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[kri8ive]

You're not a Jedi - Kri8ive
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[djb]

I like the jedi tune, I think the chambering round and subsequent gunshot samples are a little out of place though... the beat is great and the synth and bass parts are as well, I'd like to see a bit more of an intro/buildup as this would help the track seem less redundant
on fireworks, the tune is a bit quiet but it sounds good, if it's the finished length it needs more of an outro... but that's just my personal opinion on tracks, they should have an intro, two breaks and an outro and be at least three minutes...

[C AverRage]

.. but that's just my personal opinion on tracks, they should have an intro, two breaks and an outro and be at least three minutes...

Yeahh thats applicable but really what you make is what you make as long as what you make sounds good But jedi is Cool man.

[kri8ive]

Hey guys thanks for your comments and feedback! I just want to let you know that I am working on another one! I will post it as soon as I can! Just tryna make it very good!

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