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covenant
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Need Advice From Producers PLEEEASE, thanks

Post by covenant » Fri Feb 11, 2011 6:25 pm

Hey

I need some advice on whether this sounds any good and what can be improved

thanks a lot for your time


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jackdude10
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Post by jackdude10 » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:20 pm

this is awesome, i think the track would be improved with a little less of the glitchy sounds if you know what i mean. I kind of like the sloshy flow it has for the first four bars after the drop. But then again that's preference, so if it's what you like, i thing it's perfect. keep working on it.

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Post by covenant » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:34 pm

jackdude10 wrote:this is awesome, i think the track would be improved with a little less of the glitchy sounds if you know what i mean. I kind of like the sloshy flow it has for the first four bars after the drop. But then again that's preference, so if it's what you like, i thing it's perfect. keep working on it.
thanks for the feedback, some solid thoughts i'll see what its like without so much glitchyness, cheers

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Post by makemerich » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:35 pm

use your sounds more sparingly. like not everything all at once.
sounds good though.
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Post by vyvyan » Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:49 pm

I think it's very good, then it needs some mixing and some mastering ( particularly to have puncky kicks and snares). I would add some hit hats also in order to make it lighter, but I think the melodic elements are very good to be honest!

Good work, keep me informed in pm plz! (and don't hesitate if you need help on this one)
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Post by shaneynclan » Thu Feb 17, 2011 3:06 am

yeah this track is cool, but above is correct your bassline drowns out the percussion.

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Mike Huber
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Post by Mike Huber » Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:13 am

That sub bass after the drop seems to throw the key off a bit. The intro has a nice progressive feel to it. Reminds me of Deadmau5 XD Pretty nice.

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Post by PR1NCE » Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:21 am

nice track mang.. got a flux pavilion / lil deadmau5 in there... good energy in this track
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Post by PR1NCE » Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:25 am

had to comment again.. this is the only track here on dubstep forum that i sat here and enjoied ! really really liked this track... keep working on it.. i could really here this at a club ! LOVED THE BIG INTRO then your smooooth flatline bassline...

i'm going to be a dick and not let you know what needs to be corrected. lol but youll figure it out, its your track and soo far its goin amazing
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Post by EFEKZ » Thu Feb 17, 2011 4:35 am

Sick track bro....im not really in a position to give advice as i am very new to production, but i would say some sick Hats added in would sound good imo....sounding dope though man...keep em comin!

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Post by covenant » Fri Feb 18, 2011 12:03 am

thanks a lot guys, iv read everything you've said, i'll put a revised version up soon, cheers

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Post by subfreq » Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:21 am

Your drums are getting a little buried in the mix over your main hitting synth mid-bass (the one with the formant filter on it). This is generally a problem when you add too much compression on the master track, something in your audio will duck.
I would side-chain all your sounds into groups and put compression on each of the groups ... then do a light compression on the final channel.
Lastly, I'd like to hear some variations toward the end. Resample that hook with some other filters or whatever you decide.
Anyways, hope that helps, and makes sense.
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