dubmatters wrote:makerowner wrote:Maybe you could post one of your tunes that you find repetitive and people could give specific suggestions. It's hard to say 'in general' what would make a tune interesting.
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Maybe just a lack of creativity?

I just now actually listened to this. I have to say, I like it, but it goes no where. That static style of songwriting is a slippery slope because you basically have to make it totally awesome, or it's boring. What you have here is a really solid little lick, but to break it up, you should at least put a second, totally different lick in there somewhere. Add a transition in the middle that leads to something in a different key or just with a totally different feel, then smoothly bring it back to the starting lick by the end to wrap the whole thing together. I spent a lot of years writing music with vocals before I started doing stuff like this, and with vocals, people notice a lot faster if you're song never changes, so you have to have verse sections, chorus sections, bridge sections, etc. etc. otherwise people get bored. Try thinking of your stuff the same way. Even if there's no words, make "verses" and make a "chorus" and a "bridge" etc.
Sometimes, I will write a lick that I really like, and I'll want to have the whole song just be done because I like that one lick so much. So I copy and paste it a bunch of times and change a little bit over the tune, and try to call it done. It's an easy temptation to fall into when you're in the throes of elation from discovery of an awesome tune, but it's a red herring, because when you go back to listen to it, that awesome lick loses all effectiveness after 3 minutes.
No matter how hard it is, try just cutting a swath out of the middle of this tune and writing something completely different in there.