FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- DECEMBER 2010

[reloukkz]

@JayZest-spark: omg, i'm so chilled now. everythings sounds great! and i think tonight this will be my goodnight track.

@WIFE-the walkout: moar loudness! btw i think u need more sounds too to this song. it is so empty.

@FluidMoShun-conjurah: sometimes i hear disharmonies:l and your kick ins't so good. i like the part after 3:17.


so here is mine, need some feedback

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[RatRaceProducing]

Debaser1/ machine gun, well original, some awesome lil soudns and automations. good stuff. The kicks sound a bit weak . the low mid on your basslines needs sorting its to thin imo. Your sub bass sounds pretty good thou but would maybe bring the volume up a touch. percussion is a liul quiet and repetitive would add some variation in there. some of the transitions are a tad sharp, but is pretty nasty and definately working in the right direction. good tuff matey. i enjoyed that

Swissdub/ not overly original this one. Sounds a bit like the "hometown" chords by adelle at first. The bass synth sounds too plasticy dunno why it just doesnt seem strong enough. The mixdown is pretty rough. Erm the structure aint too bad. percussion is drown by your mid bass. some potential ere mate but would have a good going over the mix and try to pul, summat a bit different out the bag. not bad but didnt jump out at me.

topmo/ drums are well cool in this one mate love that steppyness. sum of the percs sound a tad placed. need to bring them down to the track a lil bit. bass is cool. like this mate good job the only thing i would lose is the vocals they got annoying and they sound dropped on top of the mix rather than part of it.

keep um coming ladz think i have near enough checked um all out so far

[arisemprex]

@Ratrace - I like it man, the reverse? i think crashes at 2:20 sounds fucken nice!...i really enjoy your work..

@reloukkz - heavy, i would suggest some pads or a melodic lead on top of the bass line man, it would definatly give it character

@arfus - mmmm...me gusta mucho haha. sounds good dude, bass is great, but i think you should change the bass line a bit, its a bit repetitive, but nonetheless sounds great. what kind of headphones did you use?

Heres a new one of ours.
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[TheBreadMan]

@Brownz:Very nice track. Put together very well, i would hope thats not the WHOLE track. That last bit was nice, would of loved to heard how it ends. Good job though.

@Jayzest:DUDE, moment:I got lost in that track. In a good way though..PERFECT for smoking and relaxing too. Need a download on that one for sure mate.
SAME thing for spark. Let me know where i can download these. LOVED em both.

@arfus:Your track is fucking ILL mate. Great job. Grimey as fuck...mad props!!!! I need a 320 of this to play out with if you can.

@Debaser:I really dig this track. I would say maybe bring up the clarity of the vocals thrown in there just a WEE bit, but very nicely done.

@VDBproductions:Huge fan of this song. filthy, but yet classy....like i would ask a mate driving next to me if he had any grey poupon...hahaha...good job!!!

@Wilding:i caught up with you on soundcloud...
@topmo3:samething:Soundcloud mate.

@metsu:Not really much to say about this track. Very well put together Nice production...maybe drag the end out a little longer to mix out of...other than that. VERY nice job.

@Reloukkz:very nice sound you got going on. VERY nice productions. I caught you on soundcloud instead.

Peep out my latest track and some feedback on my other track i re did would be much appreciated...FREE download of it too!! Something different, not too many people are into the "Breadman" sound yet, but their slowly coming around.

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[L 33]

its not rly dubstepish .. but .. whatever

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[Brownz]

@Brownz:Very nice track. Put together very well, i would hope thats not the WHOLE track. That last bit was nice, would of loved to heard how it ends. Good job though.

No its a 128kbps clip, against rippers

[arfus]

@arisemprex haha thanks man. I use these headphones http://www.google.com/products/catalog? ... CFYQ8wIwBQ

kind of embarassing lol...

[JayZest]

@Jayzest:DUDE, moment:I got lost in that track. In a good way though..PERFECT for smoking and relaxing too. Need a download on that one for sure mate.
SAME thing for spark. Let me know where i can download these. LOVED em both.

add me on AIM will give a download link or something if people want it

[FluidMoShun]

Thanks for the feedback everyone who commented

@FluidMoShun-conjurah: sometimes i hear disharmonies

Could you be specific as to what parts, so I know what needs reworking.

[hifi]

@L 33 - yo that is a chill track man. keep producing that kind of stuff. I am going to expect big tunes from you in the future

@TheBreadman - The beginning was pretty cool. work on your drums though get some eq'in done man.

@arisemprex - yo cool track man! did you record those vocals yourself? or did you sample it? but anyways good track man

Here's my track. I just finished it recently it's ok I could've put more time into it but I was too lazy to :/

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[arisemprex]

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@arisemprex - yo cool track man! did you record those vocals yourself? or did you sample it? but anyways good track man

Yup yup sir! Everything is original just like i like it

Im diggin your tune dude, dont be lazy! haha, i like your snare a lot. but i would suggest some nice hit hats at the 1:24 mark, sounds too empty...you def have some room to work with.

[L 33]

@ Hypefiend Drums are very nice man but u should work more on the bass to make it phat and get banginn combination of nice drums and cool bass
@arisemprex The track sounds good but it need more variations , good mastering like more EQ some compressions...etc
yeah and the vocal sample is cool .

[RatRaceProducing]

Thebreadman/ Both tunes very original mate liking your style. You need to fix the bass up tho there is shit loads of low end distortion in both of them. Try neatly chopping lows from your kick. try running your kick and sub through the same compressor and tighten them up a bit. A lil tip mate, put all your tracks up for free download. If they aint signed then there aint no problem. People can then wack on there phones n ipods or even play them out. Just another medium of transfer. trust me helps get um about.

Arfus/ this is a bit generic imo. but mix down sounds farely solid and the technicality is cool. good work pal. Love that "whine synth" that comes in.

Hypefiend/ this its a bit thin and repetitive. your kick takes up ll the sub room as well. You need to cut the sub lows from your kick matey. the groove is nice so your working in the right direction. Keep at it.

arise/ nice vox. feel of this tune is really good. its almost like soujaboy dstep difference is you can spit more than 4 words lol. kick is cool, bass notes are awesome but its not strong enough. needs to be brought forward in the mix. as does your percussion. original though mate liking it. might download this, are you going to be reworking it at all after this upload? if ot i dl it now

Blindside is my new one, check the california girls remix out on my sc page (locked due to copyright laws) enjoy and let me know what you think.

!peace!

[arisemprex]

@Ratrace - ima work on the mixing and actually master the track by friday I hope, Ill post up the one that has guitar in all the track with vox and one without vocals, so look forward to downloading it by friday,

[wirez]

Easy all!

Would like to introduce you all to my track on the forthcoming FentPlates compilation.

The track is entitled Multidivide, it's a deep Future Garage track with a silky smooth feeling! Melancholic yet satisfying in any mood thanks to the experimental but futuristic and body-moving bassline and rhythm! The name (and I guess the feeling) of the track is based around the feeling of something being missing, or the whole of your soul being divided up into several parts, the inspiration for the name was taken from holding down alt whilst using the scissor tool on Logic, known as 'Multidivide' lol!

Hope you enjoy! If you do - give a donation to the project and reserve yourself a CD copy of the compilation (Just click the download icon on the Soundcloud player!)

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[impey]

@whyrez - really liking that organ type sound along with that deeep bassline, vocal sample fits really nicely. Loving the smooth drums too! Really up my street, Glad to be on the compilation with ya!

@hypefiend - Intro is nice and minimal, only thing I would say is the kick drum has a click of some sort which I would try getting rid of. Pretty nice bassline you have there, you should try to alternate a bit more throughout the first verse, If anything I think this would sound better if you started the song at 1:50 and then worked from there, but overall good production

@L 33 - Yeah man really liking this mate, proper nice sub you have there, nice FX used in places and feeling the trumpet samples at 1:57, only thing is the filter on the 'slice of bread' sample is too much of a contrast to the style you are producing, comes as a shock as it comes in, overall really nice tune you have

@the breadman - twinkle - I think you need to locate a relevant key to this song, The bassline is pretty horrible and has no relevence to anything. I think you are trying to run before you can walk, start off simple, and then build up the song from that. Structure needs a lot of work too



Here is a little remix from us, Original song was a liquid track that was posted on here a few weeks back.. Any feedback is appreciated

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[arisemprex]

Hey rat, I uploaded the new version with no vocals, let me know what you guys think Soundcloud

[arfus]

@wirez top notch track man. I love it. perfect use of that sample.

[pain]

@reloukkz: Cool track. Like a combo of both chill and nasty dub vibes. Bass has the bit crush sound from the nasty side but with a soft enough touch that I don't feel raped. Laid back percussion and the minimal feel keep it in that chill territory.

@RatRaceProducing: Blindside: The main melody really gives it that trancy feel too it. Love when the dance kick groove comes in too at around 53 seconds in. I actually would like to make some brighter sounding music like this. Nice use of panning at 2:15, something I haven't thought of trying yet with bass. Like the comment on soundcloud said might be the start of progressive house dub.

@:arisemprex: listen up with vox: This track has that rap rock feel to it. When I hear that middle eastern melody, I can't help but want a sitar or some other ethnic instrument to play it stead of guitar. Though it is cool to hear some real instruments like a guitar in a track. Nice to hear these genre mashing tracks going up of late. As for vocals I would love to comment on how to improve them sound wise but I'm still new to mixing vocals onto tracks myself. I know rappers love they adlibs though so you can always add some of that to the track. The stuff is inspiring me to the point that I'm going to have to come up with something different soon.

Wanted to comment on more but I got to get to work soon. I'll be back on the weekend to check out more tracks. I finally made a new track if ya want to check it.
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[Shirka]

Easy guys

I was hoping if you lot could give me feedback on this track.

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I haven't got time at the moment, but I'll be sure to give feedback to other tracks too.

Cheers.