WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for DECEMBER, 2010

[sqwuabblesmynig]

@Isturite good looks brotha, thanks, im new to this so any feedback is great, but yea ill def try to beef up the sub.. I dug your remix, nice bass g, can't really say anything about the mix but im sure someone else can

[Akkep]

@Akkep- really liking the drum patterns in this, the choice of random samples throughout the track, and the overall atmosphere... I don't know if you were going for a more of a trancey sort of dubstep style, but I'd put some type of bridge in there to give it some composition

Thanks for feedback! Weren't going trancy with this one at all, it just came out of my mind Trying to make it vary somehow. It's hard for me to change tracks afterwards, any tips what I should do with this one?

[willryan042]

Willryan: Nice one, good direction out of "brostep"!
Like the melody and athmosphere, maybe add some more punch to drums and voila!

thanks for the feedback man! i think i'm gonna layer the drums, hopefully that'll add a little oomph to 'em.

[Omni Kraut]

thanks for feedback.reedited my track 2 pages back. have a listen and post some feedback

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[donpablo]

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[Beardyman123]

aint been on here for a while i have to say.

@donpablo - loving the chilled vibe mate, its reminds me of like skreams earlier stuff tbf, sub work is top notch. only critism is that i think it can be a tad repetitive, vary it up a bit. love it though man.

@omni kraut - the high end all seems a bit too loud and drowns the rest of the track out. if you lowered the high end and brought through the low end etc i think it could be a good track mate.

@isturite - a nice decent remix man, im still yet to attempt one. however i think it just sounds a bit mad and hectic through it aha. fuck knopws about the mix down though, i aint got a clue about what advice to give for that ha.

@ezekial - im finding it a bit boring to listen to and not enough going on, just seems to be repertive. nice sub basss though man and drum work.

@kinsky - i actualy really like it, great like melody and has got me bobbin my head. good work on the drums and the bass has a really nice sound. nice work with the LFO's

@akkep - very chilled but dark track, i like. the drums could be abit louder but nice track. sub bass is nice. good job.

this is my latest track, feedback very welcome advice on mixdown as i aint got a clue about that haha. safe lads.
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Big up peep show for this one haha.

[ezeckial]

Thatnks for the feedback you too

@Ezeckial, I dig the drums. But I think maybe you can expand some of the keys/synths more. Add some reverb/delay maybe? They just sound bare to me if that makes any sense

Thats kinda purposeful, with guitars and vocals going on I want to keep the synths simple and tucked away since it would be the vox/guitar providing the melody etc, would it still be worth fiddling with them even if low in the mix?

@ezekial - im finding it a bit boring to listen to and not enough going on, just seems to be repertive. nice sub basss though man and drum work.

Thanks im always worried about my drums as something im again terrible at. I will admit it is a bit plain at the moment but is a wip I am hoping (as mentioned earlier) guitar and vocals will bring it out and give it a nice hook


Thanks for the feedback tho guys, more welcome, no matter how critical it is! Only way to get better!

[arisemprex]

@munkee - man that was an awesome track…I got lost in it


@Akkep - i love the feel of the track man, but one thing, those high hats get a tad bit annoying after a minute or so lol. maybe change up the rhythm of the high hats, ill try to write a melody to it and maybe send it over if you'd be open to that

@wife - I rolled my blunt to this was fucken great man, got me excited to smoke it haha, i wanna try to do something like that, but I just don't know how to approach it lol

and heres the new version...bit of EQ and some Vocals, i think 16 bars.....

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[sqwuabblesmynig]

@arisemprex sick shit bro, diggin that B line

[Chark]

@arisemprex - Diggin it, man. Can't really hear the vox, though.

@omnikraut - I liked this one too, but uhm. Try not to rape my speakers in the very beginning of the song, scared the piss out of me. xD

@donpablo - Man, I was feeling the SHIT out of this track. Nice subs, giving me good vibes.

Just kinda been kicking this around today. Not quite sure where to take it really. Song structure and theory tips? Mixing tips also much appreciated.
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[WIFE]

@donpablo - really liking this. Some great sounds in there.

@arisemprex - sounds great man, just a bit heavy for my tastes. Really like the vocal editing. Love the pad sound at around the 2 minute mark.

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[Loud Flavor]

How's it going
Started this tune about 2-3 days ago while having a warm cup of tea.
Still sounds a bit rough on the mixing, but would appreciate some feedback.

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Cheers

[willryan042]

Can we start warning/banning/decapitating people who come in here posting tracks without posting any feedback...?

[Voodeedoo]

@Chark - interesting percussion; it sounded like it was playing in speakers behind me. i think they could get a bit messy though; nothing some tweaking could fix
@Loud Flavor - leave some feedback next time XD digging the bass, drums, synths, etc. i think the synths might be the slightest pixel too loud, but other than that good luck on the track :D
@Omni Kraut - great job; i dont see much to improve here, but keep it up! energy, maaaan

two tracks; one i began recently and one i improved from an earlier post. harsh criticism warmly welcomed :]
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@willryan042 - yeeeeeesssssssss :]

[sqwuabblesmynig]

@Chark nice track, nice bass man

@Loud Flavor dope track bro, nice basses, cool samples aha, good stuff.

@donpablo digggin this tune man, on that joker type tip, real laidback, nice dude.

still looking for a bit more feedback on my post if anyone could help me out, gonna post up another in a few

@sqwuabblesmynig
Intro vocal sounds not so good. Bass needs more sub but i like that style. Louder Snare. need some more drum work/ variation.

yeah i dont like it much either i may just cut that idk, thanks man, i'll def keep everything you said in mind

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any tips/feedback is highly appreciated, thanks guys

[Omni Kraut]

Thanks for feedback.
@sqwuabblesmynig
Intro vocal sounds not so good. Bass needs more sub but i like that style. Louder Snare. need some more drum work/ variation.

[munkee]

@arisemprex - very nice! the vocals sounded a bit thin and loud on my end. everything else, i liked alot - thanks for the comment too.

@loud flavor - the pad on the intro is nice and full. I still don't give a motha-fuuuuuuuuu.... bwahwah... Nice! Very nice structure to this. I'm really enjoying the synth work on this one. Where in TX are you? I'm in Dallas.

[Karma_blitz]

@munkee thanks bro, appreciate it, thanks to everyone for the feedback. Its a slight weight off my shoulders. Had a feeling my mixing skills were going to get slaughtered

[WIFE]

@Voodeedoo - I really like both of the tunes you have posted. Really cool stuff. Very nice live sound to the first one, do you actually use some live instruments on it? Second track has that warm Boards of Canada sound that I love..