FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Johnst » Thu Nov 04, 2010 2:57 pm

AFresh wrote:Don't really have anything to post, but I'll comment on some that I have listened to.
cheers for the feedback! very kind of you, i'll make sure to comment on anything i see you leave in the future.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by superginger » Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:02 pm

#jstick
cool track. I like the effects you are using... gives the track a very special touch :) would be fun to hear more from you in the future!

#legend4ry
hehe... way over my head, but I think it's asweet pad and drums and the percs are just perfect. very chilled track mate,I like it alot :)

#GDavies
excellent percussion mate.it makes the track so good :) drop was ok, not my cup of tea, but it's well produced :)

#rhek
nice electronic intro :) WOAH! sweeet drop mate! I love this kind of dubstep :D I love the bleeps. I DL'd the track! big ups for this one mate ;)

#thebender
coool track mate :) sweet dub-hop.

#jayzet
chill track! but there are like 1000k songs just sounding like this :/ sorry

#naw
nice track! i like this shit :D but I definatly think you ahve to do something with it which indicates a bit of perosnal style :) the track's a bit alike other tracks.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Galbm » Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:02 pm

A new Dubstep Remix and now for Ian Carey - Keep On Rising.
Let me know your opinion on it :
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by superginger » Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:21 pm

Galbm wrote:A new Dubstep Remix and now for Ian Carey - Keep On Rising.
Let me know your opinion on it :
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wow! I like it.. though I think you slow down the guitar sample a little. please post some feedback to others too :)
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by tripwire22 » Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:16 pm

Galbm wrote:A new Dubstep Remix and now for Ian Carey - Keep On Rising.
Let me know your opinion on it :
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sounds alot like borgore but i liked it man good work
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Thebender » Thu Nov 04, 2010 8:37 pm

Thanks for the feedback guys. wasnt shure how it would go over since there isnt much or any lfo going on.
I cleaned it up a bit and added some cool lil things to spice it up. also its up for download if anyones interested.
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@ Galbm shits pretty dope. sounds like you put some work in there

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by judge_banks » Thu Nov 04, 2010 10:47 pm

@superginger... that shit is heavy man. AGGRESSIVE. Not my personal style, but really cool job on the synths. Drums seem a bit quiet to me in the mix, but just my 2 cents. The piano riff is really sick, I love hearing more traditional instruments in electronic music.

@Galbm... Really cool sample. Again a bit more aggressive on the bass then I usually like, but they're some dope sounds nonetheless and overall pretty well done!

@Tripwire22... that's more my style! haha reaallllyyy chill sir, I LOVE the work you did on the drums. I get caught up doing all this halftime dubstep stuff but I'd love to do some more intricate stuff like that. The drop is smooth as shit. One complaint, this song makes me want to smoke a blunt and I ain't got none haha!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by wwwmoo » Fri Nov 05, 2010 4:39 am

@superginger - I have no aversion to dirty wobbles... but this one is just not enjoyable to listen to. Don't have much feedback other than that, I just can't give you anything but that. The piano intro is pretty good, but kinda dull, put some effects on it or something.

@galbm - Your wobble does not match the tune of the song you're remixing. Doesn't make much sense to me honestly. It would fit a lot better on a tune that wasn't a remix honestly

@thebender - Funky! Nice nice nice one. I love the variation and how this whole tune just fits together. Thanks for the DL, likin the style on this one. Keep it up

@Judge_banks - Hmmm... I can't tell if I like this one or not. This is well put together, you could pull the bassline out a bit more and put the synth back in the mix a bit. Also, make the breakdowns much shorter after the drops, and maybe make the drops longer. Some more variation in the actual bassline would be awesome too, something special for the second drop.

Here is the tune i'm tryin to push, remix of Skream's Memories of 3rd Base. Deep one, don't know if any of y'all will like it ;P

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by DjPsychonaut » Fri Nov 05, 2010 12:05 pm

@wwwmoo; lovin the memories of 3rd base remix, nice and chilled minimal stuff. well produced too.

@ judge_banks; nice bass, and the stabs are cool, not sure about that rising synth tho. one you get on logic and massive you'll be sorted man!

@Thebender; interesting tune, it's very hip hop / breaks. i think a little less bitcrushed on the synth tho methinks.

@tripwire22; nice and minimal, lovin the drumbeat man, nice one.


Here's one I've been working on in the past week, just finnished it up for firework night :) feedback is much much appreciated...

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Basic A » Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:07 pm

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Thought Id try to use a mellotron, and it built into this accross about an hour... Not my normal style at all, typically Im on a much darker/subbier vibe... but Ive been in a melodic mood lately so what can I say?

Might give it out as a free 320? You decide for me.

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Post by Basic A » Fri Nov 05, 2010 1:09 pm

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by 23seconds » Fri Nov 05, 2010 2:49 pm

DjPsychonaut - the vocals are too quiet
Basic A - nice vibe, man

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by superginger » Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:08 pm

#soosh21
Nice chill track mate :) I like the liquid feel in it! sweet samples mate :D I like alot!

#Sinisterbeats
wow. I like the guitar or whatever it is! very cools effects :D sweet intro as whole. Nice drop... very chilled wibe! a bit hiphopfeel in the song :) nice saxophone aswell!

#+3
not my cup of tea really, but I like the vocoding effects. nice chill atmos :)

here mys new hiphop/chillstep track. hope you guys like it... I really experimented with this one :) post any feedback on soundcloud please :D cheeers
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Sinisterbeats » Fri Nov 05, 2010 6:42 pm

@superginger - nice fat punchy drums, not too keen on the snare. Really like that muted guitar/plucking sound thing?? Like the cybals. Gets a bit repetitive, maybe try and switch it up a bit more with some extra percussion.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Thebender » Fri Nov 05, 2010 7:33 pm

Thanks for the good feedback everyone.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by insideriot » Fri Nov 05, 2010 8:16 pm

Evening guys,

Any chance of some feedback on this one please?

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Fairly old track that I finished recently.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by soosh21 » Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:30 pm

@superginger- yeah man enjoyed this , nice and relaxing. only thing id say is try mixing your drums a bit, the beat got a bit repetitive but liked the general progression of the tune.
@basic a- man this is a cool track, good use of space and low end....nice haunting pads..a deep vibes here! well mixed on my monitors.

@wwwmoo- nice man, really relaxing, for the snare seems a bit out of place...ie maybe change the snare, its a bit high and empty sounding. enjoyed the breakdowns.

@judgebanks- not my style of music but htis is well done....good first attempt on cubase! the synths got a bit too much for me, but i know a lot of dudes would like this!

My new one, more in the dream-haze-step vibe...... 8)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by zonetrooper5 » Fri Nov 05, 2010 10:54 pm

Got a new song I just finished today for bonfire night, hope you guys enjoy it, will be giving feedback soon. :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Asterix » Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:24 pm

#jstick
Nice tune not bad ... keep at im liking :wink:

#legend4ry
Chiiiiiiil trak

#GDavies
Bigger drop :z:

EZz check it out guys idk what to think ...comments on soundcloud would be nice :wink:

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by arisemprex » Sat Nov 06, 2010 12:20 am

@superginger I like that bell synth makes the drop sound so heavy! its like, ooo nice is nice…then…damn…that was filthy lol nice job

@galbm that intro was killer dude…over all great track, bass sounds great and heavy :)

@thebender that shit was fucken sick dude, flowed really good. i was bobbing my head like a bobble head hah,,,


First off I am fairly new at production...I dont exactly know what im going for but I love to sit down at my computer and try to make diff sounds. Ive started producing last year, slowly im learning everyday but it gets a little hard. Im currently learning how mix shit down...work a bit more with vocals n such. Heres some of my stuff...I know it doesnt sound great, but its as good as I can do right now and I hope to get better. PLease if you have some time check out my other songs on soundcloud and leave a comment! I feel so far behind but im trying my best to figure everything out. THank you.

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