FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by rekstep » Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:06 am

gonzodj - feeling this love the vibe , great style , mmm maybe a bit on the flow of a couple tings, nothing major , big up
son maybe a tiny bit of high end of the wobbles
xstrizle - im just gonna be str8 up man .. that was awful . fergi + dubstep? wat u been smoking son , sort it out

new bdelux - not my steez .. some good elements tho wit some of ur synths tho couple catchy riffs, pretty "pop" kinda thng yea....

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by JD_LEGION » Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:10 am

Here is a track i finished last week, dont really produce dubstep alot but had a lot of good feedback about this one check it out!!

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And heres a link for the full track!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/801712884eff3640

Enjoy and leave some feedback, would be appreciated :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by RobotWorld » Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:43 am

My first dubstep track. Feedback or advice would be appreciated.. This is the second electronic type of song i've made. The other is a DnB. So I'm very new to this. Still needs a lot of mastering. Hope i'm posting in the right place... Lol. Just joined the forum yesterday.



Tell me what you think:

http://www.myjonesmusic.com/code/music/song/12204

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by worldpremiere » Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:44 am

Hey guys.. any feedback on this?

I've left feed back on page 6 for like 5 or 6 tracks but mine has gotten no attention.. Now before i start crying... please, please! :w:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by walton_producer » Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:49 am

just a tune i started last night, quite a nice dub feel to it and some good vocals, would love abit of feedback and any opinions on how to improve the track, cheers

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by fassyman » Tue Sep 14, 2010 12:22 pm

this thread is pointless. cant someone mod it, so all the posts that dont leave feedback for others get deleted. would make this thread a lot more productive...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by AL4228 » Tue Sep 14, 2010 3:41 pm

fassyman wrote:this thread is pointless. cant someone mod it, so all the posts that dont leave feedback for others get deleted. would make this thread a lot more productive...
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by phoxache » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:20 pm

Here's some more feedback for the more recent tunes...

@ worldpremiere - Left you a SC comment about a week ago... I really like the tune. I've got it up LOUD at the moment. It's really clean. Sub sounds good. Nowt negative here, just positive vibes! :)

@ rekstep - Yes mate! Sounds really tight. Personally speaking i like more weight in my synth sounds but that's probably just a preference thing. Loving it around the 3.15 mark. Nice work bruv.

@ Taste Tester - That's some filthy dirty shit right there!! I've got a couple of points for you but don't get me wrong, I just listened to it twice through. I really like it :) At times it sounds like there's something fighting for frequency with the snare. Also, it starts with a really catchy riff but then the amount of glitches and edits makes it less accessible later in the track... again that's just a preference thing, I spose. Great sounds! :)

As always, any comments on mine are very much appreciated. :-)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by DjTrainWreck » Tue Sep 14, 2010 4:35 pm

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i would love some feedback on this track please and thanks :D

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by TinnitusTwins » Tue Sep 14, 2010 6:19 pm

This is the first track we've done, would appreciate any comments and thoughts of what you guys think!!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by RatRaceProducing » Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:02 pm

Tinnitus twins - not a bad first go. nasty as hell. Got some real nice percussion lines in there. Bass is a nice sound but there is a bit of sub overload. its all a bit muddy needs a good mixdown but that will come with time. some nice ideas grimey. did you use mostly samples in here or make your own sounds?
Keep at it and nail the mixdown

Dj trainwreck - Percussion is nice really hip hoppy. bit repetitive. Some nice sounds and ideas going on but it all sounds a little plastic. Somes of the synths could be a bit stronger. the mix down is pretty tidy mate which means the hard bits done. good work, needs few finishing touches tho!

Phoxache - Love the bass sounds. lots of nice fx in there. Stereo spectrum is nice and full very tidy production. percs are nice and sharp. Little simple but i like it. good work.


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by superginger » Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:51 pm

Hey guys. Let me introduce myself:
I'm a swedish ginger born in Stockholm 1993, been listening house music for 5 or 6 years and dubstep for 1 year. Been producing dubstep for a month. I love dubstep, drum and bass and house (though I dont listen to house too much after i found dubstep).

Just finished my track called "Slap Them" and it's available for download. I'd appriciate constructive feedback (preferably on Soundcloud) and I would be honored if you downloaded the song . Produced in FL Studio 8.
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(my other tracks are some shit im not too happy with... but too lazy to fix.)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by JUJU_MAN » Tue Sep 14, 2010 8:54 pm

@ tinnitustwins: nice big snare, liked the little microwave ting.. love the big drop, nice for your first attempt mate.

@ DjTrainWreck:...... WOW>>> insensitive.. lovely synths mate thats all i need to say, touching!!

@ Fassyman: percussion is solid, nice spaced out production, love that beefed up clap.. keep them coming!

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would love some feedback on this one please.

THANKS

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by rekstep » Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:15 pm

fuk all people posting feedbak but want their tunes to be looked at.. :?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by RatRaceProducing » Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:55 pm

world premier, nice ideas on a nice track. production is good, sounds crisp levels are good. nice tune

rekstep/ proper grimey this one. couple of the bass layers are a bit thin and the mix down is not quite there. A decent tune all the same

JuJu/ im lovin the vibe of this one. intro piece is nice. Bass notes are good synth is big enough but doesnt quite sound right IMO. Mixdown is pretty good, nice tune

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by dubplateguy » Wed Sep 15, 2010 3:07 am

reviewed a bunch of tracks earlier this month, so here is a new freebie. Once again feedback is much appreciated.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by superginger » Wed Sep 15, 2010 5:58 am

#worldpremiere: I liked the track... cool vocals and nice mastering+mixing. though I think the wobble gets to boring after a while... more variation please! :)

#phoxache: WOW!!!! FCKING COOOL TRACK!!! I downloaded it:) It's really like the dubstep I like.. cheers man keep the prodcution going!

#dubplateguy: The synth in the beginning is quite annoying in my taste... but the wobble is fine. maybe something to work some more on?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by phoxache » Wed Sep 15, 2010 7:38 am

superginger wrote: #phoxache: WOW!!!! FCKING COOOL TRACK!!! I downloaded it:) It's really like the dubstep I like.. cheers man keep the prodcution going!
Cheers superginger! :)

I just had a listen to your track. I really like the melody and how it transitions between the intro and the harder sounds. Personally I'd try to make the snare hit a bit harder. I like the edits and glitches. I left a comment on SoundCloud on a particularly tasty sound. :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by g1zzl3 » Wed Sep 15, 2010 8:55 am

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