New Dubstep Tune!

[Spenca]

Whats good...
Here is my new (first) dubstep tune. *NOTE* There is no intro yet, im working on it now.

Just the bass drop. First attempt, took about 3-5 total hours to make...

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Please hit me up with some feedback. I know its generic...it was a first attempt. If I can get some constructive criticism, that would be great. Don't just say "WOW THIS sUCKSzZ OMGOMG UR TERRIBLE JUST QUIT NOW U cigarette !!!!!!!!" Please post WHY you think it sucks

Thanks.

~Spenca

[EDIT] I've gotten some good feedback. I appreciate it guys.

[Sarah808]

WOW THIS sUCKSzZ OMGOMG UR TERRIBLE JUST QUIT NOW U cigarette !!!!!!!!

[Spenca]

WOW THIS sUCKSzZ OMGOMG UR TERRIBLE JUST QUIT NOW U cigarette !!!!!!!!

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I appreciate it.

[TOTALCAUSE]

I don't normally check for tunes like this, but I really like it. Somehow, I don't think this is your first tune, if it is, good things to come.................

[Spenca]

I don't normally check for tunes like this, but I really like it. Somehow, I don't think this is your first tune, if it is, good things to come.................

Thanks man. This actually ISN'T my first tune....it's actually my 3rd, per se. I didn't release 1 and 2 because they sucked. Huge nuts. I'm also familiar with Logic already because I record with my band into it.

[Molzie]

that was pretty bad. there's a dubs section for this stuff

[Spenca]

that was pretty bad. there's a dubs section for this stuff

Yeah, thats why I edited my post...I also don't know how to delete this post.

[SketchyDub]

this isn't great man sorry.. (previous comment was a bit harsh and im in a piss mood dont mean to take it out on you)

Edit: you asked us to tell you why it sucks, first off it sounds like a stripped down version of every generic filth dubstep tune out there, 2nd off its too slow there is no pace.. no rhythm, the drums are flabby and soulless and dont even punch anywhere, the sub is practically non existent, the wobbles sound cheap like you literally opened up massive and assigned an lfo to the cutoff..
it just sounds boring and uninspired.

[rogue star]

this isn't great man sorry.. if it took u 3 weeks to make that then you should probably like quit.

That's abit harsh?

Some people on the same journey just take longer to get there. Weather it takes 3 months or 3 years, if your hearts in it keep plugging.

[Spenca]

this isn't great man sorry.. if it took u 3 weeks to make that then you should probably like quit.

That's abit harsh?

Some people on the same journey just take longer to get there. Weather it takes 3 months or 3 years, if your hearts in it keep plugging.

Oh shit lol...I shouldn't have written 3 weeks...I go to school Monday - Friday, I worked on it an hour or 2 each weekend. So it took about 4-5 hours to make.

Thanks for the tips everyone, though.