FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

[RatRaceProducing]

TM45/ this track was a bit too repetitive for me. needs more variation. some good soudns are used but its all a bit thin and reverbed. sounds like you have cut a few too many freqs out and the main synth is panned hard left. the idea is nice and the actual chords and melos used are nice and chilled. Some good ideas just needs a good mix down and some extras.

huty luty/ The melody is a bit basic but its the synths that let it down. They sounds a bit "fake" u get me? like plastic. its got too many med frequencies clashing in there tis a bit heavy on the ears. percussion is ok but needs to be brought forward in the track, its too quiet/small. the sub is not too bad but the layer is a bit flat.
what you using to produce? I would look at playing with the osc setting on your syth. you could try seperating the osc tones on your synth? and cutting the mid from your sub and adding a little low mid on the layer synth. Your synths need to be wider. you can layer synths on top of each other and use the layers to fill the frequencies out. you played with compression yet?? might do you good to search for some compression tutorials on tinternet thats what i did back in the day n done a world of good. keep mixing bruva look forward to your next choon

DJ Raynes - Hit you on sound cloud.


My newest is the california girls remix, lil jam session chucking some ideas about. lemmie know whats what.

peace.

[TM45]

the main synth is panned hard left.

Think this must be your speakers, mine is fine. thanks for feedback though, big ups ^_^

[chicken]

http://soundcloud.com/morah/hay-dj-clip

any feedbck would be swet ty

morah

[Grace]

Tripwire- Really liking that man, i don't think i would change anything about it. I love how it's not forced upon you, you can listen to it with ease.

Cognidubnus- I do like the feel of the tune actually, quite minimal and dark, would pitch down the high pitched noise though and it should work a little better.


Latest one of mine. Looking forward to hearing some helpful feedback
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[jstick]

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I've gotta run right now, but I'll leave some feedback for whoever requests it and obviously for the people who leave feedback on this :-]

cheers guys!

[leviticus]

A few more for you all
One Jungle and one im not sure were it fits, but...........
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[dubplateguy]

@Jstick-Aim High- Super sick inro, cool echoey noises. Big drop with good sounds, maybe could do with a little more variation, a couple of different cools sounds thrown in but other than that it's pretty good. I also really like the horror like whistle going on, and the change up for the second drop is nice.

@Grace- Supernova- Very captivating intro, really reverby and nice, also liking the deep heavy bassline, I almost feel like Im drifting through space when I listen to it, but thats probably just the acid. All in all the side gave me some sick vibes, so good work my friend.

@Tm45- Scavenger- Cool intro, sounds really spacey. dark bass drop, feels like im in a room of unhappy goblings, and the cool dripping noises and whatnot just add to the mysteriousness of the track. This is a cool tune man for garuntee.

Alright here is my latest, as always feedback is much appreciated.
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[dj seizure]

@ Grace - My kind of music. Very smooth. Perfect. Really enjoyed the entire track! Keep making stuff and sending it into the Dubs section or here!

@Leviticus - Not my type of music but the drums seem a little hard, but that's probably how they were intended. Always always always love the double time in tracks so RATED!

@ jstick - Nice structure and great idea, but the bass is a little inappropriate perhaps? Shouldn't it be a soft sub bass roller.. Making it a deeper chilled track?

@tm45 - Snare really doesn't sound right. It seems like as if you've killed all the trebles, perk it up a little?!



As for my track, I didn't finish it and it got sent around to a few heads, and I suddenly got an email about it getting airplay on the BBC, it's now getting heavy rotation by Nihal, Bobby Friction and Tom Robinson from BB6, skip to 2 hours and 3 minutes in and have a little listen. All feedback is appreciated!


http://www.bbc.co.uk/iplayer/episode/b0 ... Blackdown/

[Conflux]

@ Dubplateguy wobbles sound a bit empty to me. Maybe they are highpassed too high. They sound a bit week compared to that synth in the intro. I would like some more sub aswell. Nice variation though. Good job

@jstick Love the "do do do" sample. Nice work on the drums. It sounds like the bass is a bit too load though. Really drains out the rest of the track. I feel like it should be focused around the samples rather than the bass line. Maybe try eqing out a bit around the 200hz. Overall i really like the track. Great arrangement. Nice work!

@ Grace nice snare. Feels like the track is a bit empty to me. Maybe some drum progression?

@ TM45 Really feeling this one. Hard to find anything to fault. Very peaceful.

Heres my newest. Sorry its a bit long, finding it hard to find bits to cut out. Still needs an ending but feedback would be much appreciated.
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[pyroclasm]

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Sup guys ?! i made a dark dubstep track ... a little feedback is welcomed .. hope you ejoy it ! Big ups and respect

[jaydot]

@ Confluix: Nice idea on the choir, the acapella has been done to death now, but still, decent job on that

@ Grace: Liked that track, but as someone said, some drum progression would take it further.

@ Cyrex : Love the original, I think the wobbles are a bit erratic and you can hardly hear the acapella over it, plus the snare is a little weak. Little more touch ups and this would work well.



I lost the file because my computer crashed so this is the best mixdown I'll get, not the greatest but still thoughts appreciated?

[Grace]

Thanks for all the feedback guys!

[toot]

@Grace
Very nice chords, like the vibe in general but the drums, especially the snare sound rather 'general midi'. Some better drum samples would help the tune out. The intro is a bit too long repetitive too. Again, the general vibe is good.

@jaydot
Sorry, didn't like this much at all. Found the sounds pretty annoying but the pitch bends towards then end and the sound of the cars are nice.

@Conflux
Good slow burner this. The wob has a nice, full character too it. The gated choir kinda sound could do with a bit more reverb in my opinion, to make it float and surround you a little more. Reminded me of Shinobi at some points, don't know why...the chords maybe? Generally good work, I'd dance to it.

@dj seizure
Really lush sounds/production. I found it a little boring though, nothing really grabbed me.

@dubplateguy
I'm not really into this kind of stuff but I'm sure it'd be wicked fun on the floor and there's some really nice touches. The structure flows well too.

@leviticus
Absolutely fucking feeling "erm", downloaded it and it'll probably find it's way into a lil' house party tonight.
The jungle track didn't do anything for me.

@TM45
Nice, subtle stuff. Reminds me of losing all my friends at a rave and just getting my head down and losing myself in the music. Good atmosphere.


Here's something I made, not sure what genre it is exactly. Any feedback much appreciated.
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http://www.tootdotcom.com

[Tau37]

@Grace
Nice jazzy feel. Drums could do with being a bit beefier/dirtier.

@Jaydot
Sythns a bit too loud and straight for my tastes.

@toot
Amazing vibe. Can decide if all the reverb on the drums is necessary.

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First tune on Soundcloud, thanks up front for any feedback.

[finji]

@Tau37 I like it, though it seems kind of quiet. Maybe you need some more of a melody?

@Toot i love it, nice subdued bubbly sounds and i like the lil sub bass ending

@pyroclasm: heavy tune, i like the current value styled snare, evil wobbles there.

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Heres something i just made, its not very dubsteppy, but see what you think :O x

[IV4]

Hi check out my song sing.http://www.reverbnation.com/iv4#

[RatRaceProducing]

TM45/ my speakers are fine bud, i listened on some good headphones. Clearly defines left and right then my friend

[Tau37]

@Finji
Melodies, their my weakness, working on one atm, having trouble keeping it deep and dark tho.
Your right your tunes "not very dubsteppy", in the middle of a field at 2am it would get me dancing. All the parts come through really well.

[hutyluty]

@Tau37- For a melody, here's my advice, get a bassline sorted, repeating loop and then on top of it with your synth, work out what key you're in. Then work out what in the chord in your key goes with the root note (from the bass) and make sure you keep the melody within the chord whilst the bassline is on that note. It won't sound too experimental or crazy but you'll have functioning, nice little melody. Sorry I'm really bad at explaining things. I don't reckon you need a melody on this one anyway, it all sounds pretty sick. Myabe the drums are a bit tinny, but nice track mate

@finji- GABBA!! i'm not really sure what i could add to that really- might drive around with it blasting out around town in donny or hull, it'd get respect there, but not really my cup of tea mate

@toot- absolutely love it- this the kind of thing i've been trying to make for ages- twelve miles ahead of me in the game man! not fair! keep it up mate, you're well sick

@jaydot- the sound of a maega migraine! don't know if that's what you were going for, if so well done ha- not my thing but I'm sure there'll be plenty who like it

anyway this is mine Soundcloud be nice!

[Tau37]

@hutyluty
Thanks fella, thats my usual way of making melodies. gonna get a analyser on the drums and check em out.