FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- OCTOBER 2010

[Debaser1]

@soosh: I love this mate, its really different and atmospheric and, hmmm I don't know, it just kinda gets to you - in a good way. All I'd recommend it getting a lovely thick sine way sub in there somewhere. Fatten it up a bit. You've deffo got the foundations for an awesome track here though.

[ETRO]

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[Krypto]

Heres my first tune, made on the FL 9 demo (got the full version now )

Any feedback is appreciated

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Forgot to mention - its a free dl

[streetxlite]

@Krypto
You also forgot to mention any feedback for anyone else.
This is a feedback thread after all, or did you not read the first post?

@ETRO
Same to you homie. Get with it, no one will feedback you
if you can't take 5 minutes to listen to something and post some advice or an honest critique.

FYI: THIS IS A FEEDBACK THREAD,
NOT A "HEY EVERYONE LOOK AT ME!!" THREAD.
THEREFORE: POST FEEDBACK FIRST

what's so hard to get about that?
didn't there used to be common sense in this thread, or was i mistaken?

[Debaser1]

@Krypto
You also forgot to mention any feedback for anyone else.
This is a feedback thread after all, or did you not read the first post?

@ETRO
Same to you homie. Get with it, no one will feedback you
if you can't take 5 minutes to listen to something and post some advice or an honest critique.

FYI: THIS IS A FEEDBACK THREAD,
NOT A "HEY EVERYONE LOOK AT ME!!" THREAD.
THEREFORE: POST FEEDBACK FIRST

what's so hard to get about that?
didn't there used to be common sense in this thread, or was i mistaken?

WOO

[superginger]

(typing when listening)


#bugsky sounds like breakbeat??? correct me if I'm wrong but wow I love the track mate a perfect track

#bradicle chill track mate great atmos. nice perc and drums! I wouldnt call this dubstep though

#soosh21 a very special track indeed! I like the sampling... it's chilled 4 sure A bit hiphop style on this! I like it big ups

#dougriley hmm... mystic intro! you ahve to make the drop more siginificant though! it was too unexpected.. and chill with the reeverd mate it's too much.

#den5hion nice intro... really like the atmos!!! hmm ok the guitar riff or w/e is ok, nothing wrong with it but a I'd prefer some more power! sick droppppp mate I love this midranged kinda shit sweet LFO-variation and the track as whole is very good

#kesek I love your tracks you know it

well... here is my production! obne of those projects which you spend such long time on but doesnt get the results that you imagined... :/ I am not too happy with this but I want to see if anyone appriciates it. post any feedback on soundcloud please!! cheers
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[Njamimars]

@Above, I really like it man, the intro is great, try to let your drums jump out of the song more since the bass is kinda dominating.\


As for me, I've tried something else, it's a fucking mess, but I want to know what you think of it haha.

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[nonXero]

"Industrial Revolution" to be released in December on my debut album "DubtroniX"! Really proud of this one... have a listen and thanks for the support and feedback! #dubstep #idm #bass #wobble #industrial



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[Echoi]

@ Bradicle : Pretty sweet little number there mate, well produced, lovely synths.

@ Soosh21 : Soothing sounds in this one, excellent percussion work, wouldve liked to have heard a bit more processing on them, just so they didnt sound so stock, but great work all the same.

@ Den5hion : Only listened to Fluoxetina, pretty hectic, felt a bit lacking towards the end, got a tad samey, nice clean punchy sound, big up.

[dougriley]

@krypto: as a fl studio user myself, I must say that is an impressive first track! although the intro and build sounds darn good, I would try to throw some sort of atmosphere in the background or maybe some sort of effect over your melody

@njamimars: you def have a lot of cool aspect to your track, just need to tighten the whole thing up a good amount... need some sort of structure imo

and thanks for the feedback on my track! still consider myself quite the am in terms of music production; all the feedback is extremely helpful

[bradicle]

@ ETRO. Like the intro, nice sounding synths. Haha real different drop, I like it, sounds like a V8 hooning down the road haha! Nice.

@ Krypto. Intro synth sounds like flux pavillion - got 2 know aha. Nice drop, sick of that stock FL vox sample though. I think drums could come through a bit more, get a smashing snare/clap in there. Kick needs to come through and be more powerful. Good job on the first track though

@ superginger. Haha cheers boss. I don't even know what i'd call it. Nice piano on the intro of yours, real nice synth once again. Fucking cool hook! Nice drop, Sub bass needs to be thumping through. My sub's not even moving. Apart from that sounds good. Maybe even bring the vol down on the synth vol, and up the sub bass! Enjoying it though.

@ Echoi (Tune in sig). Nice percussion on intro, nice and peacful! Has a real spacey/airy feel to it, diggin!!!

This is my new one think i'm finished. Tried to go real dark, and quite different.

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[tripwire22]

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just about done with this remix i think

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[spectrum1]

@Debaser1 (Subject - Boop)
What a wierd track! Never really heard anything like it. Drums are extremely weak i have to point out, but everything else sounds pretty good. I like it.

@ETRO (ETRO - Rodeo)
Intro is really funky, drop is cool but lacks power, and sounds like a massive preset.

@Krypto
Sounds alright, drums lack power, and kind of generic. Sub is overpowering alot of stuff too.

@superginger
Posted feedback on SC

Njamimars
Is that intro pad a preset? I swear I've heard it somewhere lol. Sounds like you used glitch way too much tbh.

@bradicle
Little bit too chilled out for me, but I can appreciate it. Like the sub line. But the whole thing sounds a bit too limited or something. Percussion is intresting!

@tripwire22
you've been on the forum long enough to know you should give feedback to others first no? but anyways, track is alright but kind of too simple for my linking. but thats just me. mixdown is reaaaally good.


Alright finished an (old) tune but now its new, feedback would be much appreciated, as would SC comments!
Will return feedback!

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[soosh21]

Thanks for the comments on the last one. Might add a bit more sub, phatten it up. Anyhows, here some new feedback for others........ im not really into straight up dubstep these days but will give my thoughts on your production etc....


@tripwire, wheres your feedback dude? anyway, nice remix,liked the vocals and the drums are tight. There aybe too much bitcrushing going on the synth thats throughout most the track. pretty sharp sounding. maybe that what your after though. good effort.

@spectrum- heavy track, nice synth work throughout. I found the breakdown a bit dissapointing just wasnt feeeling the vibe, but like it again when it kicks back in. dope.

@bradicle- yeah man liking the tribal feel. nice and haunting. liked the space in your track, something different than the usual. maybe too much low end biz going on? you could fill out the higher end more with something? nice one.

@echoi- again, nice tribal feel, heavy relaxed. think the track needs one more element to finish it off, maybe some more percussion on top of the main one that runs though it.

@njamers- crazy track.....bit too mental for my liking. too much distortion going on here, found it hard to listen to. sorry! its late here though and im looking for some more chillax,

@superginger- nice intro, draws you in.cool drop as well. liked your vocal samps, cooool! yeah this is a dirty one alright! good job son.

@etro- heavy track too! although you should feedback others first! like your synthwork here. maybe mix it up a wee bit more got repertive near the end.

@debasser- crazy track....i enjoyed its intensity, like being in a car chase or soemthing! Its almost like an anthem in the middle breakdown building up the climax. its need to be longer though, and maybe a few new part to mix it up. Work on it!

@den5hion- yeah man i enjoyed this too. like your clean use of sampling, and the contrast with your dirty dutty dubstep......this would get people dancing for sure!! Doesnt really need anything.

@jaydot- like your intro, great atmosphere....like the rain, and the diff keys.really relaxing tune, quite moving dude.......keep it up. nice job boss! I think your drums are a little simple thats my only critism...get your percussion going.....make it more intricate.

@streetxlite- big big drop my friend. sounding good. terrorstep alright! i really like the track after 55 seconds in! intresting synth work! yeah man this is ready to go. i see your in BC as well, im here from scotland for the next 6 months.

That should do it for now!!


cheers

[soosh21]

Wooops, forgot to add my tune...... im quite pleased with this one. Free downloads for the moment as well, its a little bit heavier than my last one. A wee bit anyway... Its a longish track with lots of changes til the end, be good to hear what you folks think.

Anyway, i think people should be sharing feedback more...too many users and abusers! lately Well you know what i mean...



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Cheers

[tripwire22]

Wooops, forgot to add my tune...... im quite pleased with this one. Free downloads for the moment as well, its a little bit heavier than my last one. A wee bit anyway... Its a longish track with lots of changes til the end, be good to hear what you folks think.

Anyway, i think people should be sharing feedback more...too many users and abusers! lately Well you know what i mean...



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Cheers

def sorry i didnt feedback anyone but i posted up the song and went to bed.

ur song sorta reminds me of FLying lotus alot which i obviously dig

@spectrum def a well done track bit brutal like the strings stab line very well done mate

[A-List]

@ superginger - i like that vocal sample... i think the main bass is a little too loud though, very weird sound aswell haha! but i like it.

@ Njamimars - this really isnt to my taste, im not a big fan of the glitchy type thing. im not sure if is the mixdown/mastering, or if youve just used dodgy sounding drum samples, but they seem to sound like theyre clipping or something? i dont mean to offend you in anyway btw man! just not to my taste.

@ bradicle - VIBES bro!.. dark and deep.. i like it, things seem to be mixed well.. drums are nice.. big up.

@ tripwire22 - intro, I LIKE IT ALOT! then the main part came in, and i liked it even more, this is such a nice chiller! i like the vocals aswell man, nice find!

@ spectrum1 - that intro is very intense... sorta cinematic like, i liked it alot, it drew me into the song. and when it dropped i again, like tripwires song, liked it even more... very nice sounds used, they all compliment eachother.. and nice mixdown overall man!

@ soosh21 - im not sure if theres something up with soundcloud widget, but it keeps freezing at 0.28 of your track, and i cant really give any feedback on 28 seconds of a track haha!.. ill try to refresh afew more times... the other songs are working fine :S

OK, so 2 new chillers from A-List

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[twistedproductions]

http://soundcloud.com/twistedproductions/untitled-3

[Thuun]

Etro:
I like the tune, bass noises and melodies.
One criticism is the way the drop sounds like a continuous buildup, and never really gets 'there', to the point where Im rockin. Interesting if placed nicely in a set though !
Streetxlite:
Great tune, very cool video game like noises. I would suggest boosting the sub bass on your noises if anything.
Alist:
I like the mellow atmospheric vibes. Clean subs and well filtered instruments. You certainly know what youre doing, keep it up !

Heres one I posted not too long ago, but was made a little while ago.
Lost in the Electronic Dreamland by THuuN
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