FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by sprayyypaint » Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:36 am

Kes-Es wrote:
sprayyypaint wrote:Kes-Es- extremely awesome synth! sounds like a wet rubber band being twiddled around. super rythmic and cool. but the song seems a little anti climactic. kick could maybe use more umph. but thats all personal prefernce really. overall this shit is groovey as fuck!

Grace- nice track man, sounds clean as fuck.

mr hello- dope track, not so much what im into. sounds pretty cool though :)

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Hey man ups for the feedback, yeah I suppose with it being an intro I should build it up more before it ends.
I'll check out your track on soundcloud and comment,
Thanks again man!

its not that it doesnt build up long enough. it just doesnt build enough tension or something. your bassline is off the chain though dude.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Grace » Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:00 am

Mr Hello Wrote:
It's all bless, but really can't help but hear that vocal as Kryptic Minds."
Really? I didn't even realise kryptic minds used it.. :( i hate using the same samples as others. They probably made a better job of it too -w- Safe for feedback though.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by kaiori breathe » Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:40 am

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Apologies for the buzz sound on this one at the start, it's soundcloud's doing, not on the original 320 or the wav.

Anyway, this one's a bit different, although I say that every time I write a song I guess.

@Janaj great for a first attempt man, lots of cool ideas, nice to see your first attempt including some more interesting sounds instead of just crazy wobbles the whole way through, makes musical sense, nothing really bad to say about it to be honest, I think your bass sound could be a bit more refined, but that's really nit picking and personal taste

@whyrez should go without saying really, sick tune, great melodies and sounds, hope you get your vox down on it, there's some really nice harmonic movement in there, propz broseph

@ circusofmind great sounds on that intro man, some really nasty but very well thought out sounds, there's a housey kinda synth though that I think doesn't really fit in during the intro, sounds kinda like that sound from bodyrox by the yeah yeahs, it works after intro just during it I think it's a bit lost. Anyway, asides from that tiny little point of nit picking it's a cool tune, very interesting and different. Organized but messy and a little bit mental. I like it. Nice production value too.

@ Kes-Es tunes in your sig are ear rapingly good

@ Blanx I wrote a whole big thing here, but really I can just summarize as follows : nice fucking tune, nothing bad to say

@ mr hello love your sounds, love the double bass work, very well thought out and arranged, nice illusory rhythms all round great track, nice floating vocals in the background too, nice subtle builds,

@ Grace solid tune mate, very harmonically chaotic but still very enjoyable somehow, reminds me of one of deadly habits tunes, can't remember the name of it now but it does similar things with that whispy pitch shifting weirdness. Anyway, yea, cool tune.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Brownz » Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:04 pm

Hi guys got 2 new finished tunes!
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and
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Let me know what you guys think

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@wirez love those garagy beats, and the track just think you should leave that wobble away

@bugsky nice track, i think you should work some more on the drums, because they sound a little distorted and they don't seem to fit in the vibe of the tune, for the rest really nice synths! and i love the sax!

@kaiori breathe i just love your track, vibes all over and great production to, i like the fact to that you have your own style!

@mr hello that track is just amazing! in love with it, the beat, the synths! i would love a 320!

@Grace love the vibes & the vocals on your track, awesome!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by projekt » Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:22 pm

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Ive posted some feedback on a few peoples soundclouds, just because its easier.

Let me know what you think......

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Janaj » Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:41 pm

Bored so I made this:
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Dont know how to continue, any ideas?

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by kaiori breathe » Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:51 pm

Janaj wrote:
Dont know how to continue, any ideas?
I'd continue by posting feedback on 3 tunes or more before asking for feedback as it says you should on page one... but hey, maybe that's just me.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Kes-Es » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:11 pm

kaiori breathe wrote:Soundcloud

@ Kes-Es tunes in your sig are ear rapingly good


That means a lot coming from you mate, I'll be honest hahaha. I'll hit your tune on soundcloud:D
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by djekim » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:27 pm


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by ObsidiaMusic » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:34 pm

@ sprayyypaint : Your track is decent, but at the same time, not so decent. I think you got some good ideas but they don't seem to be working in the way I think they should be. I think the drums are too ... snappy? They need to have more of a flow to them... It's hard to explain what I mean. Haha.

@ Brownz : the-man-in-the-rabbit-suit is very dark, which I like. I think there could be a bit more variation in the drums... although, they are quite effective as they are. Nice.

@ Projekt : I think the track really lacks rhythm! I think the drums are quite tight, although I feel the snare needs a bit more low-mid to it.

Another new track that I have worked solid on for the past few days!

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http://www.mediafire.com/?k638czumqxis374 (320KBPS MP3)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by mr hello » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:44 pm

@ Spray paint- there's something really cool about this, but it lacks cohesion. The kick/bass don't quite sit right. Definitely unique and something to persevere with.

@ Grace- yeah I do really like this track, I've done the same thing a few times and used vocals already associated with other tracks and it kind of kills it for me. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GXqa75ZP ... re=related

Seriously like 'viral', I think the percussiony parts of the drums are really nice but need a bit of sharpening up. The snare I'm not feeling, the other drums are so tight and this could be so, so good with a better snare sound. I seem to have said that to a lot of people though, so perhaps ignore me.

@ Kaori- safe tings n all that for the feedback. The little triplet thing is lush. Not what I expected at the drop. The synths are cool, but there's a nagging image of a guy playing an accordion in my head. The swell synth is perfect. Bump up the sub a bit?

@ Brownz- really nice, works with the straight-forward kick/snare pattern. I'd like to really hear that sub, maybe some incidental percussiony parts or delay/reverb coming in and out on that main dirty synth. Just ideas though, really dig that track. Man, scrapyard too, this is wicked. I love what you've done on the last section. Maybe drums could mix it up a bit more but this is really cool.

@ Kes-es- really enjoying that aggro bass oddly enough, I think the chords let it down a little. Maybe some more movement in that synth and darker chords themselves. Would be a really decent, dark tune.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by tomi » Tue Nov 30, 2010 7:59 pm


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Kes-Es » Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:00 pm

tomi wrote:
How about you post feedback first
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by spencertron » Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:48 pm

@ObsidiaMusic - not my sort of thing, but seems all there, had to trun it down in the headphones, mid range was hurtin so probs some eq needed (or maybe my ears are weak).

@djekim - nice to hear something different, really enjoyed it. all i can say.

@kaiori breathe - nice tune, only thing to say on this is the break down seemed there for breakdowns sake, came back into the same thing, some variation on second drop would be cool but all in all nice.

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Bioteq » Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:20 am

Well... it's december now... but i'm still going to post these here!
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Check em' out, i've got an EP in the works at the moment, very fast, psychedelic dubstep, for free!
I'll post it up when i'm finished, for now, let me know what you think?
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by jeffjustice » Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:16 am

spencertron wrote:@ObsidiaMusic - not my sort of thing, but seems all there, had to trun it down in the headphones, mid range was hurtin so probs some eq needed (or maybe my ears are weak).

@djekim - nice to hear something different, really enjoyed it. all i can say.

@kaiori breathe - nice tune, only thing to say on this is the break down seemed there for breakdowns sake, came back into the same thing, some variation on second drop would be cool but all in all nice.

one from me (after i tweaked the mixdown on it)
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Everything is coming through loud and clear on my shabby speakers. Feeling the regga dub vibe. I'm a dnb fanboy and would love to hear and old jungle break filtered in here and there!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by jeffjustice » Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:25 am

@kaiori-breathe/moving-mountains

I'm feeling the vibe to this. I'd love to hear some vocals over this!

The pornamento hook line you got going on is sweet.

Really enjoyed it. Listened to your other soundcloud stuff, brilliant. You need to get some vocals on that shizzle too!

Keep it up!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by tomi » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:01 pm

Kes-Es wrote:
tomi wrote:
How about you post feedback first
:)
true true:)
the first is too evil and antisocial
but the 2nd is awesome not a tipical filthy shit

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by Kes-Es » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:49 pm

tomi wrote:
Kes-Es wrote:
tomi wrote:
How about you post feedback first
:)
true true:)
the first is too evil and antisocial
but the 2nd is awesome not a tipical filthy shit
Not on my work, bro
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- NOVEMBER 2010

Post by djekim » Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:49 pm

spencertron wrote:
@djekim - nice to hear something different, really enjoyed it. all i can say.


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thanks for the love on that. as far as it being something different it is. its drumstep :)

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