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[FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Post by stimulation » Fri Feb 18, 2011 6:06 am

Here's new tune.... Let me know what you think?

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Post by subfreq » Fri Feb 18, 2011 7:01 am

Okay I will be straight up ... you have a long way before you post on forums. Don't stop producing ... keep it up. EZ.

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Post by stimulation » Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:16 pm

In reference to dubstep I guess your right... Been producing other genres for years... I can't compare to any of your work so let me know what is exactly missing from the track so i can get better... Pe@ce...
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Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Post by Borderline » Fri Feb 18, 2011 3:48 pm

this is quite funky,
im feelin it . Gj
I would of made the instrument in the intro a little bit less static .. otherwise its pretty groovy =)

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Post by stimulation » Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:02 pm

Thanks for the feedback!!!!
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Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Post by mimosa » Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:43 pm

I think you need to eq better and have more separation among the sounds. Good stuff. Check me out ....
http://www.dubstepforum.com/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=185024

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Post by stimulation » Sun Feb 20, 2011 6:23 pm

Thanks for the advice!!!!!
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Post by paravrais » Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:05 pm

stimulation wrote:In reference to dubstep I guess your right... Been producing other genres for years... I can't compare to any of your work so let me know what is exactly missing from the track so i can get better... Pe@ce...
I'd say in terms of production overall. Just cos you've been doing something a long time doesn't mean your necessarily good at it. Don't wanna come accross as too harsh but I always have to be honest with my feedback. I felt like your mixdown was *really* poor. Levels and EQ were all over the place, drums had no punch and lacked groove, synthesis on the bassline (and most things) was boring and muddy. Melodies weren't up to scratch either. I'd say do some research into how to make a more polished mixdown, synthesis and also look into some musical theory. I find scales like harmonic minors, lydian, natural minor etc are good for dubstep :)

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Re: [FEEDBACK]Blank - Lurk [call it what you will]

Post by stimulation » Mon Feb 21, 2011 1:02 am

paravrais wrote:I'd say in terms of production overall. Just cos you've been doing something a long time doesn't mean your necessarily good at it. Don't wanna come accross as too harsh but I always have to be honest with my feedback. I felt like your mixdown was *really* poor. Levels and EQ were all over the place, drums had no punch and lacked groove, synthesis on the bassline (and most things) was boring and muddy. Melodies weren't up to scratch either. I'd say do some research into how to make a more polished mixdown, synthesis and also look into some musical theory. I find scales like harmonic minors, lydian, natural minor etc are good for dubstep :)
First off there's nothing worse than a personal opinon clouding a simple response. Frankly, You are entitled to feel & say what ever you wish. Keep it simple & focus on the track please. Thanks for the feedback btw... I didn't ask about what you felt about me as a producer at all. I'm asking for feedback on the track & that's it. Thanks for taking your time to listen to my track.....
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