Newbie wants feedback

[FlameIbrah]

Hey guys!
I'm pretty new to the dubstep genre as a whole, but I am a very open-minded person and musician.
I play guitar and compose what I would call experimental fusion metal, alongside more conventional songs within the metal/hardcore and otherwise heavy music medium.
Although I've only been into dubstep for a little while i figured I would try and use my songwriting skills in a new and, for me, unexplored genre.
Without further adieu, I present to you my second attempt at making something resembling a proper dubstep tune:
http://soundcloud.com/saiur/my-little-d ... bby-harder

Let me know what you guys think! Whatever you may have to say, be it good, bad, indifferent, or violent, I wanna hear it!
Also, any tips about structure, layering, samples, mixing, mastering, etc. would be greatly appreciated as well.

[sqelch]

got an interesting mixture of sounds. the first bass is kind of plain sounding in my opinion. maybe throw some more effects on it. feelin' it overall

[FlameIbrah]

I kind of wanted the first bass sound to be rather plain to sort of introduce the main theme and then have it go every which way from there.

[sqelch]

i was thinking that as i was listening to it but wasn't sure if that was what you were going for.

[Ambassadeurs]

good ideas, think you need to make some room for the ideas to come through, maybe sidechain the kicks and snare so they hit a bit harder!