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A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by IronEars » Sat Aug 07, 2010 2:50 pm

Hey guys, I know this is kinda off I'd be happy to be directed to the right forum if there's no room for it here.

I got this tune here I did:Soundcloud
and I'd like to re-do the singing part but this time in English and much more relaxed and quiet I think, lower pitch. Since English is not my native language I seek for your help or if you know anyone that writes lyrics- please send me a message.
It doesn't have to be long. Could be even 2-3 sentences that are sang repeatedly. I'm thinking of Tricky's "Poems" or something of the sort if you will but way shorter.


Sorry if it was completely out of place and thanks for your help:)
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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by toreador » Sat Aug 07, 2010 4:50 pm

i don't mean to piss on your artistic vision but i think that vocal sounds amazing as it is, getting another vocalist could potentially ruin the track.

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by IronEars » Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:13 pm

toreador wrote:i don't mean to piss on your artistic vision but i think that vocal sounds amazing as it is, getting another vocalist could potentially ruin the track.
if that message was for me, then how can I get pissed when you complement my singing so much hahah thanks a lot:) but I only asked for a lyricist, I can sing in English, just can't make up the words lol. You might be right though, maybe i need to leave this track be and move on...

Anyone cares for a collab?...
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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by gnome » Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:31 pm

mmjdw wrote:

read the post
:( :o :oops: Sorry. I'm a fool lol

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by gnome » Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:33 pm

Wow you can sing really high. Nice voice!

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by deadly_habit » Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:38 pm

i'll get at you later, i have books ful of lyrics, just hate my voice 90% of the time when i record it

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by IronEars » Sat Aug 07, 2010 5:51 pm

@deadly habit

sweet:)

@gnome

no prob, being an astronaut is what makes us musicians... and thanks btw, I used to sing very low too coz all the music i used to listen to was grange and real heavy metal lol
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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by honey-d » Sun Aug 08, 2010 2:08 am

I will rap for you yes?

cruel was my intention as I divide your mid section,
flick the blood off my sword so you can see your reflection,
I'm hectic as I wanna be, chaotic autonomy,
I am the modern man; modern life like the wallaby,
No need for apologies cause I got no regrets,
toss the ass of the last blunt and move on to the next,
cruisin down the five in my ride to the angels,
sometimes things get complicated, man I got tangled,
blue shirts, blue lights,
howling through the night, It's time man who's got a light

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Re: A nice tune is looking for lyrics

Post by IronEars » Sun Aug 08, 2010 9:26 pm

honey-d wrote:I will rap for you yes?

cruel was my intention as I divide your mid section,
flick the blood off my sword so you can see your reflection,
I'm hectic as I wanna be, chaotic autonomy,
I am the modern man; modern life like the wallaby,
No need for apologies cause I got no regrets,
toss the ass of the last blunt and move on to the next,
cruisin down the five in my ride to the angels,
sometimes things get complicated, man I got tangled,
blue shirts, blue lights,
howling through the night, It's time man who's got a light

:moedee:
hey looks really good actually but I could never MC. You might gonna have to do it yourself. if you wanna collab though i'm in:)
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