[FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
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[FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
i'm a fairly new producer; this isn't my first track but it is the first i think might be good enough to submit to you guys. any comment or feedback however general would be greatly appreciated.
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Last edited by Body without Organs on Thu Mar 03, 2011 10:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark
Ya know. It's not that bad, actually, rather good. You have a lot of interesting sounds in there, and I respect the beat. Though, the bassline/wobble lacked a lot of definition. There are a lot of things to be fixed but I think you've got a bangin' track here mate.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
Yeah solid work for someone who just started out.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
cool tune !
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
Agreed with these folks, possibility for a solid tune here. I like the energy/tension. Strings are nicely epic. The hihats don't sound near as groovy in the beginning when the beat is lacking the ghost snares/stick percussion hits. But the percussion gets well funky later on though. Drums are lacking the primary kick and snare could use a tad more punch/snap.
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
Ah mate the tune you got going on here is pretty dope. Only thing I would comment on is the snare and highhats at the beginning of the tune, snare's lacking the punch and the highhats sort of don't blend in properly + try a different beat arrangement. Enjoying the bass too, something different! Good idea, fuckin sick. Keep it up
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
cheers for the advice everyone
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Re: [FEEDBACK] BwO - Journey To The End Of The Night (dark)
I clicked on this cause of the name. Deleuze & Guattari ftw! I always wanted to use 'Bodies without Organs' as a track title, too late now I guess.
This isn't really my style of dubstep, so I don't have much to say, except that I'd like to hear more of a bassline, I mean the bass playing a line instead of one note.
This isn't really my style of dubstep, so I don't have much to say, except that I'd like to hear more of a bassline, I mean the bass playing a line instead of one note.
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