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[FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by Body without Organs » Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:35 pm

i'm a fairly new producer; this isn't my first track but it is the first i think might be good enough to submit to you guys. any comment or feedback however general would be greatly appreciated.

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if you're interested you can hear the rest of my tunes at my youtube channel:

http://www.youtube.com/user/BwOdubstep

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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark

Post by ephyks » Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:47 pm

Ya know. It's not that bad, actually, rather good. You have a lot of interesting sounds in there, and I respect the beat. Though, the bassline/wobble lacked a lot of definition. There are a lot of things to be fixed but I think you've got a bangin' track here mate.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark

Post by Body without Organs » Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:38 pm

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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark

Post by Body without Organs » Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:27 pm

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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by 3za » Fri Mar 04, 2011 1:47 am

Yeah solid work for someone who just started out.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by fragments » Fri Mar 04, 2011 3:52 am

Agreed with these folks, possibility for a solid tune here. I like the energy/tension. Strings are nicely epic. The hihats don't sound near as groovy in the beginning when the beat is lacking the ghost snares/stick percussion hits. But the percussion gets well funky later on though. Drums are lacking the primary kick and snare could use a tad more punch/snap.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by eddymaw » Fri Mar 04, 2011 5:41 am

Ah mate the tune you got going on here is pretty dope. Only thing I would comment on is the snare and highhats at the beginning of the tune, snare's lacking the punch and the highhats sort of don't blend in properly + try a different beat arrangement. Enjoying the bass too, something different! Good idea, fuckin sick. Keep it up

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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by nitzdaking » Fri Mar 04, 2011 11:55 am

feeling this
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by Body without Organs » Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:06 pm

cheers for the advice everyone
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)

Post by makerowner » Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:24 pm

I clicked on this cause of the name. Deleuze & Guattari ftw! I always wanted to use 'Bodies without Organs' as a track title, too late now I guess.
This isn't really my style of dubstep, so I don't have much to say, except that I'd like to hear more of a bassline, I mean the bass playing a line instead of one note.

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