FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

[hrak]

Two new tracks. What ya think?

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[TRaffikz]

i think you should give feedback

[LordBid]

@Traffikz - lol at the track name. Great noises, and the overall flow is pretty cool for sure. Mix is good, I think my main problem is how stagnant your hihats sound, they are a little loopy for this style of tune. Its well produced for sure, but something about the drum and bass flow is not helping your groove out.

@Jaydot - Im just not a fan of that future garage stuff... But here is my two cents those opening hi-hats need to have way more going on than what they are doing in the beginning, also they are dominating the mix way too hard like it blots out all the other drums. Right now it kinda sounds like one big loop over and over. yea levels and mix-down need a lot of work I think. Overall in all the songs your hihats stand out too much and are too simplistic. You need to work on your mixes methinks.

[JayZest]

Sinisterbeats - really feeling that man, nice.

Something i could do with feedback on this one, finished it few weeks back.

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[qwaycee_]

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Just did this in one session last night. Probably could work on it more but I'm just goin to leave it raw I think. Pm if you want a 320.

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[kaiori breathe]

@hrak there's some great musical ideas in the first one, but not enough variation for my tastes. Second tune is much better, much more full, much more progression of ideas that feels very natural and slick, great sounds too.

@TRaffikz love it man, sick tune, really well put together, great sounds, great ideas, great vibes, well done, nothing bad to say about this one.

@LordBid nice sounds and change ups man, great use of variation and some great synths in here, it's not lacking in the musical content either, all very well written with great flow.

@ JayZest not so keen on this kinda stuff usually, so it's hard for me to comment, it's a bit nothingy to me, it's well produced mind you, and your sounds are good, just seems to be lacking something to me :S I dunno man, it's not really my style so you should probs just ignore everything i've said.

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[TRaffikz]

@ Kaiori Breathe: Wow, awesome to get a good comment from you. I love your music!
Once again, man, your tune doesnt fail to impress me. Mix is crystalclear, the texture is so rich!
Fuck, the vibe on this one, sooooo smoothe. Excellent job!

(My tune is in my sig now)

[LordBid]

@kaori Breathe -lol I feel the same as above. your track is so chill The melodical work is extremely emotional which is great. Honestly have nothing negative to say about it and I faved it ha.

[Kes-Es]

Jayzest- Brilliant track IMHO, I love the pad you're using, and your percussion is really crisp and neat, My only real critique would be that I only know there's bass because my sub is kicking a bit of air, I'd Love to hear some mid presence on it, not anything extreme, just enough to give the bass more stomping ground in the track.
Even then it's still sick though, good work.

Abz- This track is so laid back and chill but upbeat at the same time, Really original style to it as well, It's really suiting my roll too and so that's a definite +. Don't really have any critique, keep it up.

Kaiori Breathe- I hit your track in the member's track board but I can't get over this one haha, Everything flows and works well, And again this is some rolling tunes, love the melody work, deep stuff man, do I hear a guitar sampled in the background or is that just some great sound design? I love the drums here, beautiful track.






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Newest track, I'm new so be kind

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[Sinisterbeats]

@JayZest - Really nice track, love the pads in it. Think your sub line may be too low, listening on headphones so maybe its just becuase of that but I can usually pick out sub pretty well on them. Try adding some more presence to it with some very subtle tape distortion or using a triangle instead of a sine maybe??? Great tune and vibe though.

@kaiori breathe - Love this mate, really chill tune. Like the guitar and sublte bits of more ethnic percussion.

@Kes-ES - Not really my thing, however it has some potential. The mix needs alot of work, drums get completely drowned out my the midrange bass line. Drums sound really tight when I can actually here them, really like the samples youve used.

[vdbproductions]

Yooo, got a new tunes mates,
sound a bit weird i think,
what do you guys think?
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Grtz from belgium

[hrak]

@kaiori breathe: Thanks for the feedback. Yeah my tracks are in some ways repetitive, I think thats how I want it and therefore keep the tracks short.. Sometimes I might go one step to far though and its good to hear from someone else's point of view. cheers

I really like your track, very smooth with some great sounding drums.. Big thumbs up!

[jaydot]

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[Sinew]

@Kes-Es - Noooise. Like that haha!
@Sinisterbeats - I don't really know what to say. Not my kind of music, but I love your sounds and effects! Nice mastering.
@Jaydot - Woah really nice. But you should make a little intermission/break.

Here's two of my new tracks. One is dubstep and the other one is house. And I know... Both is starting with a drum intro.

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[vdbproductions]

Hello everyone!
Its sam/vdbproductions, i finally choose a different name to produce,
no longer vdbproductions but "The Devil's Advocate"
here's the first tune!
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grtz from Belgium

[reignstep]

-vdbp: not a bad tune, i think your basses could be more powerful and a little less high pitched, there's a freq that slightly hurts my ears, guess it's personal preference though. structurewise it's good too.

- Sinew: sounding good mate, like the basses you got going , only the melody is abit too overpowering during the bass part.

- jaydot: not digging this one mate, drop structure isn't great and the bass that follows isn't really processed well, sounding really muddy.. also the snare sound doesn't fit in with the rest of your tune imo

Did a remix with King Astma on the Vaski remix contest, looking for some fb
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[kaiori breathe]

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sounds pretty sick man, really nasty, i think i've said this before but this stuff isn't really my style, but despite that most of your tracks i really like, this one included, kinda strange sample, but it works well. nice sounds on that last build up before the final drop. Great production value too.

[superginger]

#reign
yea man! got the stems for this track too! wow... you killed the original - AND I MEAN IT! really sick production mate. I like the downpitched sample. the strucutre of this song is very good, you've managed to create a sweet filth-progression, like it starts filthy but then it gets filthier at the end! very good production mate!! I count on you as a winner of the remix competition, atleast top 3 or 5!

#vdbproductions
nice intro, sweet bell and background noise! drop is filthy as fuck! though i would chill a bit with the highpitched tones , they kinda get abused but overall its a very good track, it's good that your variate

#Sinew
I liked that housetrack! sweet ideas and it has a alot of potential! First things which comes to mind is:
1, the kick, it needs more compression and volume I think. 2, I think you need some more sidechain! 3, make more siginificant breakdowns, and a cooler buildup from the breaks. example a nice kick/snareroll or a rise of any kind but big ups! i enjoyed the track

the dubsteptrack was quite nice aswell! I like that synth you use in both songs. maybe you should cut it off for a while in the drop. filthy bass good production.

reposting my remix of biggie smalls "PArty and Bullshit" I hope that I get feedback from more than one person this time! alright, here it is! constructive feedback is much appriciated!! I personally think this remix has potetntial and I want to make it right! cheers
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[bugsky]

@Traffikz: Awesome noises. Maybe a bit too much reverb on everything - making it too 'shiney'. Really like it overall. Wicked job.

@kaiori breathe: Left feedback on sc - brilliant track, given it quite a few listens.

@Lordbid: Some really interesting ideas. Great variation - keeping my interest. Drums could do with some processing to make them sit better with the bass - atm, they feel too weak.

@Sinisterbeats: Wow, this is really "sinister".Some really great atmopsheres. Hats are bit too dominant for me however.

@Jaydot: Those hats are really throwing me off. That 'rawr' noise can do with variation as it gets quite grating in the middle. I like everything else.

@Reignz: This is heavy. Bass sounds so crisp.

@Superginger: Mean stuff. Bass is massive. Vocals could do with more processing - feel a bit weak ontop of the heavy bass. Top production.

[Kes-Es]

@Kes-ES - Not really my thing, however it has some potential. The mix needs alot of work, drums get completely drowned out my the midrange bass line. Drums sound really tight when I can actually here them, really like the samples youve used.

Ups for the feedback man, I'm relatively new to the noisier dubstep so while the mixing for it isn't rocket science, I find preference getting in the way of a great mix I like my basslines to be solid or in the front if you know what I mean? I've heard a lot of different opinions on the mix and I'm happy with it "Raw" like this. I Appreciate the feedback though man, thanks.