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Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
Hey
I need some advice on whether this sounds any good and what can be improved
thanks a lot for your time
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						I need some advice on whether this sounds any good and what can be improved
thanks a lot for your time
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				jackdude10
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Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
this is awesome, i think the track would be improved with a little less of the glitchy sounds if you know what i mean. I kind of like the sloshy flow it has for the first four bars after the drop. But then again that's preference, so if it's what you like, i thing it's perfect. keep working on it.
			
			
									
									
						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
thanks for the feedback, some solid thoughts i'll see what its like without so much glitchyness, cheersjackdude10 wrote:this is awesome, i think the track would be improved with a little less of the glitchy sounds if you know what i mean. I kind of like the sloshy flow it has for the first four bars after the drop. But then again that's preference, so if it's what you like, i thing it's perfect. keep working on it.
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				makemerich
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Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
use your sounds more sparingly. like not everything all at once.
sounds good though.
			
			
									
									sounds good though.
 
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Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
I think it's very good, then it needs some mixing and some mastering ( particularly to have puncky kicks and snares). I would add some hit hats also in order to make it lighter, but I think the melodic elements are very good to be honest!
Good work, keep me informed in pm plz! (and don't hesitate if you need help on this one)
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									Good work, keep me informed in pm plz! (and don't hesitate if you need help on this one)
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				shaneynclan
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Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
yeah this track is cool, but above is correct your bassline drowns out the percussion.
			
			
									
									
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Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
That sub bass after the drop seems to throw the key off a bit. The intro has a nice progressive feel to it. Reminds me of Deadmau5 XD Pretty nice.
			
			
									
									
						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
nice track mang.. got a flux pavilion / lil deadmau5 in there... good energy in this track
			
			
									
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						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
had to comment again.. this is the only track here on dubstep forum that i sat here and enjoied ! really really liked this track... keep working on it.. i could really here this at a club ! LOVED THE BIG INTRO then your smooooth flatline bassline...
i'm going to be a dick and not let you know what needs to be corrected. lol but youll figure it out, its your track and soo far its goin amazing
			
			
									
									i'm going to be a dick and not let you know what needs to be corrected. lol but youll figure it out, its your track and soo far its goin amazing
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						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
Sick track bro....im not really in a position to give advice as i am very new to production, but i would say some sick Hats added in would sound good imo....sounding dope though man...keep em comin!
			
			
									
									
						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
thanks a lot guys, iv read everything you've said, i'll put a revised version up soon, cheers
			
			
									
									
						Re: Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks
Your drums are getting a little buried in the mix over your main hitting synth mid-bass (the one with the formant filter on it). This is generally a problem when you add too much compression on the master track, something in your audio will duck.
I would side-chain all your sounds into groups and put compression on each of the groups ... then do a light compression on the final channel.
Lastly, I'd like to hear some variations toward the end. Resample that hook with some other filters or whatever you decide.
Anyways, hope that helps, and makes sense.
EZ.
			
			
									
									I would side-chain all your sounds into groups and put compression on each of the groups ... then do a light compression on the final channel.
Lastly, I'd like to hear some variations toward the end. Resample that hook with some other filters or whatever you decide.
Anyways, hope that helps, and makes sense.
EZ.
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