need criticism!!

hendeerik · Post by **hendeerik** » Wed Apr 04, 2007 4:54 pm

Made some songs and I'd like u to comment them. Thanks

http://www.backside.ee/hendrik/hendrik% ... travel.mp3

grizzle · Post by **grizzle** » Wed Apr 04, 2007 8:56 pm

Hi Hendeerik...

For me I was not too keen on the synth parts. They are a little too simplistic, perhaps you were going for that but for me a little more variation or interest would be better.

The drums are good in parts but in other parts they kind of sound like rocks drums and seem to be quite busy but not really re-inforcing the groove.

The bass is pretty good. Reminds me of Warhead for some reason. Maybe a second bassline using a different basstone could be cool and then you could ease-up on the drums but still keep the thing moving.

You asked for critic I hope you don't mind

Lurka · Post by **Lurka** » Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:13 pm

mate im feelin it mate! like the little vocal sample ting goin on mate!

i quite like the busy drums but definitely agree about the repeating synth, jazz it up and i reckon big tings a blow!!!!

trigga!!!:6:

hendeerik · Post by **hendeerik** » Thu Apr 05, 2007 8:58 am

thanks:D

hendeerik · Post by **hendeerik** » Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:46 pm

need criticism!!

need criticism!!

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