WORKS-IN-PROGRESS for JANUARY, 2011

[weedcali]

Rhek, holy shit that intro stab synth is catchy! not to mention its a good sounding patch Drop is mighty proper my friend! cant say much more beside make it longer

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[ibscotty]

ibscotty: Some parts of the bassline aren't really working well with the music. Also that fat low snare isn't really going well imo.
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Thanks for the feedback yeah that was a rough version, here is the latest, please download to enjoy it properly, as soundcloud compression gives a high pitched whine to the very low end that isn't present on the original.
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[weedcali]

Please post feedback before requesting any.

[NICORISONE]

Future Warz version 9!!!
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Edits done:
-Removed Wobble Bassline and substituted a nice moving sub!
-Melody-ish thing add towards the end!

I think this track is much much closer to being done now

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@weedcali: Interesting track, nice heavy sub in there, the percussion sounds cheap in my opinion, maybe play around more with that and also add some sort of melody?
@ibscotty: Not bad, nice mellow tune, nice sub, I would maybe play a little bit the pad and synth though, sounds sort of generic to me, just my opinion though.
@VuDu: I'm liking the track, i would say use a different vocal sample though if any (Personally I would just cut it completely) Also maybe add some reverb on your sticks and if you have available maybe try a slightly different sounding stick, sounds too much like the standard FL Studio sticks that come with it originally.
@s3f: Liking the abstract drum pattern, the wobble thingy, not so sure about, maybe play with it more?
@DannyDubstep: sick track dude period .

[weedcali]

That goes for you too...

[alexvont12]

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@eddymaw - I'm really liking the intro and sounds throughout.. I would turn the drums up though. Feels like it needs alot more highs in the mix. Has a unique sound to it that I'm feelin.
@weedcali - Lovin' that patch... just needs to be sumo-ed up a bit. Could forsure be turned into a great tune.
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@rhek - Really loving the grit mixed with the classic sound. A glitchy/faster pace breakdown version of 0.55-1.50 would sound soo sick right after the end drop. Fuckin dope man.
@nicorisone -I just want to say that your tunes vibes are so nice Reminds me of Tokyo in the future of something
@ibscotty - No feedback either Chill atmosphere in yours but the melody is almost to low to hear and a bit repetitive... It prolly soundcloud as you were saying, but the synth thats in the beginning also sounds a bit harsh. Real chill track though, I like it.

Here's mine, kinda updated from last time, just fixed some subbass, but bumping..
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[weedcali]

thank you. i know it needs some work but i was just getting the basic idea down. cant wait to see what i can do with it.

[NICORISONE]

feedback has been added, gotta be patient :p lol

@alexvont12: Thanks for the feedback mate

[weedcali]

the percs sound cheap cause im on a laptop that doesnt have all my sound banks. so those are all stock FL drums

[eddymaw]

Cheers for all the feedback everyone, decided to scrap the song unfortunately after I got bored but I've began a new one.

weedcali - Liking the claps and your automation on your drop dude! All in all sick tune, really feeling it. Percussion's nice too, but I'm not too sure about some of the crashes. The buildup in the intro is dope too.
ibscotty - The sounds you've made are dope and the tune all together is sick. Loving the mellow synth, you've made it work really nicely. Jealous actually, can't find anything wrong with anything at all.
Nicorisone - The melody's worked nicely! Definitely nearly closer to being finished, you've done it hell well.

Recent tune, hope you guy like it. Made sure it varied a bit + the sub really hasn't been successful at all. Cheers!
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[ninthy4]

@eddymaw
the pluck synth sounds off tempo at some places and add some sub! Nice drums though and I like the main idea keep it up
@NICORISONE
Deep tune, love that wah wah synth. Sub is nice, I maybe would add a really soft clicky snare with some reverb on top of the clap sick production
@alexvont12
sub is nice, cool square bass 1:55, I would lower the bitcrush effect a bit or it will sound alittle noisy and for a cleaner sound. Kick could be more distinctive, add an extra layer of kick with some mids on it!
@weedcali
very nice metallic sound on that sub wobble man, sure, the clap maybe sound alittle cheap but I like it

played with some Lamb Of God vocals last night
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[CircuitDNB]

My First Dark Tune
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[plastic_silence]

new tune
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[billuf]

@alexvont - have one of the waves in the sub an octave up, so you can hear it better, like the build up, stormin mate! could maybe do with a little more variety with the pads as well.
@eddymaw - LOVELY sounding drums - very jealous - the synth in the intro sounds a bit out in places as well
@ninthy4 - Fuckin intense my friend. those vocals work very very well with the overall style. Theres not much unfinished i can find with this track
@circuitdnb - the snare needs a bit of high end imo, maybe a bit more variety as well. Where's your feedback?
@plastic_silence - WOW. Yeah thats pretty much faultless. Theres a weird drum that seems to be a bit too wide but other than that its a beast! No feedback though.

i'm going to be really cheeky now and put up 2. only because i got this far on both at exactly the same time though. feedback for both would be much appreciated!
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before you say anything, i know i need to turn the vocals up in Roads haha

safe

[NICORISONE]

Final Product!
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[phenlight]

@billuf liking the 2nd tune.
@plastic_silence heavy bass like the contrast with the strings
@weedcali nice mellow tune love it








my wip is just sketch pad at the mo to see if i should go further
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[Voodeedoo]

@phenlight - so far so good. don't have anything to criticize yet
@billuf - love the environment and those bweep-bweep synths in the beginning :D i think the drums need some work though
@ninthy4 - very sinister; looking forward to the whole song

i here's a 2 minute demu i made an hour ago. its still a concept tho:
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[ibscotty]

hehe was too late for me to post feedback last night

@NICORISONE: Feeling this one mate, nice and deep, love the ocean pad, everything's sitting perfectly together, good work.

@alexvont12: great atmos in the intro, some serious low end, not too sure about the lead when it drops, its cool but seems a little out of place, sounds better during the second drop though.

@eddymaw: I like it, seems theres a bit of distortion later in the track when theres a lot going on, and your sub is a bit light but that can all be fixed with some eq. keep it up

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[nnny]

@ibscotty feeling this man, real chilled, but it just seems very empty. Feel's like there's something missing, but not sure what. I love what you've got so far, just wish there was something extra...

@NICORISONE I want this tune Think it's awesome, so chill! Loving the percussion. Lovely clap. Not a thing I'd change.

@plastic_silence Need to provide at least 3 feedback before posting a tune mate, but fuck this is sick. Big tune

@billuf Yeah man vocals need some work, but apart from that I really like it. Very dreamy.
The second track, the messenger, love the drums apart from the snare. Not sure, just doesn't seem to gel with the
rest to me.

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Here's what I've been working on this morning. Havn't been as much seeing as I still have no speakers or headphones, just my laptop. And it fucking sucks. I can't work on sub-basses or anything like that, so not sure how exactly its sounding. The drums were just thrown in as a basis tbh, they will be changed. There's a lot that I want to change in here, but I thought I'd throw it up and see what people think, show what I've been up to

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Peace

[plastic_silence]

sorry.. i didn't know. i'll post 6 feedback on my next tune

edit: great system btw