jaydot]

@jakedubber: The drum pattern was a little "awkward" for me but then I'm used to snare on the 3rd etc. Nice track otherwise.

@4trAk: Digging that, nice vibes but as jakedubber said the fade coudl do with delay on the last snare to carry the track along...and then drop it. It's a technique I've always used.

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Here's mine ^

[reignstep]

- nnny: well seriously make something that is worth posting in the wip. this is a drumloop and a padloop... well your atmosphere is ok, it's abit confusing and doesn't really seem to hold a melody. not really much to say as there's not really much to listen to...

- Jemgrover: fat stuff, bit repetitve to have it going for 2 minutes , switch things up abit, add a bass / drumbreak etc.

- lordbird: nice man, fat drums with a sub that gives my headphones some nice tremble im just missing some kind of melody, doesn't have to be much, delayed soft keys , to set a nice mood. the yoyo bass you bring in is maybe a bit unnecessary, but i like how it flows. Maybe add the actual bass sound but keep the arrangement?


Something I started today, with my own recorded vocals

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/352532

Soundcloud wouldn't upload it so it's on Newgrounds...

Newgrounds does not bite you...

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/352532

[Ongelegen]

- nnny: well seriously make something that is worth posting in the wip. this is a drumloop and a padloop... well your atmosphere is ok, it's abit confusing and doesn't really seem to hold a melody. not really much to say as there's not really much to listen to...

- Jemgrover: fat stuff, bit repetitve to have it going for 2 minutes , switch things up abit, add a bass / drumbreak etc.

- lordbid: nice man, fat drums with a sub that gives my headphones some nice tremble im just missing some kind of melody, doesn't have to be much, delayed soft keys , to set a nice mood. the yoyo bass you bring in is maybe a bit unnecessary, but i like how it flows. Maybe add the actual bass sound but keep the arrangement?


Something I started today, with my own recorded vocals

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/352532

Soundcloud wouldn't upload it so it's on Newgrounds...

Newgrounds does not bite you...

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/352532

That is not my track, it's lordbids iirc. I just gave him feed by quoting his embedded soundcloud player

[reignstep]

[Ongelegen]

listened to your track. Mixdown is pretty good. Like the bass, but it need more sub under it. Not feeling the vocal sample, but thats just personal taste.

[wabble]

some new kind ish
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some old kind ish (sample needs replacing with pella)
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posted some feedback on prev tracks would love some on these...

[reignstep]

listened to your track. Mixdown is pretty good. Like the bass, but it need more sub under it. Not feeling the vocal sample, but thats just personal taste.

Yeah I was thinking about dropping the vocals, kinda lame if I hear it now

[jakedubber]

@Jaydot - Thanks for the feedback. It's really hard to make a drum pattern in 7/4 that isn't awkward. Also the snare is on 3 . I think your track needs a bit more variation. The bass sound goes all over the place and varies a lot - which I love - but it needs change from that too. Little drop outs like in Roll Out always sound nice. You could also try hocketing - make three copies of your main bass sound, pan one 35L and the other 35R, keeping the original where it was (or whatever sounds nice to you - you could change the filter frequency on your sounds rather than panning, or both. You get the idea.) and flip between them for a nice flourish. Producers like Tomba and Diesel do that a lot (I think). Hope that helps.

[jaydot]

@Jaydot - Thanks for the feedback. It's really hard to make a drum pattern in 7/4 that isn't awkward. Also the snare is on 3 . I think your track needs a bit more variation. The bass sound goes all over the place and varies a lot - which I love - but it needs change from that too. Little drop outs like in Roll Out always sound nice. You could also try hocketing - make three copies of your main bass sound, pan one 35L and the other 35R, keeping the original where it was (or whatever sounds nice to you - you could change the filter frequency on your sounds rather than panning, or both. You get the idea.) and flip between them for a nice flourish. Producers like Tomba and Diesel do that a lot (I think). Hope that helps.

Thanks for the feedback, I'll have another look at my track....keep up the good work!

[Psythe]

@TheBreadMan Thanks man im shootin for some filth here Reason 4 is pain but im going to beef up this track with compression and EQ your banana bread track is pretty dope btw finish that up bro for sure.
@4trak I know the Wob is pretty loud im working on the mix still to get that unison down packed the grimey bassline is prolly going to stay but will be mixed better thanks for the feedback man

[Loud Flavor]

Here's a new fresh project that I started 5-6 hours ago. Tell me what you guys think so far :]
Yeah I know it's a bit rough but I'll put in some more love tomorrow, about to eat then zzzzz.
Cheers

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[Steeple]

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have a butchers people ... literallay wrote this in about 2 hour ... then me mum started screwin about the noise so gone get back to it 2moro would be cool if you lot have any ideas on how to push it!