Iv changed bits and pieces like little breakdowns etc. But i would just like to know what else i can do to improve it.
The tune is in my signature below.
All feedback and comments will be very much appreciated and returned.
Thanks in advance
Darkside (WIP)
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jak-a-tron
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Darkside (WIP)
So iv decided to go back and finish off a project i started quite a while ago now.
Iv changed bits and pieces like little breakdowns etc. But i would just like to know what else i can do to improve it.
The tune is in my signature below.
All feedback and comments will be very much appreciated and returned.
Thanks in advance
Iv changed bits and pieces like little breakdowns etc. But i would just like to know what else i can do to improve it.
The tune is in my signature below.
All feedback and comments will be very much appreciated and returned.
Thanks in advance
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jak-a-tron
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Re: Darkside (WIP)
Anyone? 
Even if you listened and think its shit
I would just like to know what i could change/improve.
Even if you listened and think its shit
I would just like to know what i could change/improve.
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syrup
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Re: Darkside (WIP)
Not bad, i like the part at circa 1:40, when the Lfo switches...
i´d try to chuckle a little more aggy or varied synth sound on the second drop, the track sounds a bit repetitive
and it needs more weight i think, a bit lower and more powerful sub.
maybe try to come up with a little chord riff or some atmospheres.
overally i´m feeling it, nice job!
if you´re sending out 320´s i´ll be definitely interested when it´s finished
i´d try to chuckle a little more aggy or varied synth sound on the second drop, the track sounds a bit repetitive
and it needs more weight i think, a bit lower and more powerful sub.
maybe try to come up with a little chord riff or some atmospheres.
overally i´m feeling it, nice job!
if you´re sending out 320´s i´ll be definitely interested when it´s finished
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Re: Darkside (WIP)
For that kind of bassline repetition can be kinda harsh on the ears. I find myself getting bored quick. Keep me hooked bruv. I think production is nice but the sub could be a bit punchier...its a little fat at the moment and just swells. Keep it up though. Still got me bobbin
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