FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@£urbannerd62: Thanks man! Really appreciate the feedback!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
tinman- am definately feelin 'the way'. drifts along at a nice pace. look forward to seeing how you develop that one.
Morah - i know its not the tune you posted, but that rank clip is sounding dope. wasnt expecting those sounds from the intro. nice work.gonna have to peep that release.
Centauri/ideology - sanctum - feelin this one a lot. nice and mellow. vocal samples are a nice touch. remind me of something but cant put my finger on it. alot of space in this one is good. not sounding over-crowded or too busy.
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posted this before , but didnt know how to embed a soundcloud player and only just sussed it out. made this a while ago, and had it mastered and was getting some interest from a label head, but then kinda lost contact for a while, and their output changed in my eyes. i dont finish a lot of tunes but i think this one is actually worthy of being heard by more ears. just not sure where to direct it too.
also unsure if the bass in this is too over-powering level's wise. any feedback/comments would be appreciated. i need to finish more stuff!
it's the tune in my sig. 'Vandalism'
Morah - i know its not the tune you posted, but that rank clip is sounding dope. wasnt expecting those sounds from the intro. nice work.gonna have to peep that release.
Centauri/ideology - sanctum - feelin this one a lot. nice and mellow. vocal samples are a nice touch. remind me of something but cant put my finger on it. alot of space in this one is good. not sounding over-crowded or too busy.
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posted this before , but didnt know how to embed a soundcloud player and only just sussed it out. made this a while ago, and had it mastered and was getting some interest from a label head, but then kinda lost contact for a while, and their output changed in my eyes. i dont finish a lot of tunes but i think this one is actually worthy of being heard by more ears. just not sure where to direct it too.
also unsure if the bass in this is too over-powering level's wise. any feedback/comments would be appreciated. i need to finish more stuff!
it's the tune in my sig. 'Vandalism'
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@Pete Miles:dude i fucking dig your track...nice work mate.
@centauri:Needs some variance in the track. Good work though, but maybe change it up or add a little something....
@reset the atari:left comment right on your SC..
@paravrais:I agree completely with what your saying. melodies are key. Great track..i would love to hear the WHOLE thing, but i really liked what you have going on.
@urbannerd62:I FUCKING LOVE THAT TRACK man...brings me back to when people thought they were cool listening to C+C music Factory. hahahaha..great job.
@the other drug:BRILLIANT sample man. Much Props...the synths sound pretty cool, maybe drop them a little freq wise and give it a bassier sound. other than that fucking ILL track man...had to start following you on SC.
Okay everyone...been a little while since i've posted anything...but here is ANOTHER WEIRD track by myself...one of my favorites. Be sure and check out my first collabo with Bender One:The Tokyo Boyz:We fuck You up..BUT check out my latest solo Track.
Feedback..
HERE:
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@centauri:Needs some variance in the track. Good work though, but maybe change it up or add a little something....
@reset the atari:left comment right on your SC..
@paravrais:I agree completely with what your saying. melodies are key. Great track..i would love to hear the WHOLE thing, but i really liked what you have going on.
@urbannerd62:I FUCKING LOVE THAT TRACK man...brings me back to when people thought they were cool listening to C+C music Factory. hahahaha..great job.
@the other drug:BRILLIANT sample man. Much Props...the synths sound pretty cool, maybe drop them a little freq wise and give it a bassier sound. other than that fucking ILL track man...had to start following you on SC.
Okay everyone...been a little while since i've posted anything...but here is ANOTHER WEIRD track by myself...one of my favorites. Be sure and check out my first collabo with Bender One:The Tokyo Boyz:We fuck You up..BUT check out my latest solo Track.
Feedback..
HERE:
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
d-T-r wrote:Morah - i know its not the tune you posted, but that rank clip is sounding dope. wasnt expecting those sounds from the intro. nice work.gonna have to peep that release.'
Nice one glad to get some good feedback on that one

Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
Phizicist wrote: @Morah
This jam is GANGSTA
GANGSTA.
cheesy and gangsta. don't think anything could be wrong with the song. maybe more bass? (but there's never enough bass).
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
Hey guys.
Got a new track out:
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I'd love some feedback on that one as I did it really quick, in a sort of creative burst.
I'll give my feedback later. Again PROMISE!
(free 320 inside)
Cheers,
bRRRz.
Got a new track out:
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I'd love some feedback on that one as I did it really quick, in a sort of creative burst.
I'll give my feedback later. Again PROMISE!
(free 320 inside)
Cheers,
bRRRz.

Last edited by bRRRz on Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:52 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@chicken - a war beat right here!! good stuff man!
what is this world coming to?
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@The Bread Man - This tune is really sick in places, love the percussion and the intro and the vocal samples. All comes together to make a really nice vibe for the tune. Some of the synthesis on your wobbly basslines is a bit basic though which lets it down in places. Overall it's a cool track though.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@bRRRz - Very filthy, maybe layer up the bass , otherwise sounding nice.
@Morah - Nice style and use of vox sample, melikes.
@bledbox - Good atmosphericals and eerie throughout. Nice drums but I'd change the crash, personally.
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@Morah - Nice style and use of vox sample, melikes.
@bledbox - Good atmosphericals and eerie throughout. Nice drums but I'd change the crash, personally.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@D-T-R - Yes yes yes, love the style, beefy drums, good atmos and wicked movement on the bass, would deff play this out. Will give soundcloud comment when im listenin on a propa system.
@ Breadman - Cool bass arrangment.
Bigg ups to Morah - Rank is Hevvy!
Finally finished this tune!
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@ Breadman - Cool bass arrangment.
Bigg ups to Morah - Rank is Hevvy!

Finally finished this tune!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
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already been over what i need to work on in my next track. this is my second attempt at making dubstep, i've been producing for about a year or two. never had much time for it unfortunately
but now i DO! haha.
ps @ rheK: any chance i could get a 320 of that track o yurs?
already been over what i need to work on in my next track. this is my second attempt at making dubstep, i've been producing for about a year or two. never had much time for it unfortunately

but now i DO! haha.
ps @ rheK: any chance i could get a 320 of that track o yurs?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
@ g davies - the last track ballard crash is pretty cool. nice mix, everything is sitting really nice. i had fun jamming along with my keyboard listening to this.
@redshift - the intro was a little drawn out for me personally, maybe bring in some basic drum hits or more pads in the beginning? cool ideas though i enjoyed the track.
@ rhek - i loved the darkness of this track, its similar to most of the dubstep i listen to. it has that nice dark neuro vibe. I can tell you spent a lot of time on the drop and it paid off.
newest track!
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@redshift - the intro was a little drawn out for me personally, maybe bring in some basic drum hits or more pads in the beginning? cool ideas though i enjoyed the track.
@ rhek - i loved the darkness of this track, its similar to most of the dubstep i listen to. it has that nice dark neuro vibe. I can tell you spent a lot of time on the drop and it paid off.
newest track!
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
DTR/ that is nastyness! there is too much low end or maybe its just up to high? pretty simple tune but the rampin bassline keeps it interesting, but im liking structure and the bass progression is nice. needs a touch more mixing imo but pretty sick man.
thebreadman/ this track sounds a little hashed with samples. they dont all sit together nicely they sounds like seperate samples. some creative ideas in here tho, the bassline is pretty nuts, i think it could use a lil more low/mid. didnt really do much for me. needs to progress more, it just kind of fires up and blam thats it. some good ideas n sounds just needs to be a bit more technical.
Advocate/ This is smooth. Its pretty basic, but nice and crisp and laid back. Im feelin this one, boppin away. Again basic but its got me man nice stuff. MY only quibble is maybe bring up the mid low a touch more on the sub track sounds a little thin in places. keep at it tho man some good stuff to hear.
chicken/ i listen to rank clip. top production on this one. loving the heavy steppy dub at the moment theres a couple of you at it out there atm. The hook you got going on is a lil basic. Its def got me boppin its a brutal one. keep banging these out safe.
Brrz/ this sounds a tad under produced. The transitions are to sharp, the bassline is too much, its freqs are all of the shop crushin the percussion. The actual bass run is brutal tho n the chords would be nice if the bassline had a little more tone. Just general doesnt feel like it goes anywhere to me, some nice ideas though keep at it.
Rhek/ This one is different. Nice n original. sounds crisp and would rip my yard apart with a good mastering. Love the style kinda got this oriental feel about it. Works proper good, no quibbles from me top shiz.
Sadly you will have to check my myspace for my latest choon. Its a remix of Katy P california girls, excuse the crappy myspace compression peeps. i can supply 320s on request. Let me know what you think!!
thebreadman/ this track sounds a little hashed with samples. they dont all sit together nicely they sounds like seperate samples. some creative ideas in here tho, the bassline is pretty nuts, i think it could use a lil more low/mid. didnt really do much for me. needs to progress more, it just kind of fires up and blam thats it. some good ideas n sounds just needs to be a bit more technical.
Advocate/ This is smooth. Its pretty basic, but nice and crisp and laid back. Im feelin this one, boppin away. Again basic but its got me man nice stuff. MY only quibble is maybe bring up the mid low a touch more on the sub track sounds a little thin in places. keep at it tho man some good stuff to hear.
chicken/ i listen to rank clip. top production on this one. loving the heavy steppy dub at the moment theres a couple of you at it out there atm. The hook you got going on is a lil basic. Its def got me boppin its a brutal one. keep banging these out safe.
Brrz/ this sounds a tad under produced. The transitions are to sharp, the bassline is too much, its freqs are all of the shop crushin the percussion. The actual bass run is brutal tho n the chords would be nice if the bassline had a little more tone. Just general doesnt feel like it goes anywhere to me, some nice ideas though keep at it.
Rhek/ This one is different. Nice n original. sounds crisp and would rip my yard apart with a good mastering. Love the style kinda got this oriental feel about it. Works proper good, no quibbles from me top shiz.
Sadly you will have to check my myspace for my latest choon. Its a remix of Katy P california girls, excuse the crappy myspace compression peeps. i can supply 320s on request. Let me know what you think!!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
Hey guyss, will feedback on a few tunes in a sec!
heres my latest:
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Tried making it completely different from the original, but it sounded shit so I kept it similar. might have another go though!
heres my latest:
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Tried making it completely different from the original, but it sounded shit so I kept it similar. might have another go though!
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
- Trainrek : it's an okay remix, but as im a huge huge fan of the original i kinda feel like you ruined it... it just lacks smoothness and structure for me..
- RatRaceProduction : like my comment on trainrek , it's not a bad remix (and no im not a fan of the original
) , but i feel like there's some kinda structure missing, you start up with a bassline , no buildup or anything just plain 3mins of bass & vocals. doesn't really do it for me
- dubsax : feeling this, sounds well produced
- rhek : sounding clean mate, i just feel like the sub is abit too low hitting at some points, i can hardly feel it
I finished up my track Money , uploaded a clip of the finished version... I had to cut/paste the breakdown & 2nd drop cause my project file crashed
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PS: Paravrais, cheers for the kind words in the WIP threat , I do spend alot of attention to key
- RatRaceProduction : like my comment on trainrek , it's not a bad remix (and no im not a fan of the original

- dubsax : feeling this, sounds well produced

- rhek : sounding clean mate, i just feel like the sub is abit too low hitting at some points, i can hardly feel it
I finished up my track Money , uploaded a clip of the finished version... I had to cut/paste the breakdown & 2nd drop cause my project file crashed

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PS: Paravrais, cheers for the kind words in the WIP threat , I do spend alot of attention to key

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@RatRaceProducing
Good instrumental but the vocals sounds off key
Other than that its well made production wise
@Trainrek
Sounds nice! Cool wobble man! Abit soft for my taste, but I definitely like it, love that hihat in the background
@reignz
badass vocal man, nice filth wooble too, I like that fill haha
here is my newest track, uploaded a wip in the works-in-progress thread some time ago, school has started ruining me, can't produce tracks as much anymore because I get back home from school so late except on weekends.
Anyway, here is the link, give a comment
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Good instrumental but the vocals sounds off key

@Trainrek
Sounds nice! Cool wobble man! Abit soft for my taste, but I definitely like it, love that hihat in the background

@reignz
badass vocal man, nice filth wooble too, I like that fill haha

here is my newest track, uploaded a wip in the works-in-progress thread some time ago, school has started ruining me, can't produce tracks as much anymore because I get back home from school so late except on weekends.

Anyway, here is the link, give a comment
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010
Cheers for the comments! Good to hear people diggin that style -TY!
@Reignz - Yeah the notes are a bit too low.. it was an old tune that was too far gone to change the whole scale up unfortunately
- im still pretty pleased with it tho
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@Reignz - Yeah the notes are a bit too low.. it was an old tune that was too far gone to change the whole scale up unfortunately


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