FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
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- Semihedonist
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
@Frank Dublin - amazing energy you have in mechanic filth .nice wobbling with distortion on higher frequencies! like the flow
@dj seizure - big sub ! nice work with hihats and the trumpet! but i would ass something new in 2.17 and louder hihats work within.
@MyndControl - like these backsound in beggining and can feel the sub... i would change this snare. Idea with bass is good but IMO there's need to work with the pre-mastering a little bit. Notations are unique and thats nice... but one more time work more with compressions and levels (louder hihats) and maybe some nice panning with those hihats?
Just finished a new one... little bit different:
Black Swan
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@dj seizure - big sub ! nice work with hihats and the trumpet! but i would ass something new in 2.17 and louder hihats work within.
@MyndControl - like these backsound in beggining and can feel the sub... i would change this snare. Idea with bass is good but IMO there's need to work with the pre-mastering a little bit. Notations are unique and thats nice... but one more time work more with compressions and levels (louder hihats) and maybe some nice panning with those hihats?
Just finished a new one... little bit different:
Black Swan
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cheers
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
been listening to everyones tunes and just think theres a lot of really good music on here. any way i made this on logic express 9, i havent really concentrated on the mixdown and mastering side of things thow.
would be awsome if you could leave some feedback aswell, thanks
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would be awsome if you could leave some feedback aswell, thanks
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- dj seizure
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@Frenk - I don't get this style too much, but it seems well done but I think the art to make good filth is to make something really melodic and this just seems like a few noises. Good though, better than a lot of other stuff!
@Nylle - MUCH CLEARER. But bring the sub bass lower! Even deeper, perhaps a couple of keys or so!
@Project Mayhem - I don't really know where to start, it's not my thing but still, it's a bit much and a little too much in places, it needs a better mixdown but still I see what you're trying to do.
ANOTHER new one:
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@Nylle - MUCH CLEARER. But bring the sub bass lower! Even deeper, perhaps a couple of keys or so!
@Project Mayhem - I don't really know where to start, it's not my thing but still, it's a bit much and a little too much in places, it needs a better mixdown but still I see what you're trying to do.
ANOTHER new one:
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Heres my new piece aint dubstep though. On the trip hop will be posting some dubstep soon. Don't worry im not taking the forum for a ride haha =).
seizure - fucking bliss. That was amazing so chilled. maybe some variation on the bong drum but other than that was really really good. =).
semihedonist - nice deep dark vibe i feel like the bassline detunes a bit to much at times but its a really nice piece of work for real. keep it good work =).
nylee- feeling this alot on the garage flex really well thought out piece enjoyed so much of what was going on.
Heres my new piece aint dubstep though. On the trip hop will be posting some dubstep soon. Don't worry im not taking the forum for a ride haha =).
seizure - fucking bliss. That was amazing so chilled. maybe some variation on the bong drum but other than that was really really good. =).
semihedonist - nice deep dark vibe i feel like the bassline detunes a bit to much at times but its a really nice piece of work for real. keep it good work =).
nylee- feeling this alot on the garage flex really well thought out piece enjoyed so much of what was going on.
- Semihedonist
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@Centauri - Ethernal vibes -ntrack is smooth!nice bells and feeling in percussion... as i wrote you in a comment, try to make this beautiful bass stronger in the end of the tune! good job
- SPEAKERLOUTS
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
HI
WE ARE NEW TO MUSIC MAKING AND WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO CHECK OUR SONG AND OTHERS ON OUR SOUNDCLOUD PAGE. REMEMBER WE ARE NEW TO THIS SO ANY FEEDBACK WOULD BE AMAZING.
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FEEDBACK:
@BLACKSWAN:
BIG SONG, DARK AND OVERALL A LOVELY FEEL TO THE SONG. CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR DIS ON A BIG SYSTEM.
@MOUNTAIN
REALLY LIKE THE FLUTE SOUND GOING DOWN ON THE TUNE, NICE MOODY BASSLINE INIT HUGE. TOP PRODUCTION
@CENTAURI
GREAT SOUNDING DUB TUNE, REALLY LIKE THE TWINKLY SOUNDS GOING DOWN ON THE TUNE. FUTURE ANTHEM INDEED TOP WORK.
WE ARE NEW TO MUSIC MAKING AND WOULD LOVE FOR YOU TO CHECK OUR SONG AND OTHERS ON OUR SOUNDCLOUD PAGE. REMEMBER WE ARE NEW TO THIS SO ANY FEEDBACK WOULD BE AMAZING.
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FEEDBACK:
@BLACKSWAN:
BIG SONG, DARK AND OVERALL A LOVELY FEEL TO THE SONG. CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR DIS ON A BIG SYSTEM.
@MOUNTAIN
REALLY LIKE THE FLUTE SOUND GOING DOWN ON THE TUNE, NICE MOODY BASSLINE INIT HUGE. TOP PRODUCTION
@CENTAURI
GREAT SOUNDING DUB TUNE, REALLY LIKE THE TWINKLY SOUNDS GOING DOWN ON THE TUNE. FUTURE ANTHEM INDEED TOP WORK.

WE LOVE IT PHAT. HTTP://WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/SPEAKERLOUTS
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
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This is my first release that I can actually sort of call a song so tell me what you think
This is my first release that I can actually sort of call a song so tell me what you think

"it's like I just learned how to assign the lfo to cutoff all over again."
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
Like the intro synth. Pretty cool groove. The 2nd part doesn't seem to have much to do with the first. It's got some cool ideas, you just need to expand on it.
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Sorry, the above comment was for @quasi118
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
@Semihedonist - intro to black swan was awesome. I went into a different world, made me be scared, and worried. love the feeling.
@dj seizure - omg! heavy man. That bongo was nice. idk was great, baseline grooves, i hear a sinter solo in there
@Centauri - sounds good. you need some fem vox man. track will be solid. maybe a catchy baseline as well, but sounds good really good.
Heres my latest, i wrote it on nanostudio on the iphone and exported the stems into Ableton. Let me know what you guys think.
Feedback is love.
Thank you
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@dj seizure - omg! heavy man. That bongo was nice. idk was great, baseline grooves, i hear a sinter solo in there
@Centauri - sounds good. you need some fem vox man. track will be solid. maybe a catchy baseline as well, but sounds good really good.
Heres my latest, i wrote it on nanostudio on the iphone and exported the stems into Ableton. Let me know what you guys think.
Feedback is love.
Thank you
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Last edited by arisemprex on Fri Jan 14, 2011 10:56 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
@Centauri Great track, I love that last part, bass is beautiful.
@SPEAKERLOUTS Wow, if you're really new to music making, this song is awesome. Keep up!
Here's my track
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@SPEAKERLOUTS Wow, if you're really new to music making, this song is awesome. Keep up!
Here's my track
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- noizy parka
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
http://soundcloud.com/semihedonist/black-swan
Nice soundscape particularly like the intro, perhaps needs a lift in the track somewhere but overall good dark vibes
http://soundcloud.com/thelotuseater/use-me
like the intro again creating a nice soundscape/setting getting an omni trio vibe as the drums kick in, nice little nintendo-esc pads, dont like the pitched vocal but the bass comes in nice, just think youve need to get rid of the vocal, nice work though
http://soundcloud.com/quasi/bitronic-updated
Nice work, good driving drums pushing the track along, definatley one for the floor.
http://soundcloud.com/ideology/ethereal-vibes
Nice ethereal vibes! starting to get a touch repetative, finished a little like it never really got going, but good work non the less
PROG3CT-MAYH3M »
Dirty and rude nice, hardcore with good mash up, definatley a dirty 4am free party tune
http://soundcloud.com/elsonido/pharmacetic
Felt a bit 80s when it came in, i think the wobble is a little high in the mix but overall good work
Big yerselfs up
Nice soundscape particularly like the intro, perhaps needs a lift in the track somewhere but overall good dark vibes
http://soundcloud.com/thelotuseater/use-me
like the intro again creating a nice soundscape/setting getting an omni trio vibe as the drums kick in, nice little nintendo-esc pads, dont like the pitched vocal but the bass comes in nice, just think youve need to get rid of the vocal, nice work though
http://soundcloud.com/quasi/bitronic-updated
Nice work, good driving drums pushing the track along, definatley one for the floor.
http://soundcloud.com/ideology/ethereal-vibes
Nice ethereal vibes! starting to get a touch repetative, finished a little like it never really got going, but good work non the less
PROG3CT-MAYH3M »
Dirty and rude nice, hardcore with good mash up, definatley a dirty 4am free party tune
http://soundcloud.com/elsonido/pharmacetic
Felt a bit 80s when it came in, i think the wobble is a little high in the mix but overall good work
Big yerselfs up
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SPEAKERLOUTS: READING YOUR POST WAS FUCKING IRRITATING but that's kay. Your tune - i can definitely tell it's got a lot of energy ahaha, but it seems way too all over the place for me and things seem a bit out of time. It also sounds there are just noises everywhere too but yeah, whatever floats your boat (: maybe add a melody or something.
quasi: For your first release, that is a pretty dope house tune, really! Did you make the sounds yourself? Because that pad fits perfectly with beat and the synthline is interesting too, and I love that wobble for the build-up. Big ups, especially for your first release!
deranger: The beat's sick and I like the synth too, I think we're your going with it is good (y) add a bit more variety in there and maybe a buildup to your drop and it's good!
WIP atm, done in the past 30 minutes on Logic. Hope it's alright,
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quasi: For your first release, that is a pretty dope house tune, really! Did you make the sounds yourself? Because that pad fits perfectly with beat and the synthline is interesting too, and I love that wobble for the build-up. Big ups, especially for your first release!
deranger: The beat's sick and I like the synth too, I think we're your going with it is good (y) add a bit more variety in there and maybe a buildup to your drop and it's good!

WIP atm, done in the past 30 minutes on Logic. Hope it's alright,
Soundcloud
Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
@Semihedonist Black Swan - Like the body of the song.. dark vibes going on! Think the intro is a tad long though for the drop.. maybe it just needs more going on/variety or a shorter intro? *Shrugs* just a thought..
@dj seizure pasand-unsigned - yo, like those drums in the beginning.. the drop/bass is nice too... deep! Sounds good man! Like the percussion used here too.. good stuff! *head bob*
@Centauri sounds very trip hoppish! unique sounds you picked... really like that bass synth when it comes in... adds more melody/bass to the track which I think is needed more throughout the track. Good stuff!
Walking Dead... using 90% of my own samples recorded around the house... the growl is actually me belching slowed down and played at a lower key
Only things I used were 3 synths and a kick drum. Enjoy! Lemme know what you think!
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@dj seizure pasand-unsigned - yo, like those drums in the beginning.. the drop/bass is nice too... deep! Sounds good man! Like the percussion used here too.. good stuff! *head bob*
@Centauri sounds very trip hoppish! unique sounds you picked... really like that bass synth when it comes in... adds more melody/bass to the track which I think is needed more throughout the track. Good stuff!
Walking Dead... using 90% of my own samples recorded around the house... the growl is actually me belching slowed down and played at a lower key

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- SPEAKERLOUTS
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
SORRY WE IRRITATED YOU EDDY WAS IT BECAUSE OUR POST IS ONLY IN CAPS?? IF SO I'M SORRY BUT CAPS IS BROKEN ON THIS KEYBOARD AND AWAITING MORE DOLLORS TO GET A NEW KEYBOARD. THANKYOU FOR TAKING THE TIME TO LISTEN TO OUR BEATS AND GIVING US FEEDBACK ON THE TRACK, AS IT'S BEEN SAID WE ARE BRAND NEW TO THIS SO WE ARE STILL LEARNING THANKS. ALSO A SHOUT OUT GOES TO PIXELATIQUE FOR YOUR WORDS TO CHEERS.eddymaw wrote:SPEAKERLOUTS: READING YOUR POST WAS FUCKING IRRITATING but that's kay. Your tune - i can definitely tell it's got a lot of energy ahaha, but it seems way too all over the place for me and things seem a bit out of time. It also sounds there are just noises everywhere too but yeah, whatever floats your boat (: maybe add a melody or something.
quasi: For your first release, that is a pretty dope house tune, really! Did you make the sounds yourself? Because that pad fits perfectly with beat and the synthline is interesting too, and I love that wobble for the build-up. Big ups, especially for your first release!
deranger: The beat's sick and I like the synth too, I think we're your going with it is good (y) add a bit more variety in there and maybe a buildup to your drop and it's good!![]()
WIP atm, done in the past 30 minutes on Logic. Hope it's alright,
Soundcloud

WE LOVE IT PHAT. HTTP://WWW.SOUNDCLOUD.COM/SPEAKERLOUTS
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@Semihedonist
like the whole sunn 0))) vibe of it all, proper drone business. the reverse cymbals n that for the beat work really well. i like how the track unfurls slowly as well.
have started following you on the soundcloud. any chance of a 320 for the radio show?
@djseizure
the percussions hits give it a proper oriental vibe. the horn type sound that comes in at 1:40 ish makes the whole track sound well spooky. good work man, keep it up.
@pixelatique
full aquatic intro, quality. like the switch up into the garagey vibe, well wasn't expecting it.
think that when it drops as such it gets slightly too busy with all the bass n that.
good track still though.
new track from me. on a darker vibe.
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like the whole sunn 0))) vibe of it all, proper drone business. the reverse cymbals n that for the beat work really well. i like how the track unfurls slowly as well.
have started following you on the soundcloud. any chance of a 320 for the radio show?
@djseizure
the percussions hits give it a proper oriental vibe. the horn type sound that comes in at 1:40 ish makes the whole track sound well spooky. good work man, keep it up.
@pixelatique
full aquatic intro, quality. like the switch up into the garagey vibe, well wasn't expecting it.
think that when it drops as such it gets slightly too busy with all the bass n that.
good track still though.
new track from me. on a darker vibe.
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Artek - Holdin' (G.Davies Remix) OUT SOON CAR CRASH SET
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G.Davies EP OUT SOON ABAGA RECORDS
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Mechanic EP on ABAGA Records
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
Thats my new track hope ya like it
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Re: FINISHED TRACKS FOR FEEDBACK-- JANUARY 2011
Been a long time. New studio setup, new vibes, marginally more skill.
Anyhow, the feedback:
@ GDavies: Really nice, dark feel in whole song. All synths are beautiful and well in balance with each other. Sub is deep and menacing. Drums are the weak point of this tune. They sound really lifeless and dull. You need better samples and more variation. Mixwise all seems to be well balanced, but high frequencies are bit too loud and sharp for my taste. What monitors are you using? Great work anyway!
@ pixelatique: Intro is beautiful beyond all reason, as is rest of the song. Not sure what makes it dubstep though... Synths are more than awesome in this one too. Not really liking the bass, neither the bassline nor the sound you used.
@ arisemprex: One of very few tunes of this particular style that I have listened trough and enjoyed every second. Love it. Nothing more to say.
And here is the fruit of a few sleepless nights. Strong dub/reggae vibes. Don't let the pic fool you, this is not going to get released any time soon. It's just a label I made for a promo-cd I have been handing out to local deejays and music people. Tell me what you think.
Anyhow, the feedback:
@ GDavies: Really nice, dark feel in whole song. All synths are beautiful and well in balance with each other. Sub is deep and menacing. Drums are the weak point of this tune. They sound really lifeless and dull. You need better samples and more variation. Mixwise all seems to be well balanced, but high frequencies are bit too loud and sharp for my taste. What monitors are you using? Great work anyway!
@ pixelatique: Intro is beautiful beyond all reason, as is rest of the song. Not sure what makes it dubstep though... Synths are more than awesome in this one too. Not really liking the bass, neither the bassline nor the sound you used.
@ arisemprex: One of very few tunes of this particular style that I have listened trough and enjoyed every second. Love it. Nothing more to say.
And here is the fruit of a few sleepless nights. Strong dub/reggae vibes. Don't let the pic fool you, this is not going to get released any time soon. It's just a label I made for a promo-cd I have been handing out to local deejays and music people. Tell me what you think.
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