WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for OCTOBER, 2010

[DLOGREZYRB]

Work in progress!

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[paravrais]

Here's the promised round of feedback for peeps

@Jaydot - Your kick drum feels really out of time to be honest :\ potentially cool tune and I like the siren type sweeps you got going on but that kick drum is really ruining it for me could do with a bit better mixing on the midrange growls too, some have much more presence than others which makes it sound a little messy. In contrast to your kick I actually really like the snare. Good elements but a bit rough overall and I lost interest quite quickly I'm afraid.

@Echoi - I like this but I feel like I shouldn't XD would have liked that lead synth to go down an octave at some point :p but yeah it's pretty sick. Would be awesome live I reckon, good synthesis and nice construction. One gripe would be the pads in the background could do with some work, sound a bit rough and a wee bit too quiet for me.

@Spire - nice clean drum work and atmosphere right from the start here. Haven't got a sub that allows me to properly appreciate the bassline properly at like 2:20 it gets extra nice. My fave tune out of the ones I've just reviewed by far. Real good work. Doesn't sound like a work in progress to me XD

[tripwire22]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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[paravrais]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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Lush, everything sits just right, drums, sub bass, melody, all working together really nicely. Do you want to trade lives? I don't know how to comment on this really, pad work is great as well...what more can I say?? Off to labels methinks.

[tripwire22]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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Lush, everything sits just right, drums, sub bass, melody, all working together really nicely. Do you want to trade lives? I don't know how to comment on this really, pad work is great as well...what more can I say?? Off to labels methinks.

sure we can trade lives cuz besides the ok music i make i got nothing left in my life to be so happy about

[paravrais]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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Lush, everything sits just right, drums, sub bass, melody, all working together really nicely. Do you want to trade lives? I don't know how to comment on this really, pad work is great as well...what more can I say?? Off to labels methinks.

sure we can trade lives cuz besides the ok music i make i got nothing left in my life to be so happy about

Aww well I aint got anythin either and I don't have awesome music so I'm still up for the trade *group hug*

[ironik]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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another tidy beat, all your tunes sound so clean, do you follow steps? ha

[zuta]

Heres another track
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Any feedback is welcome

[tripwire22]

ima post up the same song cuz i want more feedback before i send it off to deep medi or something but ill still feedback yall when i can i got no head fones right now
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another tidy beat, all your tunes sound so clean, do you follow steps? ha

just a proper mixdown like knowing what range I want each element, using simple send reverbs and multiband compression. Other wise I'm not sure how I'm doing it haha

[zuta]

tripwire:nice sounds , good song , i like your drums , maybe too much bass in your track , i like the percussive synths sounds you use ,a really elegant and relaxing tune .

Echoi: I Dont like the out of tune synth line in mainly all your track , the pad sounds and the drums are ok anyway.

Merc0911: your tune don't say nothing to me , i think you main bass line is way too loud , and the structure of your "song" is non-existent.

Three Years: your track is pure dance music ¡ , not the typical dubstep song but i like it.

Heres my track ...Again

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[peggy]

experimental dirty dubstep from barcelona, spain...

it's not finished yet

produced with renoise & reaktor

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[helium101]

OHHH NOOO the dreaded daydat this young guy posts another one lol
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[hutyluty]

@helium101- like the intro, but the drop is a little lacking- maybe put a bit more sustain on the bass and have a bit of a heavier drumbeat? like the video game feel to it though

@peggy- nice intro and bang, like the distorting synth and the drop is pretty heavy. I'm not really into this style but you're quite good at it in my opnion- big up on the rave sirens too


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[superginger]

#tripwire

nice production. well written melody and well done producing. not really wha tI usually listen to but I'd say it's a good tune, but more as backgroundmusic than anything else. keep your productions going.. would like to hear more from you.

#rubiconguava

I'm lost of words. Really. Can be on of the major track I've heard on this forum... Atleast the track with most potential. this is'nt usually what I listen to, but this really grabbed my heart. The intro and outro tbh is what grabbed me. Thanks for the listen - and now on to some constructive feedback;

*the drop made me a bit dissapointed, but I guess this is what garage is like. It's totally ok, but as stated before this track got so much more potential than that.
*FX at 02.57 doesnt fit (imo).

anyway, I posted a comment on soundcloud and I favorited the track. big cheers.

#spire

not my cup of tea, but I thought it was quite nice actually (not saying this to be nice). I would'nt listen to often to this song if I could, but I really liked your ideas drumstep(?)influenced rhythms. drop at 2.25 was brilliant. intro is a bit lame... pimp it with some more treats and wavs :Dkeep up!

#paravais

I dont listen to this type of music, but it was a good production. I liked the strings and the bouncing bass. nice hihats.

#Three years

Haha... genial! I really liked the wobble. this is quite my taste, you should maybe lower the dist a little on the synth at 1:07, but else was fine. The drums and hats should be improved. add some openhihats combined with closedhihats in different volumes... gives a sweet groove. and be sure to compress and mix your kick/snare so the sneak through your hard bass! intro was weird aswell... fix that, and then you got a top notch track!

#Merc0911

the drums and hats are offbeat, it sounds awful. wobble is quite standard.. quite cheesey melody, but I've been where you've been and I support your prod. keep producing and you'll learn so much more

#Echoi

haha what a crazy track. I liked the ideas... but I'd say the must be combined with something a bit less mindfucking haha I'd like to hear the final product

#DLOGREZYB

haha quite scary tune!!! very something different... but sounds quite pathetical at times.. but Im sure there are folks which appriciates this! I liked the synth.. but u are lacking sub! keep producing

# ironik

one of the best tracks today,.... seriously.. this filth is so epic. titally my taste of dubstep. I'd love to hear more from you. can't really give any construcive feedback since I think the track is so epic. good mastering/mixing and panning etc etc cool fx.

#zuta

ehmm... sounds like techno or something. not my style really.. needs some mixing/mastering. I liked the pads though. the break was pretty cool aswell.


#peggy

just the kind of bass I like!! sweet as drop.. drums/hats are sweet, I like you style, would'nt call it experimental though good job!!

btw, when you post on this forum you have to give feedback to others before posting you own and demanding feedback on it.. I am not posting feedback anyway since I think your track was so cool but please give som feedback to others to help holding the moral on the forum

#hutyluty

I liked the track! very beutiful and I like the atmos. Get's quite cheesey and bring after a while. maybe try making a more significant drop? and try to variate som more. big ups and keep it going


Nice songs guys!!! Now over to mine... I'd really appriciate feedback since I've spent alot of time giving feedback
here is a little project I started with today.. many things has to be fixed and it's far from done. any serious feedback I receive, will be returned on desired track feel free to listen to my other tunes.. and give feedback on them aswell hahaha good night fokes!

post any feedback on soundcloud please!
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[peggy]

@helium101. I like so much your glitched percussion, and wobble bass its so happy

@superginger. superdrums! and great subbass, thats gives flow to the track! the last drop its so cool (i lot so much the smart compression that you use it)

@hulyluty. beautiful pads and ambience

@zuta. very rhytmic track, niceold skool style reese at the start!!!

@merc0911. Cool wobble bass, the typical sound of this music with great power!!!


Its my 1st feedback, sorry if i doesn't it after my track! Im so bad english speaker. I promise that will be try to understand better this language!

[spire]

haha, nobody like my intro. oh well, i do! thanks for all the feedback everyone

[BigFatMonkey]

Any thoughts on this peeps?! Not even started mixing down yet..

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[BigFatMonkey]

@superginger, listened to champagne and stay. Champagne is a real nice sounding track, love the kick and snare they really punch through and I like the high synth, well produced. Not into the vocal sample though, way too harsh imo for what could be a really smooth track.

Love the piano and vocal in Stay, the snare doesn't quite cut through enough though and when that wobble is at it's loudest i'd low cut it just a little. Altogether good work, real nice feel to both tracks..!
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[BigFatMonkey]

@Zuta. Your track is really cool, love the hoovers and the individual sounds are well produced but that first drop is a bit too loud and distorted. Would sound much better if the vol. was more in line with the rest of the track and not so crunchy.

@Peggy. Nothing bad I can say about Emirate Eliments. Good hard dirty Dubstep! Nice work.

@Hutyluty. Like the feel to the tracks but they're all synth and nothing much else comes through. Try dropping the volume of the synth compared to the drums and EQing the separate elements to give them some space


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@amphibian
It does have a resemblance to Joker's Digidesign
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GaaFTK9- ... re=related