FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by phoxache » Sun Sep 12, 2010 9:36 pm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by blazinaidan » Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:22 pm

phoxache wrote::u:
I second that.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by AL4228 » Sun Sep 12, 2010 10:48 pm

I SEE YOU 2 HAVE BEEN NEGLECTED! I AM HERE TO SAVE YOU ! :z: :t:
@phoxache - Noice tune bro! Mastered well, the sub levels are there, changes up, structured nicely, i dig it :) (the guitar is fuckin dope)
@mrknife - Was digin urs too, it has loads of potential behind it, I think maybe work on your synthesis abit, get it abit more gritty and mid range, then layer that with abita sub just to give it that extra edge and it'll hit that much harder. Structured nice and all, but seriously run a VIP on that track and toy with ur synthesis, shit could get MEAN.
big ups to the dsf pplz :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by AL4228 » Sun Sep 12, 2010 11:02 pm

jaspervc wrote:Hope you like this (and buy it :p)
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:P hope next time you leave feedback and not just an advertisement post, and maybe fix the distortion/feedback in the 2nd track if you're thinking about trying to get people to buy it... :t:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by blazinaidan » Mon Sep 13, 2010 2:41 am

@AL4228: doooope dude. everything behind the wah is super dope, and i def think you oughtta do a breakdown with just those background parts or something. killer backgrounds. the wobble is sick too, i just have been getting a bit tired of super grimey wobbles as of late, thats all. metallic metallic metallic. awesome.

@6144: damn dude, i already commented your soundcloud but yea; both those tunes are really ill. thats my kinda shit right there! love the minimality of it all, and how it stays nice, interesting and dark. big up brotha, big up.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by xstrizle » Mon Sep 13, 2010 3:54 am

hey guys just finished a remix to fergie - glamorous.
let me know your thoughts

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Post by AL4228 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 4:00 am

xstrizle wrote:hey guys just finished a remix to fergie - glamorous.
let me know your thoughts

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by voltsunited » Mon Sep 13, 2010 5:46 am

This is a dub mix we did for one of our breaks tracks. Hope you enjoy.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by Basic A » Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:29 am

Gave as many soundcloud comments as I can tonight, will return the favor. Been rough lately :? ...

These two are seeing a release, alongside two remixes, one of each, Whyrez and TBA doing them. Sometime early november, on Phantom Hertz. Any last minute feedback before I submit my final mixdowns would be loved! Obviously, I cant make any seriously drastic changes, but any tweaks, level issues, zero crossings, ect. anyone spots, pleaaase, point them out!

will return the favor if I havent got to you pon the clouds yet!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by drdeft » Mon Sep 13, 2010 10:16 am

@voltsunited : I don't like the dance synth , but the rest sounds well ..

@basic-a-cavedweller : is this trck really finished ? Maybe add more variations ...

@jaspervc ,the-deniance-ep-mix , don't like the first track but the others are fat ! ( maybe sounds a bit familiar to me )


Please I need some comments on my last free release " We Don't Make Dubstep "
here:
http://www.dubstepforum.com/macroabstra ... 56983.html
or here:
http://soundcloud.com/macroabstract/set ... p-volume-1

Thanks :)
Let's Dub !

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Post by Basic A » Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:08 am

drdeft wrote: Please I need some comments on my last free release " We Don't Make Dubstep "
here:
http://www.dubstepforum.com/macroabstra ... 56983.html
or here:
http://soundcloud.com/macroabstract/set ... p-volume-1

Thanks :)
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In my opinion your little free ep sounds like you put way to much effort into making things sound real thick and distorted and dwelled on layering alot, and did a pretty okay job. The thing is it didnt hold a groove for more then 4 bars and had no real sense of melody, and in alot of cases the layering left me feeling cluttered, not knowing what the hell to pa attention too... We produce two different ways obviously man.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by drdeft » Mon Sep 13, 2010 12:49 pm

Basic A wrote:In my opinion your little free ep sounds like you put way to much effort into making things sound real thick and distorted and dwelled on layering alot, and did a pretty okay job. The thing is it didnt hold a groove for more then 4 bars and had no real sense of melody, and in alot of cases the layering left me feeling cluttered, not knowing what the hell to pa attention too... We produce two different ways obviously man.
Thanks for your honestly , I hope you listen them till the end ! And yeah we maybe had to work more on arrangements , its was like a bass training for us..

Our tracks are often a bit messy , as we hate "three sounds" tunes ...
The thing is it didnt hold a groove for more then 4 bars and had no real sense of melody
I don't really agree with that but you may be right ...

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by AL4228 » Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:01 pm

@basica- i kinda gotta go with drdeft... no hateing honestly, but some of the tracks are quite repetative. Minimal personaly isn't my kinda taste and that may play a role in how i view the track, but put it aside, it's got a great ambience and sounds mastered well. good production
@drdeft- personally this is more of my taste with the wicked synthesis ;) Super raw bassline, and imo it sounds fine.

Both tracks are quality, and these are just my opinions :)

feedback on my track?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by Taste Tester » Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:46 pm

@drdeft track 9 is my favorite, it has a nicy glitchy but consistent feel with some really nice bass synthesis
@ AL4228 sick track, i really like the glitchy mechanical noises in the background, but the wobbles could use more variation because it sounded like you used the same patch the whole song

this is a new song i did fucking around with Reason's vocorder and i fucked with a weird time signature in the middle of the drop, give me some feedback please
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by ghettostylus » Mon Sep 13, 2010 9:54 pm

wirez- the two tunes ive heard were right up my street. :) and i will be getting my self on your soundcloud to listen to more.
P.S im new to this forum stuff so bit spun out by it all aha
http://soundcloud.com/ghetto-stylus/f-m-j-dub

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by Newbdelux » Tue Sep 14, 2010 2:22 am

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need some feedback plz

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by AL4228 » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:20 am

Newbdelux wrote:Soundcloud
need some feedback plz
Hi :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by gonzodj » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:22 am

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would love feedback

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by xstrizle » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:47 am

would love your thoughts

yay or nay

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