FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by dubsax outlaw » Wed Sep 22, 2010 9:46 pm

@ hakka - really nice intro. the trance type synths and that melody are sickkk, and then the drop works nice too, big ups!




new one i just finished, used a vocal sample from videodrome, check it out!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by BadBoyBastian3B » Thu Sep 23, 2010 12:35 am

Thx for all the feedback on the last tune! :D I'm about to go to sleep have to be up at 4am "Damn Army Life" :P But here is a new tune! I will post some good feedback after work :e:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by creeptown » Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:05 pm

@Dubsax outlaw
Bro this tune is sooooooooooooo sooooooooo sick, drums are perfect for it love the sample in it. Proper joint smoking/trips shit, good work! I cant really fault anything in the mix everything seems to be sitting at the right volumes eq well aswell...

@balthazarely
I really like this tune aswell its sick, just maybe boost the kick a bit more sounds a bit too thuddy and the snare sounds a bit faint maybe just raise it in volume?, and maybe boost the mids in some of those wobbles. I like it though thats just some feedback for you ... its a solid track not boring for one congrats!

@Dissent
This is pretty cool man, raise the volume of those hi hats though they sound like they have a nice groove to em. Layer that snare aswell. Other than that its sounding pretty sick!

@Spectrum
Now this is some rottun shit bro, soo sick cant fault it sounds fucken hectic right up my alley big ups!

@Johnst
As I read you haven’t been producing long and you got some good effects and shit going on. I like your drums I thnk they are real tight you just have to work on building up that main bassline it just sounds a bit weak try out different wave forms, effects distortion helps a lot!

@impey
This tune has some nice sub bass, love hearing sub bass and drums with some real grove. Really really cool song man mix down is tght and everything is sounding right. I got a little distracted by your dp though ahhahahahahahaha

@BadBoyBastian3B
Not really mind kind of track, but sounding pretty well levelled and mixed down. Only criticism would be where are the hi hats? If you addd some cool hi hts with a nice pattern it will make the track flow so much better!!!!!!

Ok so latest tune, wanted to try something a bit different and cinematic with an epic buildup. I havent really seen much of this kind of thing so dont really know what to expect with feedback, let us know if your feeling it!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by vdbproductions » Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:39 pm

@Creeptown: Very nice tune you got there, the intro is realy epic, thats some nice producin

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by vdbproductions » Thu Sep 23, 2010 1:41 pm

A quick tune i came up with.
Would love to hear some opinions
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Post by projekt » Thu Sep 23, 2010 2:58 pm

I've left some comments on soundcloud to a few on here, i prefer doing it that way. Must say, theres some quality music being smashed out on this thread.

Would appreciate some feedback on my latest tune 'Mathematics'.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by jimlincoln » Thu Sep 23, 2010 5:21 pm

@ Project - liking the beat and liking the synth after the drop, top song

@ Bloodshed - not my sort of dubstep but i like the dark intro and the fx, also good lead up to the drop

Some feedback on my new track would be appreciated
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by SecretPandaSociety1 » Thu Sep 23, 2010 8:01 pm

Hello Everyone we are new here to the forum. Secret Panda Society is Rob Stern and Joe Benny who have been working in other dance genres with label and hip hop for the past 2 years. We have roots in drum and bass, 2-step and speed garage, reggae, etc and we LOVE dubstep. We formed the Secret Panda Society a few months ago in May and are working on a full length album for release and tour in spring. In the meantime, we will be releasing some monthly dubstep remixes for the dance label Different Pieces. We are in the process of getting all of our sites up and things like that. We would love some feedback on tracks and if you live in the DMV area we will start playing at events Nov-Dec thanks to THE FILTH SYNDICATE.

http://soundcloud.com/secretpandasociety

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Winter Kills - My Friend (Secret Panda Society Remix) [Different Pieces]
Rob Stern & Josh Gabriel - Disco Sticks (Secret Panda Society Remix) [Different Pieces]
Next Month:
Josh Gabriel & Dave Seaman - Vorahung (Secret Panda Society Remix) [Different Pieces] This one is a snippet since unreleased but feel free to comment as well.

Thanks dubstep community.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by Krave » Thu Sep 23, 2010 8:21 pm

@ hakka - great rhythm and intro is dope!

@ BadBoyBastian3B - nice heavy deep base im feeling it :D

@ creeptown - Filthy dub synths!! love it

@ projekt - ambient synths in the intro sound unreal!

check out this track out, give some feed back :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by wobbafet » Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:16 am

Hey everyone
Got lots of help in this forum, and I think, after lots of advice and tweeking, I have something I'm confidant about.
Take a listen, feedback/constructive criticism always welcome. :e: :e: :e:

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This just in: slow & heavy dubstep. A work-in-progress, so if you can, please provide feedback. Listen up!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by indodubstep » Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:57 am

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by CircuitDNB » Fri Sep 24, 2010 8:40 am

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First dubstep tune - feedback?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by dj2slo » Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:26 am


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Post by alexwright » Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:02 am

@dj2slo YES! This is awesome. Seriously man your idea is so original and works so well. I'd love to know how how you chopped the vocals and made them slide up and down in pitch. Your beat is heavy and really like the sound of your snare. Everything in the beat has the right tone, your bassline is f***ing heavy aswell! Love the way it slides. Very clever use of slowing the vocal and the FX applied to it, to be honest this is the best Dubstep tune I've heard since I checked out Phaeleh - Afterglo 0.01 back in July. This really deserves a signing because I'd definitely buy it if it came out on vinyl.

@CuircitDNB Punchy drums, nice spooky sounding piano, makes me think of a haunted house. Not a bad drop, but your wobble isn't really to my liking as I prefer something that sound a little less harsh, I think it would sound better if you distorted it a bit more but then lowered the filter cutoff more so it has a more gritty texture but is more subtle. Your open 909 Hat sounds a bit unprofession too in my opinion, I think it could do with changing to more of a real-life drum kit open hat sound. Same for your crash aswell, I think it could sound better if it was more high passed and turned down a bit in volume, and with a long wet reverb tail. Nice touch with the rain sound, adds to this picture of a demented haunted house in my head haha. Not a bad tune at all!

@indodubstep Heavy 808 bass drum in the intro, pad reminds me of the instrumental to 'Frisco - Ignorant'. Nice work with the square sound with the filter enveope, adds a nice touch to the buildup towards the drop. Pretty good bass sound although it's a bit too messy for my liking, just sounds like someone messing around with an LFO and a MIDI keyboard to me. I'm not too much of a fan of the sidechaining either, it sounds like it's ducking too much to me. I like how different it is though and I admire the fact that it doesn't sound like every other tune out there, although it's not really my cup of tea.

@wobbafet Nice chords in the intro, the delay gives it a nice effect and it's a really chilled out sound. Very minimal intro, but I really like it as it's a nice sound that you've repeated. I'm liking the beat when it drops, it really reminds me of Phaeleh's style. Nice deep sub and use of percussion, especially with the space on the snare and UK Garage-style shuffle. I'm liking the next chord stabs that come in and the bass drops are a nice touch too. The laid back vibe is lush and recon this track has some real potential. I'd love to buy this one too if it was released, as it really suits to my tastes. It's got a nice deep and minmal vibe, and gets me in a good state of mind. Good music for chilling and studying I think, love it!

Anyway, I hope the feedback helped and here's my track to show you:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by dj2slo » Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:23 pm

@Alex Thanks alot man. Honestly I've been sitting on that tune for awhile now. I really have no idea how to get any of my tunes out, so I just post them occasionally haha. Your tune is great as well good layers and everything flows quite nicely. Wouldn't mind having that in my bag at all. The only thing I can really comment on I suppose is that the snare sounds a bit weak for my taste, but that is just my taste. I like your sound though smooth vibes :e:

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Post by kaiori breathe » Fri Sep 24, 2010 12:59 pm

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I have to go here but I will feedback everyone on this page when I get home, sorry, I know I should leave something now, but I have to run and I just wanted to get this up. I promise I will crit this entire page when I return home.

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Post by spectrum1 » Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:40 pm

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once again.. haha
I have to go to school now but I'll give some feedback on others in a few hours when i get back

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by Depone » Fri Sep 24, 2010 4:59 pm

@ Spectrum
Nice sounds man. But a bit toooo stereo.

@ Kaiori Breathe
Lush man. Pretty deeeep


New one here

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by hakka » Fri Sep 24, 2010 5:52 pm

@ Dubsax - Nice intro, love the eerie feel to it. Absolutely massive tune, that synth is a gem!

@ Krave - Love the intro again, massive! I love my house and this ticks all the boxes. Some amazing talent here.
Hakka - A Haunting
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- SEPTEMBER 2010

Post by _FaKoHm_ » Fri Sep 24, 2010 6:13 pm

hello guys, a lot of good production on this forum......this is my last work !!!

listen !

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