FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by jaydot » Fri Jan 07, 2011 10:55 pm

@paravrais: Nice dark melodies on this. Love the piano, can't comment on the mixdown as I'm on shitty headphones but will give it another look tomorrow...

@whyrez: Drums on that are sublime, I can't really fault that track.

@bassinine: I really liked the dubbyness of the intro , Kick is strange, could do with a little more punch? Not a fan of the raspy bass it sounds a litttttle too abrasive like the other bass sounds though.


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by hifi » Sat Jan 08, 2011 12:14 am

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by NorCoDubstep » Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:00 am

@Muta: I'm digging the drums in your first track. The drop at 2:04 in the south park one is killer as well
@wirez: The perc is the first track is great, makes it groove. Nice work with the vocals
@Mawsta: Fackin gritty mate! I love the diversity of your sounds

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Post by Biggls » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:29 am

@Rhek you should be signed. nuff said. that track was totally sweet. I can't fault it.
@Mawsta interesting bass sound, and was scary, snare seeemed a little too loud our boosted to me :| might just have been me
@Muta I liked the intro and the track was very different to anything I've heard in a while, nice work bro. Only thing i might say is that the kick seemed a bit too heavy an interfeared with the bass a bit much.
@jaydot Melikey! Felt quite nostalgic, only thing is the delay on the pluck seemed in a strange timeing. Not sure why. Liked the clap too.
@NoCo I liked this intro too, and the bass fading in was nice too. Haha, I made almost that exact same bass in massive once too. BandReject filter FTW! :P

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by topmo3 » Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:06 pm

since i got zero feedback i might as well be a dick and post my track again http://soundcloud.com/skuretracks/afronaut
but i'll promise feedback in return for a treat. i know how nice it is to hear comments! :corndance:
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Post by superginger » Sat Jan 08, 2011 1:43 pm

#topmo3
I know... it sucks when people just skip your track. Well this is'nt really my type of dubstep.. but I'm impressed by the bass! digging most of the sounds. I really don't have anything much important to say, but I was jsut hinking those wobbles which roll in every 4th bar or something are quite annoying... atleast on which notes they are playing, I dont know, maybe it's just me being har don you and ofc it's a matter of preference but I thought they were a bit weird.

#Biggls
very deep and chill for sure. waaaaay to long and dull intro in my taste... but many people prefer it that way so just do your thing. drop is just perfect... not the usual thing I listen to but yea this is really good stuff. way over my head to comment. nice job mate!

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I don't think there are much problems with the song structurewise and the mixdown seems well done etc. but sorry dude I can't listen to this. I just can't stand these types of cheesey melodies :S sorry mate I hope you don't take this to personal.

I'm just very bored and quite sick of producing so I'm just posting tunes here you can give feedback to. pick any tune in my signature to give feedback to! :) POST ANY FEEDBACK ON SOUNDCLOUD PLEASE! hit me up if you want me to return feedback on any of your tracks.
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Post by wirez » Sat Jan 08, 2011 4:35 pm

NorCoDubstep wrote:@wirez: The perc is the first track is great, makes it groove. Nice work with the vocals
Glad you enjoyed mate! Will post some feedback on your Soundcloud now!

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jaydot wrote:@whyrez: Drums on that are sublime, I can't really fault that track.
Haha sweet man, glad you like! Will get some feedback up onto your Soundcloud now! The track you posted had a link error, but I'll leave some feedback on your Garage bit :W:
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Post by Paul6532 » Sat Jan 08, 2011 5:22 pm

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Post by StepMan » Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:05 pm

Give feeedback on at least three others...OP

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Post by Kes-Es » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:12 pm

I can't release this yet, as it's a remix of an intro by a producer I do not know the alias of and can't get a hold of on AIM, BUT It is finished and I figured why not post it up here for some feedback, my ultimate goal was to go the opposite direction of the intro. All bass sounds are made in albino, no after effects.
All feedback will be returned in depth.
Don't fuss too much on the length all I had to work with was the intro and I didn't want to totally ditch the original idea.

And Mate, if you see this give me a shout on AIM haha.

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Post by Voodeedoo » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:28 pm

@Biggls - digging the ambient ish environment, i think its a bit repetitive for my taste though, and the intro took its time
@NorCoDubstep - great drop, but the lead synth isnt really doing it for me :/ its a bit random
@Paul6532 - leave some feedback next time [or just update us]. you have some interesting ideas but i think the mix sort of lacks. the ending wobbles sound muddy and drown out the rest of the track, and there seems to be a lot of reverb going on. keep it up, though. i wanna know how this sounds like if your production matures.

this is an intro i made for an ep im working on to sell at my high school; feedback appreciated. you can leave it on my soundcloud page
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Post by Siberun » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:35 pm

@Kes-Es: Intro is definitely a keeper, contrasts very nicely with the bass at the drop. Love the samples too, made me laugh. :) Overall I think the bassline is catchy, maybe keep it a bit more consistent like in the second half. I'm not a huge fan of the breaks near the beginning.

@Biggls: As soon as I heard the chords I liked it. The little reverberated blips add to the mood, very deep. Drums sound great and.. shit, I don't even know what else to say, it just overall sounds like a quality tune. Keep it up!

@NorCoDubstep: I'm a fan of the harmonies, but the somewhat offbeat wobble throws me off. If that's what you were going for though, by all means! You should work with the piano when it comes in, and work around it, because there's a lot that can be done with it. :)

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by arktrix45hz » Sat Jan 08, 2011 9:49 pm

@Noonyez - Nice work on the pads and your drums sound nice. Snare could be a bit louder I reckon with a touch more reverb? Not too keen on the vocal sample too much.

@NNNY - Everything sounds so epic. Reminds me of Japanese RPG/Anime music, but it in a real good way. Piano lines sound siccck.

@den5hion - This is sick. Well reminds me of Sukh Knight/Trolley Snatcha. Got some serious groove between the bass and drums!

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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by Biggls » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:17 pm

Thanks for the feedbax. Yh, I am well aware the intro takes it's time, but I felt it puts the song in the right mood to begin with.
@Topmo3 that was sick dude. The verbed wobble sounded sweet, and the little melodies sounded sweet. Only thing I might change would be to change the sub up a bit more, it got a bit boring.
@Siberun nice and heavy. Sounded like organized chaos. only constructive feedback i think i can give is that the bells that come in with the bass could be turned down a few dbs.
@Voodeedoo Sounded cool, loved the sub pitchbend.

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Post by jaydot » Sun Jan 09, 2011 12:15 am

@Biggls: So deep, love the atmosphere on the intro. The sweeps are epic too whatever you've done with them, the drums are nice and fresh...all in all a nice track indeed.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by Semihedonist » Sun Jan 09, 2011 1:10 am

Hi!

Why almost everybody put wobbles ? ;)

@nnny - I was listening tracks from first page and i stopped on your track (don't like wobbles) Terrible Vibrations is really nice... maybe little more focus on percussion.. i don't know how to explain (sorry), but something is missing there.. sound to much like a machine maybe :) But atmosphere & melody are amazing!
I like your style! +following

@Biggls - that's interesting! Altitude - melody, atmosphere and good shaker! i need to listen more of your tracks! Very nice!

@arktrix - Shifty, nice dark bass voyage !! i will check more!


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by Biggls » Sun Jan 09, 2011 1:19 am

jaydot wrote:@Biggls: So deep, love the atmosphere on the intro. The sweeps are epic too whatever you've done with them, the drums are nice and fresh...all in all a nice track indeed.
thanks heaps. with the sweeps, a minute amount of flanging or phasing can transform any sweep and make them much more fluid, it's just about tweaking the dry/wet knob a bit. a sprinkling of reverb also does wonders ;)
Also thank all you others for feedback, it is much appreciated.

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Post by nonXero » Sun Jan 09, 2011 2:40 am

@jaydot yo, that's nice! BIG UPS! Sounds like a beat Burial would use.. like that track!

@Semihedonist that bass is crazy.. I find the higher frequency synths a bit loud but maybe it's just me

@arktrix like that bassline!

@Voodeedoo Real unique sound.. like the beat. The bass is just right.. grimy but not overdone! Funky dubstep FTW!

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Post by filthy_ » Sun Jan 09, 2011 3:22 am

im not too sure if this belongs in the WIP thread of in here. im pretty sure its done, but id like more opinions.


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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011

Post by nylle » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:33 am

filthy: dark tune. just seems a bit bare, only percussion and a sub for most of it with that occasional (but sexy) synth.

nonxero: very interesting ideas here dude. almost felt like a video game soundtrack. not exactly sure what kind of music i would play this with tho.

Semihedonist: the intro on beyond is really sick. taking me far from my seat and into your own soundscape. very tight percussion too. liking how the track progresses too. leaning move-- huuge beat. nice panning on that bass too. definitely feelin this and liking the way it progresses. what do you produce in? btw? gonna listen to more of your tracks i love these kinds of tunes : D



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